DARK KNIGHT-A SwaSan FF-T4-DELETED-AN PG1- Creations-Pgs 98/9 - Page 19

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Shru🤗🤗

Lucky my lovely 🤗 x 10

For this comment multiple hugs as I read it last night and it made my weekend! Seriously- such lovely excitement and appreciation for DK! ❤️

Now I know Y all DK fans were saying I am dead after 27 ..😆 It rang warning bells in my head that I would be caught either jumping with happiness in my office midst of all madness guiving wrong ideas to people ya would be blushing like beet root( btw you made me do both of them)😆..good I paid attention to warning bells😆 that I should reserve it for my weekend but I admit I cheated ok .sneaking to read bits here and there and then pulling back myself .touture it was.but yes finally and you lady ..murderer..you seriously want to kill readers with happiness and send them to heaven by pouring your brilliance into words and penning it down so so beautifully ..add one more dead to your list😆😆 officially and tats me me me😳😆 Ok Jokes apart

😆😆 Honestly, I even commented myself at first that literally almost all the initial reactions were just- I am dead or I am dead in SwaSan heaven or both 😆. It was a nice feeling though as clearly everyone felt the chapter worth feeling so passionately about 😳. And as for the blushing that went with it- I think it was the hazard of this chapter - think of me having to write it 😳😆. I love your story of how you were impatient to read it and sneaked a few peeps but were saving it - mmmwah!!!

What the hell did i just read ..Is it all real ..I am like that lost soul wandering ki ye sach hain ya sapna ..ye kya ho raha hain ..haila ..Can I say I love u..so much and so much .❤️.loads and loads for this beautiful heart pounding and an update which made me dance like jumping jhapak😆

Awww- love you lots too honey! And honestly am so touched at this reaction I don't know what to say!! 😳😳 I am just over the moon that you loved it so much!!!

Ahh my sanskaar ..Dark knight finally arrived in his shining Armour for his princess..this man got a way of getting things done ..woh bhi apne style main,seedhi baat no bakwaas.⭐️.this gotta be best proposal ..wah mere hero ..⭐️⭐️ AND thank god ..swara said she ant to marry her knight ..instaed running away from there( I know my tv& filmi dimaag😆), of course I didnt mind her doing that after saying her decision😳 ..

Sanskaar is so dreamy no? He knows when to be charging in and being all demanding and controlling but also when to totally restrain himself for his Princess- I love this man ❤️. Haan, I wanted this very direct and strong approach but without looking like a brat that Lakshya had done. And for Swara- it was necessary she said too what she wants, even for herself- she needed to see that when it came to it she cannot stay apart from him but also that she won't insult him by turning him down or choose anyone else 😳. I told you, I like filmy in very limited dosages and I made her run away so they could have a private confession 😆 but no overt filminess for DK 😃

and then comes .. hayee hayee main marjaava ..❤️..I knew when confession is gonna happen its going to be EPIC and it was .. every line..every word reading it was such a bliss dearie..I read it like umptyeen time but stull dil maange more and after that ..*cough* ..Ok I dont mind being besharam ..hawwt it was☺️ yet so endearing ..I am gonna kill word beautiful today ..You captured their emotions , that longing, the sexual tension, love, desire and sheer happiness they were sharing into such a lovely piece of writing ..This part is EPIC in journey of DK .

☺️☺️☺️ I don't think I should say much myself. I am so so pleased you felt all those emotions coming through. I just feel so much passion and longing but all from their pure and almost spiritual love which makes the physical expression just the natural result of that. I was worried about having that expressed in the right way but the reactions have reassured me so much and perhaps will make me braver to share more in the future? 😉. And for calling it epic- mmmwaah!

God .. I am so so happy reading this one 😛😛 thank you for one fantastic khantanstic beautiful update 👏👏👏 Shru ⭐️.⭐️.👏👍🏼

Ignoring side characters for time being😆😆..you know who I mean I cant see anyone else than my cuties

In totally love ❤️ with DK

Lucky

I am so overwhelmed with your wonderful reaction Lucky- it truly makes me feel how much you love DK and that for me is the best feeling in the world!! Makes it all worthwhile and wants to make me continue to ensure I give you all an ending that will hopefully be memorable! So the thanks goes to you guys not to me 😳😃

PS; Get well soon yaar 😊😛 btw I think this is my longest comment on DK ..just happened😆 and please ignore typos😉

And the comment made me dance with joy so please feel free to post as long and as detailed whenever you feel like it!!! Thanks for the get well wishes xoxo

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Res...im officially dead now...

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Shuruu darling...😉

Taallliaaa sweetheart 🤗

As i said im dead..🤢.i maintain that...this is not me but a swasan maniac zombie replying to u..😆..wanting to tell u dear chapter 27 was mesmerizing n enchanting...sigh...

Ahhh- no no don't be dead hon, stay very much alive so I can keep getting such lovely reactions from you and feel so happy and float away in my little SwaSan heaven with you all 😃. So glad you feel this way about 27!

Coming to part 1...ragini n swara confrontation...ragini i detest this women😡...so shameless n taunting her sister...ahhh😡 but was glad that swara is changed...she is now much bold n determined..😊.loved how she given her back...👏

I wanted Ragini to get two metaphorical slaps in this chapter. She got one from the put down from Swara and then the better one was watching how Sanskaar claimed his Princess and everyone agreed and when he smiled at her sarcastically 😈

Her nervousness n confusion to face prince sansku was soo apt..n then he enters...😕

Part 2 was full of excitement...👏

Never thought sansku would take such a bold step..n ask for swara's hand ...he was sooo determined n firm in his decision...loved his logical answers ...his hidden threats n pleads...😃😉

Happy that sensible people were present..after intial hesitation.. 😕denials from suju n few others..dp n annapoorna take matter in their control n deciding to ask the to be bride to whom she wants to wed.?😕..my heart was literally thudding that time.😲..n then she said prince sansku...😊it was such a relieve i tell u...my heart is quite vulnerable after chapter 26..😭.this answer by swara was good for my health...n she ran after that...oky.

Yes you were all very fragile after 26 and I knew that no one expected that this would happen so quick and like this but I like to tease and keep you all on your toes 😉😈. I wanted a mega impactful scene where Sanskaar would show once more why he is the hero we all love. I wanted him balanced but angry and yet firm without descending to cheap drama. I sort of crafted the scene with Swara accepting to confuse a little as to whether she would refuse for the sake of her family but when it came to it, it was always to be Sanskaar and no one else, even if that meant choosing him over her family, like Sanskaar openly did her. 😳

But the most hilarious scene was sansku reply that if his demand is not full filled he will kidnap her again...i waslaughing soo much at this...😆

That was my personal favourite bit in that part 😃

Saamvant ranjit was a surprise..i was thinking he would protest n infuture will take revenge for his humiliation..😕but he took it soo nicely..n hinted about both being in love..he is a wise man..😊.soo all things clear without bloodshed n fight...im glad...😃

Yes Ranjit bowed out gracefully. Whether he will hold a grudge and be back later remains to be seen 😉 but for now we had enough drama and I didn't want any useless fights or anything as anyway Sanskaar would have won that like Ranjit said 😉

Part 3...

Firstly want to tell u ..my dirty mind read whole update 3 to 4 times n part 3 icant eventell u.. i reread it soo many times..ahem ahem...😳

Arrey no dirty mind- I am glad you read multiple times 😳 We are all SwaSan obsessed and the physical expression of their love too is natural and nothing that we should be ahem, feel bad about!? 😉😳😳

It was sooo beautifull ...all misunderstanding clears...there confession was ethreal...was dancing..blushing hard till the end...loved it muahhh..best update...👏😳

Awww- thank you!!! So very happy you loved it!!

Will wait for next installment...😃😆

I meant to write today but my weekend has been so busy and also still tired from my illness. I am better but still a lot of pain from my hurt muscles . I'll work on 28 in the week 😊

Hope ur wellnow???😊

Lots of love nhugs...

Talia😃

Love and hugs and kisses back!

Originally posted by: NitaReid

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Dearest Shruti,

I would like to once again say sorry for the late comment and since i know you would understand i will stop with just one for my sake and not fill the pages with my apologies.

Nita dearest 🤗

No apologies remember? But if it makes you feel better, all I'll say it totally understand and am so thrilled to read this set of lovely comments on what I know was a difficult chapter for you all emotionally 😊

Chapter 26

You know when you get so invested in an story , it really make you feel so many emotions when you read chapter like 26 and that was my case, if i hadnt read the next one by now, i wouldnt have been able to express my thought on this chapter with clear mind as most of my words to would be jumbled words our of sheer sadness.

That is what I love about my DK family as I call us all.You guys genuinely buy into this hypothetical world I have created. It's very real to me of course but you all make me feel that it is equally important and real to you all too and there is no greater compliment for a writer really 😳. I am glad I helped mitigate the pain with 27 and the balance is restored! 😊

Now that i have read the next one, my mind is even ready to find the awesome moments in chapter 26 and appreciate it. Let start with part 1 shall we, it was a perfect start, Sanskar getting the honour he so deserves , so did Pawan and Swara. And i totally loved how Swara and Sanskar both had eyes on each other only.

Thanks so much Nita! It means a lot when you say the moments were awesome to you!

You know in DK i really appreciate Janki so much more than Sharmistha. Her acts and the way she handles the situation make me admire her more , first i used to admire AP when she stood up to kaveri and stood beside Sanskar. Now i admire Janki for her thoughtful way of dealing with Swara . And i was truly surprised that the whole family hoped Sanskar would ask for Swara hand . If only Swara let Sanskar ask his father for her hand, but if she did i wouldnt have gotten the awesome proposal in chapter 27 .So i take this angst for now with patience not really but because i already know everything will work out in the end.

Janaki is a queen as much as Annapurna is. Sharmistha is not a political person as such. Her own life was very differently spent before she became bound to Shekhar and even after she did, she had to spend that on the fringes. She says something in 27 you will have noticed which might explain this further. The obvious answer for the Gadodias would have been for Sanskaar to have made good the damage with marriage but they feared that since Swara's reputation was ruined, he would be entitled to turn away and they didn't have the position to force him as they are after all in a much more inferior position to the Maheshwaris. Delicate balance of politics and power mixed with double standards . And yes I wanted Sanskaar to ask in a really memorable way 😉

You know how much i can find all the scene which provided angst in the when i read it the first time, now provide me with so much awesome and poigant moments. I love part 2. The first time i read it i was like why did Janki enter this moment . But not now, i truly liked Sanskar going as far as the extent to meet Swara. I would have hated the guy who asked for Swara hand ,but since he backed off now. I am going to let it slide as well.

Ahhh glad you liked that scene. That is what I said the other day, when delivering updates in instalments it is difficult for people to keep in perspective that things could highly change from one to the next although I know too that it is not like that in every story. Most times after a chapter like 26 it would be unlikely to keep that angst and pain only for that one chapter but that is nevertheless what I wanted 😃

And i am back to admire AP in the last part, I am so glad she understood Sanskar.. And you did end it in a cliffhanger that scared me the most, especially thorowing line like War and how impossible it is for Shekhar to go back on his word. Since everything worked out fine later. I have to say i really liked part 3 too. Since Sanskar got to know about it and we all know how he reacted after hearing it..While chapter 26 did made me sad the first time i read it , when i read it again to give my comment , i really enjoyed reading it. I think my love for Swara and Sanskar made it impossible for me not to be sad about the chapter the first time. You are really an awesome writer Shruti..Will comment on my favourite chapter of DK asap. I want to give it an detailed comment as well since the chapter deserves it so very much.

I thought the best person for Sanskaar to confide in would be Annapurna. However she wasn't able to help him and threw him the curve ball which forced his hand. I did leave it hanging as you say with everyone assuming the worst with thinking Swara would have to be forced to wed Ranjit or at least util the last minute it would go that way. I totally relate to what you say about being so attached to characters and stories that their pain becomes really "real" and actually causes pain and turmoil. As I said above, to me, a huge compliment so I thank you sincerely for that! And you are way too kind about my writing abilities but am so grateful and humbled 😳😳. I'll very much look forward to your views on 27 😳. Thanks again Nita!

Love

Nita

Originally posted by: Sree8410

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Originally posted by: Nynaeve

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Dear Shru,</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Finally unres for Chapter 27 on page 12.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">love,</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Nyna</font>

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Nita dearest, your lovely comment improved my day! I'll respond to you and others who are still pending too. Am just madly busy at work and working after on 28 so as soon as I can finish 28 and post I'll catch up with all the new replies. Thanks so much in the meantime! xoxo