The chapter 27 is one of the most important and beautiful chapter.
The title Blissful follies was nice. And the quote from pride and prejudice was also gave a awesome beginning.
Glad you loved 27 and felt it is the highlight of DK 😃. Thanks for appreciating the title and quote- I was finding it hard to find something that matched the different parts of the chapter 😊
In the part first, it was swara centered.
The conversation between swara and ragini was needed.
Ragini betrayed her sister for her so called love, for that she spoiled her sisters reputation. Swara became characterless for the people.
Ragini congratulated swara for her engagement. How can she do like that?
She is not the old ragini, who only knew to love everyone.
She is a witch who only smile on her sisters tears.
After hearing ragini's words swara lost her patience.
And she gave a good reply.
Ragini didn't realize that sanskar loves swara.
Ragini's words was unbearable.
Because of her today her sister is facing all this. And she had no regrets for her doings.
She became selfish.
And swara was affected by her words.
Indeed- Ragini was being vindictive but I wanted Swara to give it back nicely and she did. Of course by the end the best reply was given to Ragini by Sanskaar as she would't have guessed how Sanskaar would handle the whole thing.
And at the function, all were really happy. But swara was a volcano.
And she was trying to hide her feelings.
Sujatha was looking bride for her son. And it was a painful thing for swara.
She tried to control her jealousy.
The second part was awesome.
In the beginning of this update, I was little confused,
What will happen next?
Sanskar entered the hall and he looked her for some time and he looked away.
At that moment swara was shattered, she can't bear his ignorance.
Durgaprasad asked that, he will gave him what he what?
Sanskar asked swara's hand for marriage.
It was a surprise for me.
I knew most would have never thought after 26 and the way the internal MU had played out before then this would happen so soon but that is what I wanted to do. Bring it to that rising pitch before ending that on a (hopefully) high note. I wanted Sanskaar's whole style to be dramatic but effective and not juvenile 😊
After reading the chapter 26, I lost the hope. But this part gave me a new ray of hope.
The sequence was nice.
Sanskar's words were heart touching.
Sanskar promised that swara will have every honour as his wife, no one will dare ever disrespect her. And he will stand as her shield.
Swara is a blessed woman. Because she got a partner who knew to respect woman and understand her feelings.
Sujatha tried to stop sanskar, but ramprasad support his son. And laksh also supported sanskar. It was a unpredictable turn.
I wanted to be very clear that Sanskaar will so what he wants here and at one point I deliberately made him say that if he needs to he would remove Swara from there to protect her and ensure she isn't disrespected. Even his mother had to be put in her place. I cannot stand men who won't fight when needed for their wives- and Sanskaar won't just talk about love, he will fulfil it 😃
While reading this part, I was worried for Ranjit's reaction.
What will his reaction?
Atlast the chance was on swara's hand, to decide her future. And she selected her love, her life, sanskar.
And she ran away from there.
It was a beautiful moment.
And after hearing Swara's decision, sanskar's reply was awesome. Anyone tried to harm this relationship he will kidnap her. And he challenged them too.
And ranjit also surprised me. Firstly he argued, but atlast he realized that sanskar loves swara and he changed his decision.
I had intended that there wouldn't be some sort of war or fight with Ranjit- no one could have stood before Sanskaar anyway but even Ranjit- he wasn't going to do other than back off there. But I saw how Ranjit got such relations it made me actually worry that if DK readers got him they'd lynch him 😆
The third part, I must say it was beautiful and one of my favorite part in the whole story.
Well written my friend
The mutual confession of swasan was included in this part.
In the water chamber swara was thinking about the present condition. Sanskar was searching her and worried about her answer.
Swara was angry on him. Because for her, he was spoiling his future by marrying her.
They had a small argument.
The much awaited mutual confession was a beautiful moment.
They cleared all the misunderstanding.
And shared a passionate kiss.
I am so thrilled you loved the 3rd part and their mutual confusion as well as their growing intimacy so much 😳 I see their journey of love as so special this felt fitting for them when they finally told each other and showed each other how they felt 😳
The update was awesome. All the three parts were needed. Each sentence was apt. It was a rainbow, filled with the beautiful seven colours.
It was a rain on desert. The much awaited rain, cool the mind.
In the part one, I felt bad for swara. Ragini is a selfish character. And swara is facing the problems, she is a victim for her sisters wrong doings.
But in the my tears changed into smile.
The life will change it in a second. The tragedy will happen in a second.
And sometimes we lost our hope.
But some people fight against there condition and they will won over fate.
Sanskar's life is like this.
His life also changed in a second. He was a hero. But some one's cruel game changed his fate. He named as a traitor. But he fight against his fate.
Swara came his life as a ray of light.
With her companionship he fight against all the odd.
He was blessed with good friends too.
And in the end he proved his innocence.
But when swara rejected his love, he was shattered.
But he always loved her and atlast he got his love.
Their true love won against all the odds.
Thanks a lot for this awesome update
Waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
Thank you Saakiyah for the beautiful words and the way you summed up not just the chapter but the whole of SwaSan's journey in DK to date above in that section 😃 So perfectly described 👏👏. It genuinely made me so happy that you felt it worthy and that it moved you so much. Thanks for having been part of the journey from the beginning!!
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