SwaSan TS: FATE( completed -page 7)

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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

awesome..

loved the part ...

sanskar vist for swara t oindia..

swara opening her to sanskar..

loved it..

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Dear...lekah

Fantastic update...swara past was painful ..but it was sooo nice to read how he slowly n gradually made her forget her past..n start living her present n future...loved sansku care .love n patience...

Great work...update more

Talia

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isaritha

@isaritha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Amazing 👏

Loved every bit of the story

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kaa1202

@kaa1202

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Awesome writing Lekah..

It was a nice concept & u executed it well...

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ANSHEL

@ANSHEL

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

u nailed it d ay a happy ending shud be luvvv u

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Very nice story Lekha...

Read both parts in one go. Trust ne it was really very nice. Slow yet steady progression of their bond and last past was nicely written.

Indeed awesome story!😊

👏👏👏👏

stay blessed

MUKTA😊

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Teddy94

@Teddy94

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Superb update leku...

Sanskar came to India for Swara 😳

Swara opened up her heart for Sanskar... N he is so caring...

Her past was painful bt Sanskar made her forget it...

Loved the ts...

Do Write more...😊

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Leku brillian concept and excellent execution.
keep writing more dear.
Love u.

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

superb update
beautifully written... loved it

thnks for pm

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lekahravi

@lekahravi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...
Res.. Me first again...

Unres...

Lekha.. 🤗 ... Very emotional one... Awesome part sissy...

Swaras past was worse one... Soo much of betrayal and loneliness... 😭 ... It's nice how Sanskaar slowly invade in her life and made it as a heaven... 👏 .. Their future was soo good...

Loved it...

Love you...