RagLak SS: 'Main Karoon Intazaar Tera' epilogue page 14 no p - Page 5

Originally posted by: sudhi03

Shirisha lovely update

Loving laksh so much

I hope ragini forgives him soon

RagYa are so adorable😳

Thank you

Me loving Laksh too😳

I hope the same😆

RagYa always adorable😊

Originally posted by: wayback

Hey..
It was a awesome part..
Loved it to core..
Waiting for part 2...
Loved Raglak love hate relationship in your story

Thanks a lot😳

Porkalai2892, souhasini, mansinarang95, dewcute,
Senoritaamor, sudhi03, Shinning_AD,


Thank you Guys,,

Dialogues are also in English because I got a request from one of the readers for this.

Happy Reading

Part 3

Days passed and Swasan and Raglak decided to go out for fun... they hired a bus and visited many places in London.. When it came to go home, every one boarded the bus. Just when Ragini was about to climb, the bus moved and she fell down. All came to her and Laksh shouted at the driver. Sanskaar said him to calm down and take Ragini to hospital. Doctor says she's fine but needs complete bed rest coz it was a severe sprain. All came home. Ragini was coming holding Swara's hand but became unbalance and was about to fall, but Laksh supports her. They had a eye lock till Swara cleared her throat. Laksh took her to room and made her sit on bed.

Laksh: u want something?

Ragini: ah...

Laksh: juice?

Ragini: I...

Laksh: Let me bring it...

He leaves.

Ragini was confused.

Night

Ragini opens her eyes and sees Laksh sitting on the table, keeping her head on the bed, beLakshe her, sleeping. She got up tried to get off the bed when Laksh's sleep got disturbed.

Laksh: what?

Ragini: wo...

Laksh: yeah... what?

Ragini: washroom...

Laksh: I'll take u...

He helps her and she gets off the bed but could nt walk. It was paining.

Ragini: aaahhh!!!!!!!!Its paining... I can't walk!

Laksh: Ragini.. At least try...

Ragini: I can't!

Laksh thinks something and holds her in arms and takes to the washroom.

Laksh: knock when u r finished... I am waiting outLakshe...

Laksh again picks her in arms when she comes out and puts on the bed. Ragini tells her to sleep promising she would wake him up when she need something. Laksh takes a pillow and lies on the sofa.

Ragini{in mind}: I can't understand what is the truth... what Lakshya is doing today that, or what he did 3 years back?? If he loved me, then why couldn't he wait?? His 1 decision spoiled everything. If he had bothered to wait, then the situation could have been something else today... Do ypou really love me? Or you are just doing all this, coz u want to show Swara and Sanskaar that u care for me and I don't????

She closes her eyes. Laksh opens his.

Laksh{in mind}: I know Ragini u don't trust me today.. You must be confused, is it true, false or... strange... but.. It's all true! I... I really care for u... and believe me, I wanted to wait, but it could have been very late... I don't just want to be near you, but with you Ragini... but I can't tell you the truth also...I know you still love me, and always be.. But u will never express... Because perhaps, you will never forgive me!!

Morning

Laksh comes inLakshe the room and sees Ragini trying to get off from bed.

Laksh{going to her}: hi! U cheat... u promised u would...

Ragini ignores so he stops..

Laksh: u want something?

Ragini(in a dim voice): not ur help at least!

Laksh: what?

Ragini: nothing.

Laksh: let me help u...

He bends down.

Ragini: don't show ur fake concern!

Laksh: Ragini...

Ragini: No need to show off Lakshji, I can manage!

Laksh: Ragini, I care for u..

Swara comes to the door.

Ragini: Care? Lakshji, if you really care for me, then u mustn't have spoiled my life!

Laksh: me???

Ragini: Yes you.. I also had some dreams... some ambitions. I also wanted to do something, Be something, but ur this decision of marriage, spoiled everything, spoiled my life! And I? I became dependent on u..

Laksh: but I have never let u complain, u have got everything u needed...

Ragini: right! But what's the advantage? When I do not have a real identity??? I wanted to be Ragini Maheswari , your wifewife Laksh, But not, Ragini Lakshya Maheswari, a deal! I wanted to be your wife Lakshya, wife!

Both had tears.. Laksh turns his face and Ragini keeps her head on his shoulder crying.

Laksh sees Swara coming in with anger. He signals her to go back. She stops. He signals again. She turns and leaves.

Laksh: Ragini, can u answer my one question?

She stands straight.

Ragini: what?

Laksh: (facing her) can we be ever together???

Ragini leaves crying.

Swara enters Sanskaar room and sits on bed.

Sanskaar: woaw! What happened?

Swara: Sanskaar...

Laksh: Swara...

Swara: you... (Goes to him) why did you stop me? Why didn't let me tell?

Laksh: You will not tell her anything Swara!

Swara: but...

Sanskaar: guys guys!! What's the matter?

She tells him everything.

Sanskaar: Laksh... this time Swara is right...

Laksh: Sanskaar at least u...

Sanskaar: Laksh, if she did not know the truth, then she will misunderstand you whole life

Laksh: And if she really got to know the truth, her whole life will be dependent on me ... which I do not want.

Swara: but Laksh...

Laksh: Swara! After knowing the truth of marriage, whatever she would do for me would simply be the favor of unloading ...And I did not do him any favors on her marrying her. She is my life...

Swara: But if it turns out later, she will feel the embarrassed.

Laksh: That's why don't tell her anything.. Now whatever she do for me does at least with the urge of the heart ... And if she is in my destiny... If I have to spend my whole life with her, she herself would come to me.

Sanskaar: you mean, you will not give in?

Laksh: I told na Sanskaar, if my love is true,.. She herself would come to me.

Sanskaar: this much self control???? How long will you wait?

Laksh: Forever...!

Swasan: Till the End??

Laksh looks at them smiling; they see them in a proud and loving and admiring expression.

To be continued...

Love,

Shirisha😊

Really too good n ur just fab dear plz continue soon thanks for pm :)

Hey shiri, it was simply brilliant out standing mind blowing n what not..
God u stole me..jz update fast...net slow so can't comment a longer one...pardon me for that

Nice update

Laksh is so caring...so gentle

Lovely update

Awesome update.