RagLak SS: 'Main Karoon Intazaar Tera' epilogue page 14 no p - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Superb start

Feeling so bad for laksh

Please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
damn interesting
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2

Next morning RagLak were in Dining Table when the bell ringed. Servant opened the door and they were just surprised to see Swara and Sanskaar. RagLak came to know that SwaSan were supposed to give surprise on the anniversary but their flight was delayed. They came in and got freshened up. After sometime they went on gossiping. Swaragini got a room and there, Sanlak got another.

Swara tells Ragini to tell about her and Lakshya. As they didn't know that RagLak knew each other before marriage. SwaSan were sure, there must be something between them all time. This was the chance they could know everything about their life before marriage. They asked them. RagLak were very lonely after marriage, coz they shifted London leaving everyone in India. This was the first time SwaSan were visiting them. So they wanted to spend as much as time they could with them. They agreed.

Ragini: thik hai. Start se start kar ti hun. Jab maine unhe pehli baar dekha tha. Main school me corridor par walk kar rahi thi, aur achanak, kisine ne mujhe ghuma kar niche gira diya. aur mere upar aa gaya. I was, lost in his eyes. And suddenly, apne skul ka bada sa bell gir gaya. Then I realized, usne mujhe bacha liya warna main toh bell k niche hi aa jaati. Main uski aankhon me kho gayi, dil me butterfly waali feeling ho rahi thi. I crushed on him. My first attraction, my first crush!

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Laksh: Bell gira, toh pure school mw panic fail gaya. Sab yahan wahan bhag rahe the. Lekin main, I not just only fell upon her, but also fell for her. Fell in her love. Par isse pehle ki koi hume kuchal de, we got up. Lekin bhag daud me, hum bichad gaye. Edhar udhar ankh ghumayi... then u know what? Then happened the most beautiful moment of my life, jab wo mujhe dikhi, she was too looking at me! Affairs toh bahut hue, par pyar, pyar shayad pehli baar hua tha. My first feeling, my first love!

Then he looked at Sanskaar, He was looking at him keeping his hand on his cheeks.

Laksh: Tu mujhe aise kyun dekh raha hai?

Sanskaar: itna pyar karta hai tu usse?

Laksh: mm.. sayad.

Sanskaar: aur bata, Shaadi k baad sab thik...

Laksh: kuch b thik nahi hua hai Sanskaar, main aaj b uske intazaar main hoon. Paas rehkar b aaj b hum door hain.

Sanskaar: u mean Ragini abtak tujhse naraaz hai?

Laksh: Haan.

Sanskaar: kyun zee raha hai aisi zindagi? Kyun nahi kar deta use iss rishte se aazaad?

Laksh: Nahi kar sakta. Mere uss ek decision ne sabkuch barbaad kar diya, Ragini ne padhai chod di, Shaadi ki, aur apna desh chodkar yahan aa gayi, London, sirf mere liye, just coz, I m her husband. Aur upar se, uske mom dad b nahi rahe, jayegi kahan? Issliye main chahkar b use nahi kar sakta aazaad!

Sanskaar: Kab tak intazaar karega Laksh?

Lakshya: Forever, till the end.

Sanskaar Sighs.

Sanskaar: Fine me now,,, how was your first hug...?

Lakshya: hug??? I liked her, main uske saath zyada se zyada time spend karna chahta tha, issliye use studies k bahane, garden le kar gaya. Main koi b chance chodna nahi chahta tha issliye garden pahunchne k baad, I pulled her and she bumped on me. Aur hamesha ki tarah, we were lost in each other's eyes. Pata nahi kaise, main uske kareeb jaa raha tha aur... wo bus khadi thi. I think she was confused. Hum dono ek dusre k itne kareeb the ki...

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Ragini: lekin achanak, bahut tezz barish ho gayi. Badal garazne lage, Bizli chamakne lagi, main darr gayi aur unse lipat gayi. Maine apni aankhen band kar rakhi thi, unhe kas k pakad liya tha. My hands were round his neck and his hands were round my waist.. Sab kuch aise hua k kuch pata hi nahi chala k kab hum dono ek dusre k bahon me the. Par ek ajeeb sa sukun tha, an invisible happiness u know... it was unexpected, but... it was our first hug!!

When she looked at Swara, She was lost in her talks.

Ragini: Kya hua??

Swara: my god Ragini! Agar tumhari love life itni interesting hai, toh tumhari married life kitni interesting hogi!!!!

She laughs n Ragini smiles.

Swara: Ragini... tumhari married life me sab...

Ragini: kuch thik nahi hai Swara, Sab kuch waisa ka waisa hai..

Swara: u mean, tumne Laksh ko abtak maaf nahi kiya?

Ragini: nahi. Aur main karna chahti b nahi. Kyun ki agar maine use maaf kar diya, toh yeh sab common ho jayega... logon ka pyar par se bharosha uuth jayega Swara...

Swara: how long Ragini?

Ragini: Forever, Till the end!

Love,

Shirisha😊

Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
O god what to say fabulous as always Shiri...
It was amazing...
Thanks for the PM.
Wonder when dono ke beech sab theek hoga?🤔
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Oh shiri that's amazing!!!
I loved the lines by them "forever, till the end"
Wonder when will she forgive her? Please continue soon soona soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Lovely update Shirisha 👏👏👏
Loved the way they explained thier story .. My RagYa😳😳

Update soon 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Nice update...

But who is roli and sid?Lol

Loved it..

Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Hey shiru
I loved their love story😳
So beautiful.
Update soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Awesome
Waiting for your next update.
Please pm me

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