RagLak SS: 'Main Karoon Intazaar Tera' epilogue page 14 no p

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Hi guys I am here with a new story... hope u like it.

Ragini's P.O.V

We were schoolmates, he was a year senior and my first crush! I believe, he too liked me. Or he was just teasing me coz he knew I crush on him or what, I really don't know. But it was just impossible for me to live without seeing him for 1 day. I remember every moment spent with him. Every day in the school bus, he asked me to give him my bag so that he could keep it on the berth, but I always refused. But one day I myself offered him to keep my bag up. He was surprised. "kya baat hai, aaj khud I dedi... koi nayi wajah??", he asked in his flirting tone. Trying to hide nervousness I said," kuch nahi... bas aise hi..." "haan haan, apne boyfriend ko nahi dogi toh aur kisko dogi???", he said this and winked in mischief.

Lakshya Maheshwari! The hottest guy of the college, who always show attitude towards girls, said himself my boyfriend?? "Ragini, teri to nikal padi..!", I said to myself. Days passed and I didn't realize when my crush for Lakshya turned to love. But damn! I couldn't express my feelings to him. I knew he likes me but like and love are 2 different things.

Destiny really plays an important role in our lives.

It's our 3rd marriage anniversary. Yes, of mine, and Lakshya. School hotty Laksh was the one whom I loved from the bottom of my heart, and my hubby Laksh is the one whom I hate from the bottom of my heart. Yes. I hate him. I hate him to core!

I belong to a middle class family but that doesn't mean I am a thing to be purchased or sold! But... I was! Who sold me??? My hero, my DAD! And guess who purchased me??? My husband, Mr. Lakshya! It was a deal for them, but marrying at 17, was not a play for me! I was not asked, I was not even informed! I was just force. But... if Laksh really wanted to marry me, was this deal necessary? Couldn't he wait till I turn 18? No! I was just a part of his bloody business!!

I hate u Mr. Lakshya Maheshwari, I hate u forever!

Laksh's P.O.V

She was a year junior and everything to me. It was just impossible for me to digest my food without having one glimpse of her every day. She had a crush on me, I believe as everyone said, but I, I was madly, deeply in love with her. Love at first sight you know! I always tried to draw her attention and I always succeeded to some extent. I remember every pulse of second spent with her. Once I was going upstairs and suddenly bumped to her. She widened her eyes in such a way, seemed like she was given an electric shock! I raised my eyebrows in a "what?" She got her senses back and wanted to go down ignoring me but I hold her wrist. She moved her hand trying to be free but my hold was damn strong. I turned and pulled her holding her waist. I came closer. We were so close that I could hear heart beat clearly. I came closer but controlled my emotions. I knew she like me but it doesn't mean that I would cross my limits. I freed her and let her go. She moved, turned, smiled at leaved!

Ragini Garodia! The diva of college, with whom every guy of the school wanted to go to a date with, smiled at me?? "Lakshya, you are the best!!" I said to myself. Days passed and my love for Ragini grew stronger. At last it was the time to leave school. It was my last chance to propose her. But damn! I am a real "Fattu" in case of love! I tried many times but was unable to express my feelings.

3 years. Even after 3 years of marriage, I failed every time. School diva Ragini was the one, who loved me the most in the universe, but my wife Ragini is the one who hate me the most in the universe! I tried to win her heart many times. But in vain! Perhaps her hatred is more strong then my love!

But I couldn't blame her for all this. Marry so early was like a shock to her. She thinks I spoil her life, but she doesn't know, I have saved her life from being spoiled! No doubt, I married her by giving money to her father, but she was not a deal! I can't tell her the reason because I don't want to be thankful to her. There was no time to wait till she turns 18, it all happened very fast! But, Ragini, she is my life. Not a part of my bloody business!

I love u Mrs Ragini Lakshya Maheshwari, I love u forever!


So how is it??


Love

Shirisha😊



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Yay you are awesome thank you
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Shri Its Awesomeee really dear its awesome plz continue what is that mystery behind Raglak marriage lol damn its too good :-) :-) :-)
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It is damn awesome yaar...how u come with such good themes...I don't know why but m feeling that her father wanted to.sell her to sm1 else n so to save her life Laksh married her...
Just a guess!!!
Anyway...continue soon...literally can't wait more..
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Amazing...amazing...amazing..

Loved your theme...

Waiting impatiently to read more
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This is really good I can't wait to read more this will be awesome I wonder how Laksh saved her and what happened

Hope you post the next part soon
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Aww this is awesome and damn interesting
Please update soon
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wow shrisha its awesum update dear.😳😳.
interesting concept 😃😃
continue soon..😉😆
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awww it's damn interesting
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