//GUSTAKH DIL\\ A SwaSan SS - Part 3 updated at page 20 - Page 12

Hi soumi Dear...

So sorry for being so late on your thread😭😭 Yaar you write so well.👏 Reading this I am unsure about how you like and appreciate my work. I mean mine work in okay given the way you have written prologue and first two parts. Prologue has arose so many questions in my mind. As many have already listed I'm not gonna rant them but will wait to your updates for their answer. Are you bengoli? Because you have used particular words and given description nearer to reality.

meow 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 for update.

& swasan ka curtain k piche ka chori chori chupke chupake wala romance

& sanskaar itna bhukad kyo h re???😆😆

Originally posted by: muktai

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Hi soumi Dear...

</div>So sorry for being so late on your thread😭😭

Yaar you write so well.👏
Reading this I am unsure about how you like and appreciate my work. I mean mine work in okay given the way you have written prologue and first two parts.

Prologue has arose so many questions in my mind.

As many have already listed I'm not gonna rant them but will wait to your updates for their answer.

Are you bengoli?
Because you have used particular words and given description nearer to reality.
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Beautifully portrayed and written updates.
Continue soon

Thank you for PM

Stay blessed

Mukta

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Mukku yaar dnt say like this
i still cant get over ur OS together and Ts I'm with you
and recent one Azaab.
Yes re i am a bengali and i always want to write something on swasan having some bengali touch.
Kolkata girl i am.
I am happy that u liked it.
u too stay blessed re
With love
Soumi.

Originally posted by: manisha.8148

meow 🤗 for update.

& swasan ka curtain k piche ka chori chori chupke chupake wala romance

& sanskaar itna bhukad kyo h re???😆😆

Mannu every person belongs to kolkata is bhukkad
pubi bas thori alien type ki he iss mamle me🤣
haan haan abhi bohot romance dikheg ya fir dikhaya jayega!!!!!
aage aage dekho
by d way tujhe kaisa laga and teri queries wa me discuss karenge ok???

Hey Soumi my dear 🤗 🤗

Soumi dear ..Just now read the three updates of your new story😊😊

And I really enjoyed reading..Its a really beautiful concept yaar..

The court scene in the prologue increased my curiosity..😳😳 Especially Ragini's character..She is Sanskaar's lawyer..hmm..quite interesting twist..😊😊

So Swasan marriage is at the verge of divorce..But what happened..? They were so much in love from the beginning, like love at first sights..

The cute moments between the two families are beautifully shown..And Swasan moments are blissful❤️
I am eagerly waiting for your next update..

love
Naina🤗

soumi...read both chapters...

so sanskar considers swara as a good friend and is ready to marry her,dont think he love her as he said friend...and swara is slowly falling in love with him...but everything seems ok till now...update soon ...waiting to know how and why will everything change...?

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Soumi my dear🤗🤗

I enjoyed this update so much. Sanskaar and Swara's chupke chupke romance...eagerly looking for the other, their gazes meeting when Swara hides behind the curtains and slightly parts them to peer outside.😳

Sanskaar is completely fida on her and is so eager to get married fatafat😉. And Swara has also fallen for Sanskaar majorly.😳I'm loving this tender pre marriage romance between them.

You described the "Kolkata feel" so well yaar...I enjoyed reading about the traditional Bengali snacks, the store from where DP had got Sanskaar his punjabi, the rituals that were to be followed for the SwaSan Engagement and so on.

I really liked the Sanskaar--Shomi bonding too. So sweet that he calls her also "Ma" , and how Shomi feels assured about entrusting her daughter to him.

I was just going😆🤣when Sanskaar called Swara "sweet shop girl", he was so dazzled seeing her at the party.

Waiting to read more about their engagement as well as how Sanskaar proposed to Swara.😉

Lots of Love

Viji

Hi dear Viji sis 🤗
I was waiting for ur feedback.
Yaa swara being shy kind of girl this affection and attention is new to her.
In my next update i will elaborate swara in more detail.
Being a kolkata girl i just cant stop myself to gv dis stry a kolkata flavour.

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Soumi dear ..Just now read the three updates of your new story😊😊

And I really enjoyed reading..Its a really beautiful concept yaar..

The court scene in the prologue increased my curiosity..😳😳 Especially Ragini's character..She is Sanskaar's lawyer..hmm..quite interesting twist..😊😊

So Swasan marriage is at the verge of divorce..But what happened..? They were so much in love from the beginning, like love at first sights..

The cute moments between the two families are beautifully shown..And Swasan moments are blissful❤️
I am eagerly waiting for your next update..

love
Naina🤗

Omg Naina u r here!!!!!!!😳
eeekksss
Thnk u for liking my concept and updates.
Love u too dear.
Ragini is a lawyer of sansku and she fights his case!!!!!
Swasan moments are light hearted now...in next few updates u will get to know about the mystry slowly slowly
Keep reading and i am so glad to have you here 😳

Originally posted by: pakh

soumi...read both chapters...

so sanskar considers swara as a good friend and is ready to marry her,dont think he love her as he said friend...and swara is slowly falling in love with him...but everything seems ok till now...update soon ...waiting to know how and why will everything change...?

Hello dear kirti
Hey meri intelligent girl
sahi pakde hain😆
Everything is Ok.
Swara loves him 😳
will update soon dear.