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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

It's awesome.

I have read it on fb..

Hats off to this idea..

Loved it..

Thank you for the PM..

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Kaira10

@Kaira10

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

superb !!! which telugu movie was this ?

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Tapathi

@Tapathi

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Neha...😊

it was awesome dear...wow...! really sweet and cute...😳and sanskar plan was...👏

u knw when i read ragini name a little kind of stork came in my heart...what is this...! is sanskar is loving ragini...😡 and when his friend suggested him take help of her sis...i thought to give a hug to that friend...😉

swara is soo cute yaar...and you really presented the story in such a way that upto last moment i didnt got his plan...i thought after knowing swara wrote those letters he thought and understand swara and thinks that swara is his true love...but that plan was...really excelent one...👏i like it...

AND LEKHA THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR PM...😊

NOTE:Neha next time you pm na...😉

Edited by Tapathi - 9 years ago

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kamila.

@Seriously.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Hi.. Neha Dear... Nice to meet you... Wonderful OS.. Just loved it.. I read this is at 2:00 am.. I doesn't want to lose this... Heart warming OS... Very light hearted... But I guessed your twist in first... It was Swara... Not Ragini... She was nice cupid... I loved each and every word of that letters... And Sanskaar love confession... To Swara... Keep on writing...

PS:- lekha darling live you for pm... Otherwise I would have missed this...

Now I'll sleep in swasan land...

Love you...

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Awesome OS. Loved it . I totally didnt see the twist coming ,when i found out he loved Ragini , i was like sure he will fall for Swara now . Never thought he was this smart .Poor Swara. Really liked it Neha.Do write more .

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Wow dear...

Such a lovely OS...great job

Talia

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Oh my god...

Wt a shocking twist yaar...

I felt like crying when sanskar was angry with her...

But the end awe...

It was so beautiful...

Plz do write more stories...

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Awesome os

Thanks for the pm lekha

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Soundharya

@Feltonate

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Hi neha i am Soundharya...nice meeting you..
Regarding the OS it is Lovely...
😳
Ragsan team...hahaha
Bohot chalak hai yeh dono 😃
Swara wishing sea ... 😆 lol...
Do write more ...
I'll be waiting... 😉

Edited by Soundharya_01 - 9 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Hi Neha 🤗

Welcome to the forum.

A very cute and romantic OS. Nice twist at the end--I did not realize that Sanskaar had always fallen for Swara from the beginning. 😊 So this was a welle xcuted plan on his part, to find out how Swara felt for him, and to win her heart. 😳

Liked your description of how Swara gradually fell for Sanskaar, seeing his caring and warm nature. I was initially thinking that Sanskaar would probably start loving Swara, after he realized she was the one who wrote him all those letters and sent him the gifts, wanting to make him happy. But that was a very unexpected and refreshing twist you gave. 😉

Thanks so much Leku, for the PM. 🤗

Lots of Love to you both,

----Viji

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