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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Now I'm sure that man with burning scarce is Sanskaar!
So we got SwaSan interaction with Ragya as FB!
And was that Sanskaar who was whistling across the road from Swara? I think so!
Laksh! Ohh this guy never fails to evoke hatred within me for him!
I think he is responsible for Sanskaar's past!
Why DP don't consider Laksh as his heir? After all he has proven himself as DP's son in negativity & wrong deeds!
And what the hell is laksh going to do next? What is his master plan? Not good that I can say!
Dida has some secret though I hope she is not negative!
So many mysteries yet to unfold! It's just the beginning I guess!
Bt interesting & very intriguing! Looking forward to next updates to get some answers!
Update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Ahh finally you updated the way you are building up the mystery that's truly mindblowing👏👏
So sanskar swara laksh ragini knew eachother from a long time I thought ragini laksh knows each other from quite long time but didn't expected that swasan used to know each other that too from such a long time
Laksh🤢🤢🤢 I hate him but here I hate him too much ,much much more than I hate him on the show or in any other story what vicious plan he is making😲😳 I am getting worried and scared😳 not in anywhere else laksh managed to make me scared I hated him in both show and in every story but here he is real evil just like dp, laksh is negative in almost all the stories but here his evilness is of some different level he is a lowly person but here it is of some different level of low

Along with already so many other villains shobha Bose is making me very worried even when we are not sure if she is evil or not we havent seen her doing something evil directly till now we don't know what is her motive it could be something evil or it could be she wants revenge or justice for something dp had done to her or her son swaraj Bose but I couldn't get any slightest bit of idea of her motive but still she is giving me negative vibes the conversation between the old woman and the man with burnt scar I think they are sanskar and shobha bose we all are assuming the man with burnt scar is sanskar and I feel the woman is was shobha Bose the dialogue about thinking about enemies before sleeping everyday yes it is true that it is truly effective it fills with a want of justice ,gives the strength to fight but at the same time makes the person go through the same pain again and again through the memories so whoever the woman was gave me negative vibes that woman has some motive of her own behind helping the other person

Update soon and plz if possible add me in your buddy list so that when you update you can send me pm I am really excited about this story I have great interest in dark stories because the more the darkness will be the more light there will be
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Wohooo dearie...
Mindblowing update..sooo many things going on..full suspense n thriller...every character has a cold vibe...felt goose bump reading some parts... till now every character in a certain way is veiled..waiting for curtain raiser...👍🏼

Enjoying it...update soon..

Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Am waiting for more where is the next part
Totaly love the story and where is my sanskar

Laksh is complete useless here kya good
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

Now I'm sure that man with burning scarce is Sanskaar!

So we got SwaSan interaction with Ragya as FB!
And was that Sanskaar who was whistling across the road from Swara? I think so!
Laksh! Ohh this guy never fails to evoke hatred within me for him!
I think he is responsible for Sanskaar's past!


Why DP don't consider Laksh as his heir? After all he has proven himself as DP's son in negativity & wrong deeds!

🤣

I guess coz dp does evil stuff for moolah, his main focus is his work. Lakshya is ulta, he wants to eliminate competition first and focus on work later. I don't think even dp has any idea how identical his son and he is😕


And what the hell is laksh going to do next? What is his master plan? Not good that I can say!
Dida has some secret though I hope she is not negative!
What does your gut feeling say when you look at the lady?😛
So many mysteries yet to unfold! It's just the beginning I guess!
Bt interesting & very intriguing! Looking forward to next updates to get some answers!
Update soon :) hopefully. Thanks for reply.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Wohooo dearie...

Mindblowing update..sooo many things going on..full suspense n thriller...every character has a cold vibe...felt goose bump reading some parts... till now every character in a certain way is veiled..waiting for curtain raiser...👍🏼


Curtain will raise slowly, both about their past deeds and present kaarnamas...hope you stick around for that.


Enjoying it...update soon.. Thanks for reply.

Talia

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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Res
Leki finally you updated and still forgot to send PM😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: swa291

Am waiting for more where is the next part

Totaly love the story and where is my sanskar

He's dead no? How will he come😛

Laksh is complete useless here kya good

He's busy plotting others doom. 😆😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: asexualflower

Hey Riya, I'm so glad you updated today. 😊


High commission ordered me so😆 jokes apart I was done with chapter. Why not update.


I really like your writing style I must say, the darkness in this FF is really intriguing (I'm really into reading dark novels).


Oh thank you! Glad you liked the tone. I have not written this type of story earlier so I am quite careful whenever I am writing. Especially during dialogues, I am not too familiar with the tones of these characters.


The story is shaping up quite interestingly, so many questions, but not many answers, yet! By the way I think I may have missed something, is Ragini Shomi's daughter or no?


I have not mentioned yet but no, she's not. Shekhar shomi both remarried. Answers will come through FBs mostly, hope you find them satisfying.


The Swaraj Bose twist was 😲

Chalo at least I managed to shock you. You guys are damn observer here, don't miss a single thing. I am not too fond of mystery myself lol.

By the way "et tu, Brute" is correct(I know French 😛)

Thanks for the PM!

Welcome. Thanks for reply.


- Sapna 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: Sanya17

Ahh finally you updated the way you are building up the mystery that's truly mindblowing👏👏


Sukriya sukriya. Itni tareef😲😆but kya yaar you guys are solving all mystery even before I reveal them. I have to work harder now.

So sanskar swara laksh ragini knew eachother from a long time I thought ragini laksh knows each other from quite long time but didn't expected that swasan used to know each other that too from such a long time

Their dads are partners (in crime) from a long time so their families know each other. Ragya are bffs so are Uttara-Swara. I think its time to make ladies from both family have a scene.
Laksh🤢🤢🤢 I hate him but here I hate him too much ,much much more than I hate him on the show or in any other story what vicious plan he is making😲😳 I am getting worried and scared😳 not in anywhere else laksh managed to make me scared I hated him in both show and in every story but here he is real evil just like dp, laksh is negative in almost all the stories but here his evilness is of some different level he is a lowly person but here it is of some different level of low

He's dark guy. In show the storytellers are hell bent on making everyone goody two shoes, rags dadi Sujata Sanskaar now lucky, as if being grey is wrong. Lucky is the same guy who humiliated Gadodias, didn't he? He's quite capable of sinister deeds. He wants to see his dad beg and basically a selfish self centred person. There is no line he won't cross

Along with already so many other villains shobha Bose is making me very worried even when we are not sure if she is evil or not we havent seen her doing something evil directly till now we don't know what is her motive it could be something evil or it could be she wants revenge or justice for something dp had done to her or her son swaraj Bose but I couldn't get any slightest bit of idea of her motive but still she is giving me negative vibes the conversation between the old woman and the man with burnt scar I think they are sanskar and shobha bose we all are assuming the man with burnt scar is sanskar and I feel the woman is was shobha Bose the dialogue about thinking about enemies before sleeping everyday yes it is true that it is truly effective it fills with a want of justice ,gives the strength to fight but at the same time makes the person go through the same pain again and again through the memories so whoever the woman was gave me negative vibes that woman has some motive of her own behind helping the other person


seriously who does help nowadays without any motivei am not gonna dive into the identity of the lady, let it be a spoiler, eh? What you said about revenge is totally true. In GoT the character who said it was trying to say that hatred don't do any good as it burns your heart, but someone who's been wronged he/she wants retaliation. Don't worry about Dida, sit back and relax.



Update soon and plz if possible add me in your buddy list so that when you update you can send me pm I am really excited about this story I have great interest in dark stories because the more the darkness will be the more light there will be

I will pm you. Thanks for reply, as usual loved reading your thoughts.

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