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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER---3-=============================================================================================================================================================

One week had passed after Sanskar coming back from London.Durgaprasad wanted Sanskar to accept the responsibility of the kingdom but he was not sure whether Sanskar will want it the way it is?As much he knew him he was not a rebellion but he was also not someone who will serve someone's orders,means he was not interested in himself doing something good or right but would surely try to make one wrong thing right.He knew Sanskar was carefree guy and living 5 years in London had changed nothing in him,he was as he was before which was a matter of surprise for him.He had sent Sanskar there because he wanted his son to be like him,he did not wanted that living in India make his son like other freedom fighters and patriots as these were the only things famous in India at that time.He wanted his son to live a life of luxury just like he used to live with dignity...no matter that digity was false.He thought that western culture will affect Sanskar ,but It dint.

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Sanskar used to spend most of his time in the palace reading English literature or practicing his hands on sword.He wanted to enjoy his life.He did not want to take care of kingdom and involve himself in those matters because he thought he was not made for that.His grandmother was not well from some days and he used to visit her whenever he was allowed to meet or she was awake.His life was going as the way he wanted and simply until that day...

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Sanskar was riding his horse and roaming aroud in the different places of kingdom.It was not like he was fond of riding horses like most of prince do but it was because of his grandmother.When he had visited her today morning she had asked him to go and visit his kingdom as he was the upcoming king and he should have knowledge about his kingdom and its happenings.Although he was not interested but because of her grandma's insistence ,he had decided to do this as it will be also a change to his usual lifestyle of just keep himself limited to palace.

He was near the river coast.The place was so beautiful.He had enjoyed well built cemented roads of London but these places of india have their own beauty which was far better than those big examples of great architecture.These places have different kind of serenity and peace which was not there. Sanskar was lost in his thoughts when he heard loud cry of a girl.

Sanskar immediately went in that direction.There he saw some british soldiers teasing a young village girl.She was crying for help and repeatedly asking them to let her goThey were teasing and blocking her way and not letting her go.Sanskar' s blood boiled with anger after seeing this scene.He immediately rushed to save the girl ,but before he could reach there;;He saw many stones were coming and hitting those soldiers ,they were crying with pain as they were so much hurt.Then he saw a girl coming near them having stones in her hand.She came there and again started throwing stones at them.She was saying loudly that Indian girls are not weak as they think of them,If they are mild like Goddess parvati then they are also capable like Her to change themselves in Durga and Chandi...She picked more stones and keep hitting them until they ran away from there.She went near that girl ,picked her duppata and gave it to her.She consoled the girl who was repeatedly crying .She said to her to learn to fight for herself,nobody could not do anything wrong with them if they know how to fight for themselves.Girls are not weak,they are strong enough if only they learn and use their capabilities.They just need to be strong.The girl stopped crying and hugged her and said what would have happened if you were not there,you are the strength of whole village.

Sanskar was seeing the whole scene.He had seen many girls in his life,but never had he seen a girl brave like this girl,even the English ladies lacked these qualities which are possessed by this girl.She fought alone with those 6 or 7 soldiers not even fearing what if they would have done something to her.She was so brave,her words were so courageous and beautiful that anyone would be impressed by those words and so was Sanskar.Sanskar was first time seeing a girl like this,but...

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RAJMATA GAYATRI'S ROOM---PALACE

Annapurna came to gayatri's room.She had just come to know that Sanskar is not in the palace and before leaving somewhere on his horse he had met rajmata.Sanskar has never gone out of palace after coming back. Annapurna was fearing what she had said to Sanskar and where he would have gone.She came to rajmata and asked her whereabouts of Sanskar...

AP : Enough of this maa saa ,I know very well what you want.Just tell me where have you sent Sanskar and what have you said to him.

Gayatri : I have not done anything bahu,I have just sent him to see what he should have seen earlier,and he is wise enough to think and take his decisions.I have just sent him to visit his kingdom ,you tell me if there is anything wrong in it.

AP : There is nothing... wrong... in it... maa saa...and she left from there leaving rajmata with a grin on her face.

Now Gayatri just wanted a positive result of sending Sanskar to visit their state.

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So guys here I end chapter---3---/////I wanted to write more about Swara and Sanskar in it and go ahead of that but...but,but,then I think to leave u all in little suspense...dont know if it will remain suspense or not...for u guys...next will be about swasan...

Guys I am trying to tell you all exactly what type of person is Sanskar by his and other's thoughts...hope you all will get me...

Do tell me by likes and comments if you like this chapter... this is last chapter I am posting,,I have written next chapter but that I will post if you all are interested enough...please do like and comment if u want me to continue...thanks...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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As nobody is liking this SS...should I discontinue it?????
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: pakh

As nobody is liking this SS...should I discontinue it?????


no yaar continue update nxt part its good.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey keerti
plz continue. lovely. swasan

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: PRINCESS_ALISHA

hey keerti
plz continue. lovely. swasan

thank u...Alisha for liking...
Edited by pakh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finally managed to read the update...Thank you so much is was such a good read...
Nice to see swara is bold and sanskaar nature is still caring loved the way you looked into his soul and being...

Look forward to next update and please continue soon...

Raz

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