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Posted: 9 years ago
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HELLO ALL...

Its kirti here...a very big wali swasan fan...wanted to write something on swasan...so here it is...don't know what I will write...but if you like then do read...

PROLOGUE

Nooo...
He wakes up startled...

this loud noise makes his friend who was having lovely sleep and beautiful dreams too to say bye to those dreams and he too gets up
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again your that nightmare don't let my beautiful dream get complete...

one day I will leave u and get far away if it keeps going on like this...

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a burning house...people gathering around...he jumps in the already set up on fire house...to burn himself...saying those words..." it all happened because of me...because of me...no also bcz of u...so I should also get punishment...and with me u all...u all...and he keeps repeating these words... and every time dream breaks making him restless...
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ohhh...your this dream...I can't afford more...now just forget about it...I think till now it would have become a habit...now Mr. MECHANIC. get ready customers will be coming soon...night is enough for this dream or nightmare of yours...and he leaves leaving him worried as he is always...


do hit like if it seems a little bit interesting to u all


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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 1

EARLY1920s

ROYAL PALACE PRATAPGARH

King Durgaprasad and his wife Annapurna were waiting anxiously for their beloved son Sanskar who was returning India after studying five years in London.

Pratapgarh was a strong kingdom not because king has done something really appreciable but because he had the blessings of britishes after all...the chamchagiri of Britishers had made king durgaprasad' s kingdom safe from British attacks and all.Due to this cordial relationship; he was enjoying all kind of luxuries along with his family no matter what was happening with the poor people of his kingdom.

who cares about them...

In those times remaining under the support of Britishers was the only option for a king who wanted luxuries.

So know because of this king durgaprasad was living a very luxurious life.

His family included him; his wife Annapurna; his one and only son and child Sanskar and his mother, the rajmata of pratapgarh.

These were the members of pratapgarh rajgharana.

His wife ...Annapurna...did everything what his husband said not giving a second thought to right or wrong.She was not a greedy woman but was fond of luxuries and comforts not able to compromise with these at any cost.

The RAJMATA; Gayatri devi; widow of late king pratap Singh; a very brave and patriotic person who lost his life fighting for the freedom of his country; was no less than his husband.She was a real country lover who loved her country and people.She tried a lot to make her son understand about right and wrong but who listens to her.The kingdom which his husband had nourished ...who had made it prosperous...someone who had made his mark in heart of his peoples...whose people were proud of their kings bravery and kindness;;;; has now turned into just a slave to Britishers by her own son.She wished his grandson to give back her old kingdom to her.



AND his son Sanskar ...well...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing concept.waiting for next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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guys have updated first part..

so it is back story...I have not thought what will I do in present story but thought about past story concept so till it end I will see how will I do the present...don't know much about history...kings...palaces and all so don't connect with that...now don't know what to say...

if u like it do like and comment


and thank u in advance for likes and comments...my net is too slow...will be updating fast as I have nothing to do now...my main exams completed so I have this work only...
Edited by pakh - 9 years ago
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CHAPTER---2

Hello all,so here is second part.It is mostly character sketch of Swara and Sanskar.😊

====================================================================================================================================================================Sanskar,the Sanskar,one and only child of king of Pratapgarh Durgaprasad maheshwari and queen Annapurna maheshwari was not the one who thought pleasing britishers will just keep him safe and help him living luxurious life...and was also not like his grandfather Pratap Singh who will fight for the rights of his countryman and freedom of his country.He was just the one who lived in his own world.He was neither kind nor was he cruel.He was happy with his life as the way it was.

So the point is that Sanskar lives his life in the way his parents has provided him and do not know or care about what is happening around him.Everything is right for him because the people around him are allright,happy and safe and so is everyone for him.He do not know about what is happening or not happening in his kingdom or anywhere in the country and neither does he care to know about it as he is happy and satisfied in his own world and among his family members.

After completing his initial studies from an English school,Sanskar was sent to London for higher studies by Durgaprasad as he was the prince and heir of kingdom and living among britishers ,he should know about their ways and their lifestyle and should be capable of what they are capable of.

After spending five years in London,sanskar was finally returning to India.He had done his studies from the land of britishers and that was a thing of dignity for an Indian and it increases his dignity as a prince more.But he was not the one who will be so proud of himself.No...He had done that as his father wanted it and it was just a degree for him and his father's wish.Now that he had fulfilled his fathers wish he wanted to live his life in his own way.He did not wanted to rule the kingdom,he did not wanted to be a freedom fighter or so,neither did he wanted to work for britishes,,,,,He wanted to do nothing actually.only thing he wanted was to live his life happily in his own way...just a carefree life.

Sanskar's cab enter the PRATAPGARH PALACE.

He was dressed in a white shirt,black pants and black coat.He had the most charming and handsome face that everyone would like to admire.He came to Annapurna and Durgaprasad and took their blessings as he was Indian afterall.Durgaprasad was happy and proud to see his son back.Both he and Annapurna gave blessings to sanskar and hugged him.

After meeting with his father and mother Sanskar asked them about whereabouts of his grandmother and why did she not came to meet him and welcome him as she was the person with whom he was MOST CLOSE.

Annapurna told him that she is not well and is resting in her room and he should meet her after sometime.But as soon as sanskar listened about her bad health and her whereabouts he rushed to meet her...leaving his father and mother with a not so happy look...

Annapurna and Durgaprasad did not wanted their son to meet with his grandmother as they knew what she wanted and they did not wanted to loose their son as if her words affected sanskar and he started opposing their lifestyle and ways it would be a big problem for them...

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GAYATRI'S ROOM

Gayatri was very happy to know that his grandson is coming back.For her Sanskar was the one who could change the fate of kingdom.She knew that he had no interest in freedom fights and all but she also knew that he was not like her son who would worship someone for just sake of luxuries and safety.He was just needed to be told and he was capable of doing wonders.But she had some inner fears as Sanskar was for five years in the land of enemies and what if he had become like them or say like his father...She was lost in these thoughts of hers when someone entered her room.

Sanskar entered his grandmother's room and rushed to her and asked her if she was ok or not.He was meeting her after 5 years and probably she is the one he had missed most.She was like a friend to him but she was the only one with whom he had spend LEAST TIME as he was not allowed by his parents to spend time with her.But the time he had spendt with her,he had become fond of her.

Gayatri Devi happily hugged her grandson.After talking for sometime with him Gayatri became happy that his Sanskar was the same Sanskar whom she had known five years ago...and the hope was still alive just someone was needed to ignite the fire within him...

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SWARA ----INTRODUCTION

Swara , a common village girl in the kingdom of Pratapgarh.COMMON VILLAGER ??????yeah she is a common village girl yet not common.She is the one who is well known among all villagers of pratapgarh.She is not common because she has that bravery which even the men of village lacks.

The place where even men do not dare to do anything against rulers,the people in front of whose even men of village do not dare to open their mouth;;;;;;;she was the one who could roar like tigress.

Swara,whose parents were nothing but poor workers working in the farms of jamindars which came under british rule was the one in the entire village who was concerned for the freedom of country;;she was the one who would literally show that girls are not weak as shown by the queen of Jhansi.

Swara was a little bit educated .She only knew how to read and write Hindi language.She could understand a little bit English language as the british officers used to come daily in village to speak shit out of their mouth and by listening it regularly she could understand a bit.

Well in the place where everyone was uneducated swara was the only educated person;;;that only swara can do...In that time only royals,britishers and rich persons like jamindars and all could get education.But Swara would always do what is not allowed,because it seemed she had born with the qualities of rani Jhansi and other brave women.Swara used to climb on the walls of those classrooms and building of school ,by hiding somewhere,climbing on walls,sitting near window,like this she had somehow learnt to read and write.

Swara was concerned about the poor condition of her kingdom.She was hoping for someone to change their fate;;;although she was not living on only hopes,she herself was trying to change the fate.At that time contribution of one could also be proved something major in the favour of country.Swara was trying to fill that feeling of patriotism and bravery in all villagers.

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So here I have written about character sketch of Swara and Sanskar.Swara's CS can appear as a lesson of history and like an essay though...but I will surely try to improve as it is first time I am writing something and about Sanskar I have tried to tell what type of person he is...Hope u will get that...From next part onwards will start the main story.

Please like and comment if u find it interesting.😊

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Res.. Busy now will give comment later...

Unres...

Nice concept dear... Characters sketch too...

Swara is reble type.. Swasans are contrast... Love to read more...

Love... Kamila...
Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 9 years ago
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Nice sketch and update soon looks like a good read...
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Originally posted by: sneharay

Interesting concept..nice updates...

thank u...hope u will like next updates these we're just like character sketch
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Originally posted by: raaz19

Nice sketch and update soon looks like a good read...

thanks...hope u will like next updates...
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Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Res.. Busy now will give comment later...

Unres...

Nice concept dear... Characters sketch too...

Swara is reble type.. Swasans are contrast... Love to read more...

Love... Kamila...

thanks kamila...hope u will like next updates...

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