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Nupur

@Nupur_5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Another awesome update of Swara-Sanskaar & their memories!

Sanskaar is trying hard to make Swara's health better but what response he is getting is heart wrenching!

He is reliving their moments spent together again! And in a way trying to draw strength from those beautiful precious memories?

Swara was also cherishing their memories! Their wedding pic on the album & she was remembering the time when Sanskaar gifted it to her!

Sanskaar's present or should I say presents to her for their anniversary!

Awesome, amazing, mind blowing!

Both present & past are beautifully heart touching!

Couldn't stop from commenting Bt off to go now to read it again!

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Olivia12

@Olivia12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Hello dear,
The wait was worthwhile for this absolutely amazing update.
It starts with the doctor's prognosis and Sanskaar's determination to take care of Swara till his last breath was agonising. Then Sanskaar went to his study to gain some strength from a letter written by Swara, the letter itself and the memory it triggered were beautiful.
This time we have Swara too remembering some tender moments between them.
A perfectly timed bloom and a cup of tea in Darjeeling, what less can be expected from Sanskaar on their first anniversary.
I truly loved each and every part of this update. You weave magic through your words and I admire you for that.
Update when time permits because I could wait longer if the result is going to be this delightful.

Lots of love,
Olivia

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Prerana

@prerulalli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Beutifuuly penned down 👏

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Nalini Ansh

@Bennet.Lizzy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Res 😊

Shruthi🤗

I'll be waiting.

i hope you are back to being healthy!! I'm waiting for the next thread on DK.

Edited by bennetlizzy - 9 years ago

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Nalini Ansh

@Bennet.Lizzy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik
Beautiful!! Absolutely beautiful memories! 🤗 Laced with romance, longing, passion.. Such sweetness... BTW one small doubt, in 2018 swasan were separated for 6months?? Due to work?? Or was sanskar too busy to give time to Swara those 6months?? Swara's longing was so well worded, you could feel how much she missed him... And why Nalini?? Why should an angelic soul like swara suffer from Parkinson's syndrome?? Or maybe its not her since u haven't mentioned names yet.. Mental optimism i tell u🤪😆 The timed blooming of the lilies and...Tea in Darjeeling?? Really? Trust Sanskar to come with such lovely surprises Eagerly waiting for next..
Love,
Akshata😊

Akshata 🤗

That was so nice of you. Thanks a ton hon. I'm so glad that you thought so of those little memories.

Sanskar is a man of surprises isn't he. Swara's ever duty bound attitude and his every present sense for the right kind of romance is what makes them uber cute. I just wanted to bring that out, partly to overcome the lack of it these days. And I'm glad you enjoyed it. Your words have made my day, inspiring me to write more often,

Well about the unfortunate illness that seems to plaque her and along with her Sanskar I cannot say anything but death comes eventually to everyone. But what it makes out of a love like this is make in deathless. The people we love may cherish perishsomeday. And so will we. But the love as it is will never die. There is a scene on the night before the picnic I'm sure is etched into your mind as it is in ours. He says "people should remember us even After our death". May be that was what inspired me somewhere to explore the waters. Let's see how Swasan will make that more possible than what they already did.

Yea about the separation in 2018 that was because he was away abroad on some work. A rather painful separation.. I'm glad you asked :)

I'm glad you liked the letter. That means a huge thing to me. Because honestly it wasn't the firmly kind of letter so I was kind of wary about it.

Thankyou so much again akshata. Happy to have done something worthy enough for you to read.

Hope you will like the upcoming season ones too

Lots of love

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Hey Nalini.😊

Beautiful SwaSan Memoirs. Full of longing, passion, romance and a bit emotional too.👏

In the present part, is that Swara who is suffering from Parkinson's??😭

Sanskar cares so much for her.😳

Loved the letter which Swara wrote for her dear Sanskar.😳 Bt OMG!! They were separated for 6 months in 2018!?😭 Bt why?😕

Loved the 2017 part so much!! Their hug, their kiss.☺️ SwaSan's anniversary!! Sanskar's gift. Their long drive. Tea in Darjeeling!! Really?? Just loved it!!!😃

Thanks for the PM.😊

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Nalini Ansh

@Bennet.Lizzy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

Another awesome update of Swara-Sanskaar & their memories!
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Sanskaar is trying hard to make Swara's health better but what response he is getting is heart wrenching!
He is reliving their moments spent together again! And in a way trying to draw strength from those beautiful precious memories?
Swara was also cherishing their memories! Their wedding pic on the album & she was remembering the time when Sanskaar gifted it to her!
Sanskaar's present or should I say presents to her for their anniversary!
Awesome, amazing, mind blowing!
Both present & past are beautifully heart touching!
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Couldn't stop from commenting Bt off to go now to read it again!

Hello Nupur 🤗

Thankyou so much hon. I was ecstatic when you said you were off to read again. What more can make one who writes happier than this. I'm really so humbled.

Yea, its a gift to celebrate 366 days of their new beginnings. I'm glad you liked both the parts besides the poignancy it carries in the present. And I'm sure I have clear some clouds on the present to help you keep along. Those words were really helpful Nupur. Would always look forward for such support.

Hope you will enjoy the next parts. Ill begin sometime soon. Time is tight. But ill still try.

Lots of love
N

Edited by bennetlizzy - 9 years ago

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Nalini Ansh

@Bennet.Lizzy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: raaz19
Sorry for the late response and thank you so much for the pm..
Let me say the start to the memoir has been beautifully presented...sanskaar emotions and worry over swara know
health is heart wrenching to read but at the same time it tells you of there journey that they have lived...

The parchment was a lovely way of starting off with there first memory a memory of were swara was missing him so much...The longing and kiss was simply magical...I loved the way sanskaar was equally connected to his wife's wish...

Loved the song choice and his cheeky behaviour of wanting her just for himself...

Look forward to the next update...

Raz

Raz

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I'm so sorry dear. I don't know how I missed replying to this. That was so rude of me. My sincere apologies.

Thankyou so much for the comment. Once again glad that you liked it.

Yea it's heart wrenching for such a lovely duo to go through times like this. though death is eventual and love lives on let's see how our couple would get along during times as these. I'm sure you will stick along to know that.

Yea memories are one thing that define us don't they. They make us and also break us. Sanskar here is trying make himself again by clinging on to those memories with hope. Let's see how he copes up and fights with the fates.

I'm glad I could make it enjoyable to you beside the sadness it carried.

Yea the kiss was something. Hope it had the right amount of everything

Thankyou again so much for the comment. It means a lot to me

And sorry again for some how missing this

Lots of love

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Nalini Ansh

@Bennet.Lizzy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Sree8410
Res

Thanks sree:)

Would be waiting eagerly

Love

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Dear Nalini,

That was ...amazing (for lack of better words) I do not know how you can do it, the update is sublime (yes...that is what I was wanting to say).

The beginning brings tears to one's eyes - the idea of losing someone you love is frightening enough but on account of Parkinson's - it takes that dread to a whole new level. Watching the one you love, slowly fade away with their memories of you gone before they do...

And then you transport us from this impending gloom to two memories - both beautiful in different ways:

Sanskaar's memory as to how much Swara missed him (24 hours and 34 minutes) which would be painfully bringing the fact to focus as to how much he did and would miss her!

Then Swara's memory - she still has not lost it all - of her wedding day and then of Sanskaar's gift for their anniversary - the box of ''memories' (photographs, I guess) and the icing on the anniversary cake - so to speak - a drive to Darjeeling for a cup of tea!

Beautiful one and my eyes are still moist from reading it. Please update soon.

love,

Nyna