SWASAN TS: ALEXAMENOUS(LAST PARTup on pg1 ON 1/04)

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Abi

@abi03

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

nice...but a request can u pls update n english...ur all writings r nice...pls a request update all n english pls...

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spatika

@spatika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

awesome update
finally swara realized that she loves sanskar...
sanskar misunderstood swara.
ragini is too much

swara's slaps to ragini and laksh were the best...
continue soon

Edited by spatika - 9 years ago

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Ginny potter

@Bluehue

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#113

awesome...just awesome...! update soon can't wait for more. 😳

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Awesome update Mukta.👏 Loved the way Swara stood for Sanskar and brought out Ragini's truth infront of the entire family.😉 And she finally realized her love for him.😊 Swara's slap to Laksh and Ragini was the best.😆 Hate both of them so much!!!😡 Awww!! Swara kissed on sleeping Sanskar's forehead.😳 Bt Laksh is so disgusting!! How can he ask Swara to divorce Sanskar and return to him?!😡 Damn!! Poor Sanskar just heard his confession to Swara near the bridge when he came in search of her. And he had a misunderstanding. Now he will think that Swara still loves Laksh and wants to get back to him.😭 I hope Swara confess her love for him before its too late.😭 And convinces him soon that she loves only and only him, her dear Sanskar.😳 Plzz update the next part soon.😃

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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Finally the truth is out..

waiting for swasan confession..

continue soon..

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Hi muktia...

Wow...loved the power pact update friend...superb..loved the tigress in swara but for me the most beautiful part of this update was her slow realisation of her love for sanskaar..

Nice to see her fight for his love and protection...song choice was lovely and made the scene feel even more magical...

Finally lakhs learnt the truth but why did sanskaar walk away at the end..omg intense cliff hanger...

Update soon...

Raz :)

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#117

Res for 3
UnRes

Dear Mukta,

I had read it but was so caught up in work that I forgot that I had to Unres.😭😭😭

The whole story was poignant and despite being in Hindi (the dialogues - so I had to read a little slowly) I loved the same. I had actually not watched many episodes when this track was telecast and was actually upset with the slow pace of the show.

You have done a marvellous job in weaving the plotlines with subtle changes to a very tight firm narrative. The entire tale was a pleasure to read. Well done - 👏👏

Thank you for such a lovely TS - and yes they are indeed 'Alexamenous' to each other.

Lots of love,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago

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Krishnabhisarik

@Krishnabhisarik

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#118

Lovely TS Muktai!! Especially the whole 'bol na' sequence.. That was my favorite part😃

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#119

Awesome ts mukta 👏
Seriously i am speechless after reading this 👏
Loved it ❤️
Beautifully written 👏
You and your sister's jodi rocks 👏
Sanskar deserves that two slaps 🤣
Superb story 👏
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