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Posted: 9 years ago
finally u r updated
I missed ur ff alot
laksh still crazy man nd his choice oh God I really enjoyed so much
update nxt one asap
excepting more intense romance lyk dis I know u will do it in ur style
jst waitng fr nxt part
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Porkalai2892

finally u r updated
I missed ur ff alot
laksh still crazy man nd his choice oh God I really enjoyed so much
update nxt one asap
excepting more intense romance lyk dis I know u will do it in ur style
jst waitng fr nxt part

Sorry went to a marriage so could not update
Thanks for reading
N appreciating glad u like this SS
Surely I will try asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing part n teaser...It is really cute to see a Laksh like this..n his calling of 'biwi' ..haaye main waari jaawaan...
Sorry can't comment long ..hv to study..
SOWWIE!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
So beautiful and intense part.😳 Loved it.👏 Plzz update the next part soon dear.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

Amazing part n teaser...It is really cute to see a Laksh like this..n his calling of 'biwi' ..haaye main waari jaawaan...
Sorry can't comment long ..hv to study..
SOWWIE!!!!

Thanks for reading
All the best
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

So beautiful and intense part.😳 Loved it.👏 Plzz update the next part soon dear.😊

Thanks n sure
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Posted: 9 years ago

Part-14

Well here is another part I know it's short but I will update the next art soon.. Hope u will like it Pls do leave ur replys they matters a lot... Thanks for reading in advanced hope u like it

Laksh got from the floor..

l- lo biwi paati ho gayi

R- thanks

l- esa rukha sukha thank u, ek wifi wali kiss toh banti h na

(saying this he sat on the chair next her his head resting on his hand and elbow on the table..)

R- what?

L- nothing breakfast mein kya h ..

R- poha..

l- mera fav wala..

R- idk, check ur self..

She was about to get up when laksh turned her chair towards the table from his leg..

L- no u r not going anywhere?

R(angry)- y? no I am going..

L- biwi u have 2 options ..

R- I know ..(irritated)

l- that's good .. u still love me huh..

ragini gives no reply n he was about to start surving )

r- chiii

L- kya hua bebo?

r- can't u wash ur hands..

L- I applied my sanstizer..

r- I don't care go n wash ur hands!!

l- but y yrr!!

R- laksh u have 2 options a) go n wash ur hands and b) go and wash ur hands and this time in b) u won't get any breakfast..

L- okay!!

Soon after the breakfastragini tries to get up but fumbles, laksh cathes her..

L- r u k..

r- hm 1 but I need to finish my work n leave asap, I have to go..

l- I know , wait I'll wash the dishes..

r- how do u know?

L- we don't need words to communicate everytime I suppose..

Soon laksh was back from the kitchen..

l- bebo chalein..

r- hmm..

ragini was getting up when laksh came and lifted her up.

L- don't exert urself..

R- thanku..

l- oh ho 2 kisses due ho gayi meri toh..

in the car-

R- who what about ur lunch?

l- office mein arrangement h!! and u !!

r- canteen..

l- okay, but pls don't walk much ur ankle is hurt..

r- k!

they reached the music school!!

Laksh opned the door agin lifted her and moved into her classroom all eyes were on them.. the director of the school came to the class room to enquire...

Dr- gm mirs ragini any problem today..

r"yes sir who actually..

l- her ankle twisted so now she cannot walk ..

dr- oh I see! But

l- laksh maheshwari.. her husband..

Dr- oh hello mr. maheshwari, raman dev here.. nice to meet u must say sir u wife is very talented..

Soon raman leaves n laksh as well but not before saying a good bye to his beloved wife..

l- good bye bebo.. see u in the evening, take care n haan pls my 2 kisses..

r- bye ..(turns red - feels shy)

in the evening-

ragLak were returning home and laksh was conversing with her about his day n asking about her day.. they were discussing and talking like never before , like good friends .. this was when she noticed a vegetable vendor.. she asked him to stop as she wanted wanted to buy some for the dinner.. she was coming out when stopped her..

l- rahgini , u wait tell me I'll buy them..

r- no laksh I'll manage..

R - u know how to buy them..(raising her eye brows..)

L-nope..(big smile)

r- sooo

L"u instruct me..

Well ragini dose this and soon they leave this new laksh was amazing her, they were a couple who did not discussed much but still now she was liking their friendship more than anything.. or was it the feeling of happiness of her love loving her back..

He too knew this, his effect on her.. god knows y she loved him so much... they both smiled in unknowingly.. enjoying the friendybond and this feeling called love...

Zehnaseeb, Zehanaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Mere kareeb, mere habeeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehanaseeb Meaning: My Fate (someone who is destined to be yours)

Tere sang beete har lamhe pe humko naaz hai
Tere sang jo na beete uspe aitraaz hai
Iss kadar hum dono ka milna ek raaz hai

Huaa ameer dil ghareeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Lena-dena nahi duniya se mera
Bas tujh se kaam hai
Teri ankhiyon ke sheher me
Yaara sab intezaam hai
Khushiyon ka ek tukda mile
Ya mile gham ki khurchane
Yaara tere mere kharche me
Dono ka hi ek daam hai

Hona likha tha yunhi jo huaa
Yaa hote hote abhi anjaane mein ho gaya
Jo bhi hua, hua ajeeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehnaseeb, zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Hua ameer dil ghareeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb



Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Harshita...Read all the parts in one go...😳
Don't know how I missed this... This is awesome... Laksh is funny .. And the 2 options...😆
He reached Ragini's room through pipe...hahaha... That was so nice...😃


Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update.👏 Loved this part.😳 Plzz update the next part soon. And thanks for the pm.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Claptrap-

Hey Harshita...Read all the parts in one go...😳

Don't know how I missed this... This is awesome... Laksh is funny .. And the 2 options...😆
He reached Ragini's room through pipe...hahaha... That was so nice...😃


Waiting for the next update


Thanks

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