Ragya ss- Mere dilki malkin part21 up PG 47 - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rbb1

yay hope it's today

Sorry .. I'll try today could not do it yesterday
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Nice teaser dear. Cont soon.😊

Thanks n sure
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi,everyone so after a break i am here with another part of this ss.pls do read n leave ur comments..egar to read them ..hope u will like it...

Part-13

Laksh got up due to a voice

Vo- sabji

L(getting up)- Ragini!!

Driver- sab hum pohunch gaye

l- hm! Sorry ! who how much??

Laksh pays and goes inside the building

Aaa aAA aaA aaa re

Laksh entered the building..

Aaoge jab tum o saajana

Aaoge jab tum o saajana

Angana phool khilenge

Ragini's eyes were teary: she was looking at the door of her apartment, a want of him being here for the breakfast was strengthening and the fact fact of his absence was eating her up. He was now on her floor the 3rd floor slowly moving towards her place

Barsega saawan

Barsega saawan jhoom jhoom ke

Do dil aise milenge

He rang the bell, she was surprised at this. She ran to the door, through the peeping whole she saw him... tears of happiness were now escaping from her eyes...

Aaoge jab tum o saajana

Angana phool khilenge

In shock she took few steps back, she felt happy as never before.. her face lit up .. lips curved into an uncontrollable , non-hidable smile..

Naina tere kajraare hai

Naino pe hum dil haare hai

Anjaane hi tere naino ne

Waade kiye kai saare hai

He knew she saw him, but still was not opening the door.. this was the 5th time in last 10 minutes he rang the bell. Once again his heart was breakinfg.this time it ached more.. he loved her, she loved him, both wanted to meet, to be with eachother.. very close to eachother.. no barriers , no enymies and yet separated for no reason..

Saanson ki lay

Madham chalein

Tose gaye barasega saawan

Barasega saawan

Jhoom jhoomke

Do dil aise milenge

An hour passed, she was sitting bent on her knees, her back touching the door, her dupatta covering her mouth she was crying..he now moved away.. she felt as if her heart has stopped beating, the happiness due to his presence vanished..

Aaoge jab tum ho saajana

Angana phool khilenge

She stood up again peep through the small wicked whole, he was gone. Perhaps she won again, she was once agin successful but this time she wanted to welcome a defeat..she kept her head on the door.. tears flowing from her eyes..

THUD..

Her chain of thoughts was broken by a loud noise, she turned towads the source of disturbance.. the window beside her dining .. a man entered , her face turned pale..

r- laksh ji!!

Laksh had moisture in his eyes when he saw her but as soon as she saw him he wiped them and spoke up

l- Biwi!! Mein agya hoon.. kya h na ki har bar ki tarha u had 2 options -

a) Mujhe andar anedo aurB) mujhe andar aanedo

And as usual u chose B). Pls next time don't do naau know 3rd floor tak pipe chadhke ana is quite tough n risky..

R- laksh

(she runs to him )

R- kya harkat h yeh, agar kuch ho jata toh.. aur aap as ususal bol nahi sakte the ki I have 2 options..

l- mein bolta toh tum sunti(looks directly into her eyes)

R(avoiding the eye contact)- Nahi.. humein kya farak padta h..(chokes)

L- ki mein jeeun ya marun( tries to look into her eyes)

R(turning her back to him)- Haan!!

(tears flowed out of hewr eyes saying this)

L- sachii!!

R- Haan!!

Laksh now pins her to wall..

L- sach bolo ! meri ankhon mein dekhke bolo! Don't u love.. don't feel every scond n hour long with me, or were u not crying since the past 1 hour in an effort to make me go away(teary eyed)


R- nahi!!

L- Jhooth!!

R- Sach!!

L-na!!! jhooth

R- sach!!

L- kitna jhooth bologi, thaki nahi abhi tak, mujhse door bhagte bhagte, jooth bolte bolte, khudse jhooth bolte bolte ki u have moved on

R- hum .. hum sirf sach bolte h

L- really

R- ji!1 aur chodhiye humein.. jaane deejiye..

She now trys to push him

R(pushing)- hatiye laksh ji

He instead of moving away comes more close to her!! Only few inches b/w them.. she as loosing herself in his fragrance.. he could not take his eyes off her face, her petite nose,rosy lips, those crimson red cheeks due his touch. There was a burning desire in their hearts.. melting them.. making them loose their senses..

L(husky voice)-sach bolo!! Have u moved on

R(her vision blurred bby tears)- yes!!

L- really (moves close to her lips..)

R(turning her face aqway)- hmm!!

Laksh now cups her face

L- ragini !! do u trust me??

She now had a sarcastic smile n her face..

R- Trust!!.. yeh shabd aapke aur umare muh se acha nahi lagta!!bhul gaye we both are traitors, cheaters.. especially for eachother.. so pls lakshji trust ki umeed kam se kam hum dono toh ek dusre se nahi karein toh its better

This line hurt laksh, his guilt increased , he now considered his immaturity the root cause of her present form.one thing which confused him always was how to react on his effect on her, every time!!

In this thought process his lhand sliped from her shoulder and fringers brushed through her milky soft, smoth n white arm..

His touch sent shivers down her spine, her gaze shifted to her arm at first and then the next moment she was looking at him with wide open eyes..

His lips now curved into a naughty smile, he again moved towards her lips, this time she pushed him away. Not that she did not want a kiss , afteralll he had effect on her which she could never resist . but this tim the guilt of betraying him, insulting his family in her obbsetion took over..

This wasn't an easy task for her to push him , neither emotionally nor physically. Thus, she ended up falling on the floor n hurting her ankle..

R- aah!!

L- what happened?

R(pushing him again)- none of ur matter..

L shut-up!!

(he lifts her up in his arms)

R- leave me I'll manage

l- Biwiw u have 2 options A) let me help u..B) let me help u..an dthis time there is no change in option b accept that I will do it against ur will .. so be happy

laksh now applies balm on her twisted ankle and puts a crape bandage over it.. ragya now share an eyelock...

Ab naa tu rakhna tu
Mere dil ka ye chhota-mota haq maar ke
Galati se galati ki
Kab pichhe-pichhe aa tere
Jhak maar ke

Tujh pe na aitbar mujhe
Pheeka lage tera pyar mujhe
Main na banau dildaar tujhe
Saare sapne te jhoote ab tak pyaar ke

Dil jaane Rab Jaane
Na khabar pe main tere ab dil haar ke
Galati se galati ki
Kab pichhe-pichhe aaya tere
Jhak maar ke

Jab jab yara dhoondo tujhko
Paa loon main khud ko hi
Tu hi hai mera pata

Ho..
Tujh se ab na mohabbat hai
Teri na mujhko zarurat hai
Meri tto aisi surat hai
Lag jayenge yahaan ab dil haar ke

Laakhon mein ek main hu
Koi aayega na aage ab is yaar ke
Galati se galati ki
Kab pichhe-pichhe aaya tere
Jhak Maar Ke

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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww what a lovely and intense part😳
Loved it❤️

Waiting for the next
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sudhi03

Aww what a lovely and intense part😳

Loved it❤️

Waiting for the next

Thanks for reading
Yes I will try to update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
A request- friends this is a request pls leave honest n true comments , weather u like the update or not cause this matters a lot. Pls leave ur comments, even of u feel that ur not satisfied then criticism is welcome..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update...

ragini is really strong n adamant...

she s still stuck to her decision...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Viji.Chandran

nice update...

ragini is really strong n adamant...

she s still stuck to her decision...

Thanks for reading
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really nice update please post the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rbb1

Really nice update please post the next part soon

Thanks n sure

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