Ragya ss- Mere dilki malkin part21 up PG 47 - Page 21

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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG! Interesting teaser!!👏 Plzz update soon.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rbb1

Great teaser please post the next update soon

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Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

OMG! Interesting teaser!!👏 Plzz update soon.😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg!?! Very interesting teasrr... Update soon dear..😃
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Originally posted by: -Claptrap-

Omg!?! Very interesting teasrr... Update soon dear..😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
What??

Okay... Waiting..

Nice!!

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Originally posted by: ShirishaTeddy

What??

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Posted: 9 years ago
oh God.!!!
interesting teaser
can't wait fr nxt one nd about ur last update,it was jst awsm...
laksh nd his 2 options r always brilliant nw ragini also ha ha so cute...
overall superb
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part-15

Hi all so I know I am updating as if after ages , but got stuck up with other stories .. well here is the next part hope u will like it it might be quite sad in the ending but it has to be .. for something more intense next time..sorry for this chori update but soon I will give a longer obe


After 2 days-
Laksh woke up early in the mrng in prepared some tea for ragini n himself.. he brought it in her room n woke her up

L- GM biwi
R- GM laksh

He forwarded her tea..
R- laksh Ji humein boliya kijiye Na ,hum ...
L- I know tum bana dogi .. but is this not good..
R- bahut achi h..
L- hmm thanks acha listen get ready asap aaj Maa ki ..
R- barsi h.. (moisture formed in her eyes..)
L- hmm (n he came forward, wiped her tears n he placed he head on his shoulder... )

Ragini was having few tears escaping her eyes..but still controlling them she got up from his shoulder..

R- woh sorry laksh ..

N she left for a shower.. laksh did nothing but simply arranged things in the kitchen for her to use.. n when she arrived he helped her with cooking as well as prepared for the puja ..

In the afternoon they were done with all the rituals n she simply entered her room n sat on the bed clutching a photo of her n janki close to her heart... tears were making their way out .. laksh stood on the door.. he wanted to be with her but then he knew she might end up saying a sorry for coming close to him..

He simply moved to the kitchen for some water.. on this return he saw her she was on a call n then she was crying badly .. her dupatta over her mouth.. he this time entered.. he pulled her in his arms.. he didn't knew what had happened but he can't see her like that n hence he stayed there for quite long till she slept something in him wanted to know the caller who made his ragini cry...

He took her phone n listened to the last convo it was with dadi.. n was heartbreaking..

He knew his family was upset from her leaving him like that .. But she never disclosed this dadi was shouting at her like anything.. she was telling her how her actions were spoiling the family name in the samajh .. when ragini urged talking to sharmishta dadi rudely replied she has no r8 to ask for love from the person whom she hurted badly in different ways.. when ragini tried once more dadi was mad at her she asked her never to call again as she was dead for them n she can go anywhere n do anything..

L- ragini y do u have to hide all this from me ... but don't worry I will not leave u alone...

In the evening laksh played the recorded call n asked her y she did not disclosed this to him ..
R- hum aapko pareshan nahi karna chahte the ..
L- really ragini..
R- ji laksh..
L- yrr u know what you are stuck in this problem for no reason come with me back n everything will be fine...
R- nahi laksh yeh nahi ho sakta..
L- kyun..
R- kyunki hum aapke saath nahi ana chahte..
L- so what u want to do stay here n cry...
R- nahi laksh par bas hum nahi aayenge wapas..
L- yeh kya kehe rahi ho do you have any idea ..
R- laksh hum sahi keh rahe h .. aur humein kisi baat ka bura nahi laga..kyunki I am a criminal.. who did kidnappings..tried to murder n ... n tried to blame an innocent man with fake molestation charges.. so if no one loves me it's OK because this is what I deserve to be not loved ..
L- shut up .. u know what sanskaar have forgiven u long back n he is the only one who wants his dupatta wali dost back.. all others are so much angry on u...

R- par.

L- sshhh!! Come back .
R- no laksh Pls..
Saying this she locked herself in her room..
L- ragini open the door
R- no u go back I ain't coming
L- but y
R- because I am a criminal n I deserve this but u deserve a better life n better life partner..
L- ragini tumhare par 2 options h 1) come with me n 2) come with me n this time in b Almighty will bri us together..
R- laksh u go god too punishes those who sinned ..
L- pls ek last time come out.


Main hoon aadha mujh mein
Baaki aadha hai tu
Dil mein kam hai dhadkan
Yaara zyaada hai tu

Bin sune sun lunga main
Bin kahe tu kehna
Tu.. mere mere paas toh hai na..
Tu.. mere mere paas toh hai na
..

She came n he immediately pinned her to a wall n placed his rough lips on her soft Rosy ones... they kissed..
At 1st she was confused but then ahe too responded..

They broke it due to lack of oxygen n then laksh moved towards her neck n gave her a love bite...
L- now u will come sooner..
Saying this he handed her a gift n left...



Pyaar hai aisa khel yaara
Tanha koi bhi jeeta nahi
Tu jahaan thak ke beth jaaye
Adh jaaunga main bhi wahin

Bin sune sun lunga main
Bin kahe tu kehna
Tu.. mere mere paas toh hai na..
Tu.. mere mere paas toh hai na..

Baarishein kitni dil se guzri
Meri aankhein na bheegi kabhi
Tu agar pal bhar door jaaye
Baadlon saa main ro doon abhi

Bin sune sun lunga main
Bin kahe tu kehna
Tu.. mere mere paas toh hai na.. haan..
Tu.. mere mere paas toh hai na.. haan..




Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update 👏

hope RagLak become one soon

update soon

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