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Chapter 2


And look how the mighty have fallen!!! For a guy who takes 10 seconds to zone out a girl, 10 minutes to strike a conversation and 30 minutes to have the top score is standing like a frickin' lamp post for last one week! God! Di, I can't help but laugh out loud at this madness of epic proportions! How did a man, okay scratch that, a magnificent man such as Maddy got reduced to such a state??? Oh poor thing! My heart goes out to you...really!!


So Maddy is a man and he needs to face his Maleficent like a man but then knows nothing as to what would happen next...and I believed this was the man who never backed down from a challenge especially when that challenge was getting on the flirt side...I just can't stop laughing! And then of course your brilliant writings about sick in the heart or head or whatever part Maddy was seriously affected in...baah...I am ROFL!! This:

Maddy took a deep breath.

Firstly: I am a man. Secondly I am not lovelorn. Me thinks I just sick in heart, head or whichever part this love thing affects and am going to be fine soon. Thirdly the girl is not a wisp of a girl. I mean just look at her.

And then this too!!

So back to original question.

What is Maddy going to do about this situation?

A. Either he walks no make that run, far far away from her.

B. Or face her like a man.

Second option sounds fantastic. But what should he do after facing her like a man?

The voice gave up.

Back to square one.

You made my day!!

Nimmo di, you are simply the best and me mohabbats you! Bas!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the updates dear...three back to back chapters...enjoyed tons
Chapter 7 was full of fun...loved the way Maddy saved shivani from the three men...and turned them into her brothers...:P:P:P and also taught them to love their neighbours... And yeah he surely wasn't hibernating...he was playing an important part in Angel... and loved the way he was teasing her by showing off his bike... You make me too fall in love with every vehicle in this ff- be it sanskar's Lamborghini or Maddy's beast bikes...

Chapter 8- so the love guru Maddy is slowly getting allergic to girls...LOL...and yeah shivani was actually acting like a jealous girlfriend... Or maybe a jealous wife...and FINALLY she came to know that Maddy loves her...in fact fell for Her at the first sight...now it's time for her to understand her feelings... Hope she soon will...and I was also thinking of sanskar and swara's reactions on meeting her...they will meet her soon after all...(hopefully)... this girl is actually a female version of sanskar...so eagerly waiting for them to meet and know each other

Chapter 9 was a mixture of everything... Fun, emotions and shocks... I was feeling so sad when Maddy's dear bike got wrecked...hopefully it gets alright soon...and Maddy exploring shivani's home like it was his own...it soon will...(hopefully again) and the lawn part was awesome... But the part after that was full of shocks...shivani's getting married after a week????damn... I don't want Maddy's love story to end even before it starts...hopefully shivani soon realizes that she loves Maddy and they both do something to sort things out...and a question popped up in my mind at the end of the chapter... Is Maddy walking out without his dear bike??how can he leave his love alone???? Anyways the chapters were awesome...

Loved all chapters... Will be waiting eagerly for the next ones...update soon dear...till then love ya, tc and keep it up dear
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You are too quick...anyways loved te 10th chapter too...it was undoubtedly the best of all the updates done today
So FINALLY shivani realized that she loves Maddy...and loved the character of Mr ranawat...that's like a good dad...supporting your daughter in every decision of hers...the character is wayyy tooo goood...and so now we come to know that shivani agreed to marry Jose just so that she doesn't have to marry any unknown Sharma, mishra or Pandey...so that's the reason... But I don't understand why was her mother forcing her?????? Why doesn't she want to support her daughter?????? I doubt will she accept Maddy... Anyways her father to there to support her and Maddy...(hopefully)

And I am so much in love with the Sanskar-swara-maddy-bozo family... Loved the way sanskar was cheering Maddy and urging him to fight his own battle...it reminded me of the part when Maddy was urging sanskar to return to swara and not destroy his love story himself...just like sanskar was chanting his darkness-light theory, we have Maddy chanting his assassin-cop theory...these brothers are just the same... I so love this brother duo...and swara and bozo were also trying their best to cheer Maddy up...and finally they convinced him to go for shivani... And now our hound will go to hunt his huntress...hope he is not late...he won't- I believe

Loved this chapter too...will be waiting for the next one...till then love ya and tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey is this story going to end so soon???? I just noticed the note saying that there is an epilogue ...so is that it?????damn I don't want it to end so soon...😭😭 anyways if you are ending it so soon, I request you to return with some writing of yours...reading your stories has become a daily habit for me...won't be easy to get over it...

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