Angel Short Sequel - Hound's tale.

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Olivia12

@Olivia12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Hello dear Nimmi,
A fabulous, fun-filled, light-hearted and very cute update😊

Poor, poor Maddy out of the frying pan and into the fire😆😆... his girl turned out to be a super-cop😆😆

Finally the truth is out... both Maddy and Shivani decide to never cross another's path, best of luck with that.😛 Whether you like it or not Maddy but your love story's title is going to be Hound and the Huntress😃

Maddy, Bozo, Swara and Sanskaar bonding is awesome and I always love their time together... Little kitten and little Angel sounds like a perfect second epilogue for Swara and Sanskaar's love story😉.

Thanks for posting another chapter so soon😃
So, hound and huntress meet again and what a thrilling chase👏
With their inability to keep their hands off one another, their love story seems to be very much on😃
Happy Holi and lots of love❤️

Edited by Olivia12 - 9 years ago

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Nupur

@Nupur_5

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Another update! Again caught it before PM!

Off to read now!

Till then Res:

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aamias

@aamias

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#143

nimmi after the first encounter with angel story i could only say it is brilliant as your writing.

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lilak

@lilak

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Nimmi I want to say something...can I say that..ok 1 2 3...I LOVE YOUUU...ok I love u so muchhh baby, ummmah...long live and keep giving us such wonderful FFs...It was awesum...maddy & shivani,I love them...plz take them to swasan marraige..plzzz...& again love u

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treta

@tr_eta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

beautiful update...,the chase was awesome

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#146

haha that was emotionl plus cheesy in last scene

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Richa

@navyasingh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Nimmi🤗

Thanks for this update yaar😃

Me off to read this chapter😊. Will review in some time.

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Sorry...my net is behaving all wonky

Nimmi🤗
Thanks for this update. You are really a sweetheart😃. And wishing a very happy holi to you too😊.

So, destiny made them meet again. And what a way it met them meet; when both of them were on their respective duties😆. Oh wow.. Maddy could sense Shivani's presence even before he heard her voice😳.

I loved their banter Nimmi😃. And also loved Maddy's and Shivani's monolouges. They were very hilarious😆.

Seems like both of them missed each other. It was lovely when they addressed each other as huntress and hound😳. Totally apt name for both of them.

Shivani is definitely very bossy. Aww... I loved her concern for Maddy when he jumped of that building and her releif when she saw him safe and sound.

I loved that chase of hound and huntress😃. It was really well described. Shivani did give Maddy a though competition. But better luck next time in catching him successfully. These 2 are crazy ; jumping on from a building to another like a Spiderman🤪.

I extremely loved seeing this side of Maddy😊. The way he was so much concerned about Shivani and when he just burst out at her. No matter how much I laugh at Maddy's current situation; the poor guy's heart and mind is all messed up. All thanks to all the shocks destiny is providing him. Nimmi, you really depicted his shock, his fear and rage all very well. Even his outburst was good⭐️. But ya no one is at fault here. Its all destiny.

Maddy cares too much for Shivani. Her reassurance had this calming effect on him. His mood instantly got changed😳.

Maddy is crazy😆. He knows how to win any battle either by hook or by crook. Haha... the way he distracted our girl and sneakily tricked her😆😳. He even handcuffed her. An cop handcuffed by an assassin😆. But this is extremely not fair to Shivani. Poor girl was so flustered by the whole closeness part.😳

That kiss was intense and passionate☺️ . I am loving Maddy's intense avtar. Haha... In last chapter both were horrified out at that kiss part😆 and now see them.Both are equally insane.

Waiting for their next meeting. Waiting to see how will the destiny make them meet next.😊

Loved that last parting hug. And that kiss on forehead was so adorable thing. A sweet gesture by Maddy.😳😃

Thank you for this fantastic update Nimmi. It was amazing⭐️. And I really loved this chapter. This meeting of Maddy and Shivani is mine most fav one😊. Really loved Maddy in this chapter. We Got to see some different shades of him.

Once again thanks for the double update today😃.
Take care
Lots and lots of love🤗

Edited by navyasingh - 9 years ago

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Teddy94

@Teddy94

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Awesome update..

Loving it.. Continue soon😊

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Sree

@Sree8410

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#149

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Nimmy 🤗

You know when I saw Shivani was on guard duty saving some politician, I knew Maddy would be the assasin. Loved the run and chase. Her concern came out when Maddy jumped of the roof, but is a tough cookie. Retraced his steps and made the leap.

I knew she would try again with the last jump. Thanks goodness Maddy came to rescue, otherwise it would have been the end of Hound and Huntress. I loved his concern for her scolding her. And she was listening to all that. How chweet??? And to top that he made her promise to stay safe. How can any girl resist such a sweet guy who genuinely cares for her?.

And he handcuffed her. Really Maddy??? But then again its for her own safety I guess. But I loved the kiss and the passion here. She here too matched his every step on the way. Love them too. Maybe as much as I love Angel and his Kitten.

I like Shivani in this one. She is as good as Mav in his profession. Would love to see once they overcome their current situation and Maddy introducing her to his family. I would be fun to see her face when she gets to know who his brother is I mean the old Sanskar Rudra Pradap Rana.😆

Love

Sree

Edited by Sree8410 - 9 years ago