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svg98

@svg98

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome beginning..
Is Swara her mom..description tells its Swara only..
Sanskar is so sad..What happened that she left him..and he so desperately wish that their daughter dont grow to be like her..
Cant wait to read more..
Update soon..

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

Mukku aise suspense is nt good.
isko jaldi cmplete kar and azaab ko bhi
vaha sanky yaha swara...
yaar yesab kya he.
i am nt liking it actually i like it.
dard wala love...
do update soon.

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zeenucharm

@zeenucharm

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

Interesting prologue... Waiting for 1 part.. . When u r upload a new part plzzz pm me...

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Nice prologue.

Sanskar and his little princess,his daughter..

But what happen to swara

Eagerly waiting for your next update

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Hi Mukta,

I like it a lot. The moment he asked for princess I knew this is papa daughter bond wali sory. That name is cute Khwaish...so who is this mama again? Not Swara I suppose...Kavita? Hmm... Please do continue soon. Waiting to read more.

Love,

Sakura

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Nupur

@Nupur_5

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Mukta my jaan, another awesome story...Yaayyy!

So many suspense! On top of that you still didn't revealed the suspense of Ajaab!

Plz update soon...Both!

And plz don't forget to PM me :)

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1025621

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

Nice start
continue soon
waiting for more

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Dear..

Another Story...im sooo excited...awesome prologue...

Khwaish...sansku daughter..i hope mum is kavita...n swara come as her second to be mum...finger crossed...

Pm me...

Do update soon

Love

Talia

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Please update soon...superb and so cute...cannot wait for part one and let me guess kavita was the mum and swara will become the angel in there much needed life...