Vajra : An elven tale SwaSan chapter 13 page 52 Updated 21/5/16 - Page 105

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Res for comment on Chap 14. This is my 5000th post. 😊

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Res for comment on Chap 14. This is my 5000th post.😊

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik

Woah!!! Congooo Viji😉🥳

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Aww my lovely sister became rockz!!! 😃 Tons of congratulations on your way dearest. It's an honor that you marked your milestone on Vajra, that too in the first thread itself.
Love you loads,
Saku

Originally posted by: fangirl1012

Intriguing. I hope Sansakar realizes in time about the web of lies surrounding him. The bonding between Sansakar and Swara is so cute. Although it doesn't have romantic undertones there is some spark in their interactions. Keep up the good work. I have read and re read all of your stories now and you are a fabulous writer. It's so hard to decide which story of yours is my favorite😊

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Res for 12😊

Dear Saku,

Hi Nyna😊

And I am late - yet again. 😭And I am not sure how to make up for that either. Could you forgive me, yet again?😳

Of cause, we do cherish our golden history of forgiving each other don't we?😳

Annapurna - She is truly up to no good. So she is aware that Swara is Sanskaar's Lumiere and wants to destroy her to weaken him (does she want her son to be the Vajra??? - Lakshya does become the master of Aithne and would use it in the duel with Sanskaar, right?). But she is right in one thing - she would not be able to handle Sanskaar's wrath, powerful or not, he would be a force to reckon with once he finds out her intentions to harm Swara (he already has his doubts and that is before he falls in love with Swara).
Annapurna is still warming up, trust me. She has a lot more secrets up her sleeve😈 As for what she wants, it goes beyond Lakshya, but what you said is also a part of it. Sanskar is an open minded individual, so he would take a stand for what he thinks right, Annapurna fears this quality in him. You're right, in the current standing AP would find it hard to deal with him.

Swara does not recognise Sanskaar Maheshwari though she can recall the Yuvraj Sanskaar at nineteen years of age - another illusion cast by him or is it that she did not catch a glimpse of him then?
The spell Sanskar cast makes her unable to recognize him in any of her memories😊

And when she ends up trusting him, she is entrapped in the spell cast by him. Swara who knows that the Yuvraj wants to capture her, Swara who carries a burning hatred for him who in her opinion is cold and evil, Swara who trusts the Oneiro because she feels that the Vajra prince would never have one in his force - she does not realise that what she thinks is real and what she believes in is the actual illusion and the Yuvraj for whom she has such anger and from whom she is now hiding from, in the end, he is the only reality for her.
I like the way you put it, just reminds me, how alluringly truth can be presented😳

One truth, one secret and one wall broken - that was the spell - cast by the Oneiro. One truth(she was awake because she could not sleep and that she never had a home long enough to be homesick) , one secret (she admits to be on the run from Yuvraj) one wall broken (when she confess her anger for Sanskaar and her fear of those who made him that way) - And Swara is entrapped.

True. That has many aspects still. It is a dangerous spell to get involved in, it makes you too emotionally involved with the target of your enchantment. I would say Sanskar was over confident when he went for this choice.

This tale is enchanting and leaves me spellbound. Each update slowly and surely entangling me into the elven tale and binding me to their lands, a magic that makes me willingly surrender to its spell and actually has me begging for more. The truth is that you are a master story teller and your tale is a spell cast on us, cast by a Master story teller.

love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: lucky.m

well it was very intriguing read saku like always🤗 ,👏 👏see I cleared all my questions as if now . haila waht do I write in comment😲😲

chalo gotta go now , Sleep calling ..good to know you are having some time off .. enjoy your time and I told you questions answers ..😉

Love

Lucky

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Saku my dear...🤗 🤗

First of all, I feel really awful for having res'd for the past 4 chapters, and not being able to un res within the time I'd thought I could. I don't know...the minute I sit down to type out my comments, something or the other keeps coming up. I'm so sorry my dear kid sis. 😕

I feel really guilty even telling you an extended time frame for my un res's now, since I've not been able to stick to my earlier committed timelines. 😔 😭 But I will un res the soonest I'm able to do so my dear, that's a promise.

In the meantime, I just wanted to say that I have been reading all the recent chapters again, to soak up the feel of the saga before commenting. And I was blown away, all over again, by the sheer vividness and scope of your imagination.

It takes a lot courage and vision to break so completely from serial canon, to structure a tale that has nothing to do with the serial plotline whatsoever. Apart from the essential traits of the characters we love so well (and of some others we are quite ambivalent about 😛 😆), your vision is a magnificent creation all of your own.

I was reminded of the words from an ad (for Etihad Airways 😊). The brand being advertised of course has no similarity to the tale of Vajra, but the words seemed so apt for the breathtaking innovativeness and creativity you've shown here.

""Occasionally people come along who are not content with merely moving things along. They want to take things further. Tear up the plans and start again. They insist that the dream is possible, and take a running jump into the uncharted. They aim not for reinvention of the superficial kind, because they want more. Their goal is not to merely improve upon what has been done before...but totally reimagine it". 😉 😃

Kudos for having the vision to reimagine SwaSan, Ragini/ Janki, Lakshya, Annapurna, Sharmishta, Shekar, Dida, Adarsh and all the others, in this fabulous Elven setting. Not to mention a bevy of other supporting characters all of your own imagination. Bravo. 👏 👏