SwaSan FF: Forced into Marrying your soulmate(Thread 2 Link on page 1) - Page 99

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Posted: 9 years ago


Once again Thank you for your awesome Support .Down below is the link of Thread 2. Will update Chapter ten soon . . Sorry for the delay . Will try to update in before the weekend



Edited by NitaReid - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dear Nita,

I know I res'ed for chapter 8 but it has been so long so posting my comments here for both 8 and 9.

Chapter 8 - Sanskaar's introspection - well Nita, that was a lovely portrayal of Sanskaar's thought process, clear logical and not devoid of emotions. He does think with his heart and act with his mind; which is why he knows that he would always care for Swara's happiness and if walking out of the marriage would be her ultimate decision (we know it won't but he doesn't) he would let her do so, even if it was not what he wanted. And that his where his mind cautions his heart -but when in the history of human existence did the heart ever listen to the mind - and the heart did throw a googly to the mind - it was silenced when the heart wanted to know what would be the course of action if Swara fell in love with him but he did not; so round 1 goes to the heart.

The touches of humour were great - Sanskaar answers Adarsh's call greeting him as Swara - way to go - if this was counted as a round in the game - then even round would go to the heart.

Sujatha - however well she means her actions end up proving otherwise. But Sanskaar is always there to save the day. He is so considerate and the scene where he introduces Swara to his parents and her response - very touching. Then the slight angst for Swara - the unidentified girl in the photographs - (cleared in the next chapter, so am not dwelling on that here)

The party invitation - such different reactions for the four of them - Sanskaar hesitant, Swara accepting, Lakshya (his cupid playing role is going to create too many problems) and jealousy in Ragini (she truly has a long way to go) And finally the rain - unsure of the results: Ragini falls sick because she got drenched while it is indirectly the cause of decrease in distance between Swara and Sanskaar (sort of - the pillow wall is not too much of a wall)

Chapter 9 - Sanskaar wakes up to find Swara's hand still on his chest and he is careful to get up without disturbing her. And then he ended up babysitting - he does not mind that, though.

I feel sorry for Swara though, she seems to be facing flak from her mother too, agreed it was out of concern that Sharmishta admonished her, but then maybe Sharmishta could have been a little more tactful. And after that she had to be confronted with Ragini's confessions though she seemed to handle those fine- competitions huh - sounds interesting, very very interesting especially considering who the judges are - Sujatha, Lakshya who loves Ragini but is more interested in playing cupid (so he might favour Swara hoping to impress Sanskaar - plausible and it would be with the expected disastrous results) and Sanskaar who would be trying his best to be fair and considerate.

Considerate he was, he so correctly guessed the dilemma that Swara would be in and his gesture and the words explaining his actions (that it was only a gift which she could take as though from a friend and not an obligation) - how considerate - Swara is slowly being won over - unknown to her. And then the party arrangements - the absence of the subtle and elegant touches; sigh when would Laksh learn - Poor SwaSan, angry but unable to show the same so they get it out by discussing what they could do to Laksh short of killing him outright.

Those girls - it is true that people are callous and petty but then it would be nice if they at least, gave some consideration to where they were - but Swara's reply was good. She goes searching for Sanskaar, seeking comfort and instead has to contend with his ''ex-girlfriend' (thankfully as per her statement) and Sanskaar is quick to clear the air. Is is surprising how blind some can be - here is Sanskaar completely brushing her off and yet Tara goes on and on about how he was her first love etc.

The ride back home was one of recounting - So Sanskaar is also slowly realising that maybe his heart is beating to a different tune when it comes to Swara.

The SanLak conversation - talking to Laksh must feel like banging one's head against a brick wall - no make that a stone wall - he just not get it. Laksh should realise that not everyone has the same views that he does and it would be wise to let others make their own decisions - especially if it concerns Sanskaar and Swara. For his sake, I hope he does learn soon. And what a contrast the talk and sharing between Swara and Sanskaar - maturity and understanding that they display.

And finally Uttara's bewilderment - nobody told her about Kavita walking out and Sanskaar marrying Swara! Wonder how she would react!

Please do update soon.

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago

Nita
I am really happy after reading your reply.
waiting for your next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow...!! Amazing update..
Swasan are falling for each other...and Annapurna is so bad ..didn't expect her such way and Ajay speech embrassing swasan was very funny and very well described...

Swara was feeling jealous ...hahaha 😃
Story is going very well ...sorry for late comment and also for not commenting on the previous ..

Love
Soundharya..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi sissy!!!
Sorry for late...while reading I need peace environment and I love reading..so its just took more time...
Coming to story..

Dress selection was superb..nice sense..apt for swara..

Entry of love brids..the way sanskar understand her situation giving his hand..just it mean I will beside or stand with you forever..i love it..she took it willingly wow..so cute scene..

Centre of attraction...well party was boring...good arrangement made by cupid fellow..sanskar impressing swara without any intention in it by knowing all employees names..well good man and names engraved..wow superb idea I love it sissy...nicely explained..

Ajay hahaha..he did his job correctly if not he might fired...actually his head hang between two brothers..omg how laksh prepared speech..so boring ah...pity for all who present there hahaha last swasan both ready to kill laksh...cupid boy..well imagination has no bound..i loved it ...

Oh poor sanskar...in cupid play he used to apologize..but its just start of the paly naah..Then I think lot of sorry is pending for sanskar...no worries swara will understand her prince..

Abhi toh party shru hui yeh naah..club mood...thanks to ajay and laksh..hahah

20 mintues dance..wow sanskar making her to feel comfortable..and it was gentle moments but both loose themselves hahaha well your words are perfect here sissy..

So swara affected by his touch,smile..almost at his charm..good improvement to her feelings ...WTH ..cheap employees...urghhh but what to many ppl are there like this around us..no can escape from them...you used this idea at correct place ...again ur words hats off..But their words are create some changes..or doubt..
Her blushes change to sad mood..oh god even tears rolled on.." :( to add more spice you revealed mystery person..I think using your ideas at correct place..but happy seeing sanskar reply to his friend.oh pity swara mind rolling seeing tara near her husband..hahahha😆

Again swara questions all details about tara..peak of jealousy..i enjoyed it..

Buffet part was awesome sissy..i,loved it...exactly why we can change jealous to curiosity.hahaha ...whole part was well explained..

Awww sanskar too and affected by their dance..he escaped from tara..you cleared it by telling us sanskar thought about whole part sequence..superb sissy

Finally ..swara beti be happy now..caller is your sister in law..Even im relief..hahaha..swara felt tension free..

Suprise guest hahaha no way sissy..its shock for me..why her entry..but good swasan can get some moments regarding this problem.oh why laksh playing this kind of game..creating trouble for swara..now she cant escape.. Swara care to Ragini..AP never understand it..

Now Ap got all happened things in MM..sujatha ji superb praising swara..non stop..i feel different sasuma from daily soap..i love the portrayed character very well.

Sanlak convo was too good..sanskar warning him but he was so cool in this cupid play decision..nice sissy...sanskar behaved well matured..

Swasan part..again. Its awesome sissy..
Swara sharing her pain,finally open up about Ap accusations and Ragini jealous for her.sanskar listen everthing and gave perfect answer to console or assure all will set in some time..nice..i love whole sequence..sharing bed idea hope its continues regularly..swara yeah you're lucky until sanskar with you..(forever)..
AP WENT OFF..offo...

Nice family timing ..again one more entry..tired..(fun)..
Actually its suprise entry not AP sissy..

Uttara innocent..loce and care to family nice intro for her..
But when important thing turned out...sanskar handled very well..sanskar is always gem..
Well overall wonderful and perfect update..

Love you
Leku
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah


Nita
I am really happy after reading your reply.
waiting for your next update.


Will try to update by today dear😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Soundharya_01

Wow...!! Amazing update..

Swasan are falling for each other...and Annapurna is so bad ..didn't expect her such way and Ajay speech embrassing swasan was very funny and very well described...

Swara was feeling jealous ...hahaha 😃
Story is going very well ...sorry for late comment and also for not commenting on the previous ..

Love
Soundharya..



Thanks dear..Happy to know you liked this update.. Yes SwaSan are falling for each other slowly.. Annapurna is the main antagoinst in the story 😉. Please no need for sorry , you can comment when you have time ,No pressure.

Love

Nita
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Posted: 9 years ago
@talia,Nyna and Lekah - I know it is so bad of me to not reply to your lovely comments till now. My sincere apologies . Will try to get on it once i update the next chapter as i want to give a worth reply to the awesome comments .

Love

Nita
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NitaReid

@talia,Nyna and Lekah - I know it is so bad of me to not reply to your lovely comments till now. My sincere apologies . Will try to get on it once i update the next chapter as i want to give a worth reply to the awesome comments .

Love

Nita




Hahha take your time..!!!

Excited to read further update..
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing storyline. ...
Beautiful. ...
Lovely story. ...

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