SwaSan FF: Forced into Marrying your soulmate(Thread 2 Link on page 1) - Page 100

Originally posted by: SWARNA99

Amazing storyline. ...

Beautiful. ...

Lovely story. ...

Originally posted by: krishuuu

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Nita dear...😳Hi Talia dear🤗

Brilliant chapter dear...too much enjoyable...👏...Thanks and Happy to know you liked it dear and so sorry for such a late reply 😊

Whole party for swasan was wonderfully planned...thanks to lakshya n office staff...loved swasan convo when the speech was delivered...n that dance was muahhh...After all Lakshya need to be good at something 😉.. Well i usually go on commenting like that if i have to listen to some chessy long speech like i am gonna be here till i am 60 😆... Happy to know you liked the dance sequence

U brought a jealousy n possesiveness element in story...swara confrontation with jealous female staff n that retaliation ...bravo n after that shona jealousy to see tara...was sooo apt...but sansku entinguished burning flames of jealousy in swara...by avoiding tara n giving full attention to her...kissy to sansku..sooo intelligent..😃...I dont always am big fan of possessive or jealousy girlfriend but i think it kind of suits this realtionship given the circumstance they got married, if i find someone jealous or possessive after knowing there partners for long then i dont appreciate it ..Ofcourse Sanskar is sooo intelligent😆😆

Dinner n car scene was beautifully written..swara is understanding sansku n her misunderstanding clears about the heart in his mobile..that his sis...awww😳.. As always i hate MU ,so will resolve it as soon as i create one in fast express just like the cvs wrapping up every track in minutes😉

MM scene was good but wait a min.. annu was at home..ahhh hate her here...n shona hidding her beautiful form in gown from her...was funny ...😆 n annoying too..😕..Why annoying if i may ask?

Lakshya n sansku convo was much needed...coz lucky is constantly interfering in his life..n they are hating it..but im loving it..my cupid boy...😉...I love it too , Or else you would not have got the party to begin with😆

Swara n sansku bedroom part was the best..how he comforted her ..she can share anything with him...that the bestest thing..n he gives her best solution..elated to see their bonding...😳..Happy to know you liked it that much dear😳

N finally the morning scene..uttara doesnot recognize swara bcoz sansku didnot told her about marrying swara instead of kavita...about kavita eloping...😲..You have read the next one by now ,so dont need to explain i suppose😆

Uptil now i have maintained that sansku is intelligent n sooo thoughtfull..how can u be this stupidboy??😕?shona would feel sooo bad that u did not told about her...she would feel unwanted...😭u fool sansku..i hope u sort everything...finger crossed...😲Again you know how it played out ,so i hope you are calm down now😉

Desperate for next..update soon...

Sorry for late unres... ..I updated the next one 😆, that how late i am on my reply ,so please no need for sorry

Love

Talia😳

Love

Nita

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Nita, Hi Nyna dear😃

I know I res'ed for chapter 8 but it has been so long so posting my comments here for both 8 and 9.

Chapter 8 - Sanskaar's introspection - well Nita, that was a lovely portrayal of Sanskaar's thought process, clear logical and not devoid of emotions. He does think with his heart and act with his mind; which is why he knows that he would always care for Swara's happiness and if walking out of the marriage would be her ultimate decision (we know it won't but he doesn't) he would let her do so, even if it was not what he wanted. And that his where his mind cautions his heart -but when in the history of human existence did the heart ever listen to the mind - and the heart did throw a googly to the mind - it was silenced when the heart wanted to know what would be the course of action if Swara fell in love with him but he did not; so round 1 goes to the heart.Wow you are summarization of that scene was so good than the actual scene , 😆. And you were spot on as well. He will always let her go if that was her decision even if he is hopelessly in love with her by that time.

The touches of humour were great - Sanskaar answers Adarsh's call greeting him as Swara - way to go - if this was counted as a round in the game - then even round would go to the heart.Heart always wins 😉

Sujatha - however well she means her actions end up proving otherwise. But Sanskaar is always there to save the day. He is so considerate and the scene where he introduces Swara to his parents and her response - very touching. Then the slight angst for Swara - the unidentified girl in the photographs - (cleared in the next chapter, so am not dwelling on that here)..I felt like it was time for Swara to meet his parents as well. 😊 ..Yeah i cleared it 😆.

The party invitation - such different reactions for the four of them - Sanskaar hesitant, Swara accepting, Lakshya (his cupid playing role is going to create too many problems) and jealousy in Ragini (she truly has a long way to go) And finally the rain - unsure of the results: Ragini falls sick because she got drenched while it is indirectly the cause of decrease in distance between Swara and Sanskaar (sort of - the pillow wall is not too much of a wall)..Yeah each had different reaction to the party ... Pillow wall is not really a wall after all😆

Chapter 9 - Sanskaar wakes up to find Swara's hand still on his chest and he is careful to get up without disturbing her. And then he ended up babysitting - he does not mind that, though...Well he loves his new job😉

I feel sorry for Swara though, she seems to be facing flak from her mother too, agreed it was out of concern that Sharmishta admonished her, but then maybe Sharmishta could have been a little more tactful. Yeah sometime even if it our mothers they cant always expect us to understand them in spite how much there words hurt us. So Sharmitha worry is understandable but not her approach

And after that she had to be confronted with Ragini's confessions though she seemed to handle those fine- competitions huh - sounds interesting, very very interesting especially considering who the judges are - Sujatha, Lakshya who loves Ragini but is more interested in playing cupid (so he might favour Swara hoping to impress Sanskaar - plausible and it would be with the expected disastrous results) and Sanskaar who would be trying his best to be fair and considerate.If you read the latest update, i am sure you would be disappointed , it just that i want to focus on Swasan more and it felt like Swaragini are getting too much of importance, i had planned it out though...But had to cancel on it

Considerate he was, he so correctly guessed the dilemma that Swara would be in and his gesture and the words explaining his actions (that it was only a gift which she could take as though from a friend and not an obligation) - how considerate - Swara is slowly being won over - unknown to her. And then the party arrangements - the absence of the subtle and elegant touches; sigh when would Laksh learn - Poor SwaSan, angry but unable to show the same so they get it out by discussing what they could do to Laksh short of killing him outright.Well Lucky made Ragini fall in love using the so called tactics, so he thought her cousin will be the same, how can he know Swara is different from Ragini and instead of falling in love with her husband she might become a killer 😆

Those girls - it is true that people are callous and petty but then it would be nice if they at least, gave some consideration to where they were - but Swara's reply was good. She goes searching for Sanskaar, seeking comfort and instead has to contend with his ''ex-girlfriend' (thankfully as per her statement) and Sanskaar is quick to clear the air. Is is surprising how blind some can be - here is Sanskaar completely brushing her off and yet Tara goes on and on about how he was her first love etc...Well some people are like that, they will never try to look from the other side of the coin, they choose to stick with the story that is more interesting...

The ride back home was one of recounting - So Sanskaar is also slowly realising that maybe his heart is beating to a different tune when it comes to Swara...He is but i like them to fall in love at there own pace..So he wont realize it soon though😉

The SanLak conversation - talking to Laksh must feel like banging one's head against a brick wall - no make that a stone wall - he just not get it. Laksh should realise that not everyone has the same views that he does and it would be wise to let others make their own decisions - especially if it concerns Sanskaar and Swara. For his sake, I hope he does learn soon. And what a contrast the talk and sharing between Swara and Sanskaar - maturity and understanding that they display. ..As i said earlier..Lakshya is thinking since it worked for him, it will work for his brother too. Poor guy doesnt realize his brother and Bhabhi are much different 😆.. He is a slow learner he will get there soon and stay out of there lifes😉

And finally Uttara's bewilderment - nobody told her about Kavita walking out and Sanskaar marrying Swara! Wonder how she would react!I think you knew how she would react since you must have read the next one by now, if not you will know it when you read the next one😆

Please do update soon.

love,

Nyna

Love

Nita

Originally posted by: leku

Hi sissy!!!
Sorry for late...while reading I need peace environment and I love reading..so its just took more time...Hi Lekah , that how i read too.As soon as i see any update , i go and look for a place that is quiet so i can read it , if not i rather wait..😊

Coming to story..

Dress selection was superb..nice sense..apt for swara..Really good to know, but i think Helly is really gorgeous and most of the dress would look good on her😊

Entry of love brids..the way sanskar understand her situation giving his hand..just it mean I will beside or stand with you forever..i love it..she took it willingly wow..so cute scene..That a scene i always go aww when i watch in any show😳, so of course my swasan get to have it in my FF😉

Centre of attraction...well party was boring...good arrangement made by cupid fellow..sanskar impressing swara without any intention in it by knowing all employees names..well good man and names engraved..wow superb idea I love it sissy...nicely explained..Thanks dear.. Center of attraction will always be SwaSan 😆. Sanskar is not only a great husband but also a amazing CEO .. 😉

Ajay hahaha..he did his job correctly if not he might fired...actually his head hang between two brothers..omg how laksh prepared speech..so boring ah...pity for all who present there hahaha last swasan both ready to kill laksh...cupid boy..well imagination has no bound..i loved it ...Well they can keep killing him only in there imagination😆

Oh poor sanskar...in cupid play he used to apologize..but its just start of the paly naah..Then I think lot of sorry is pending for sanskar...no worries swara will understand her prince..Yeah having a brother like Lakshya who loves to play cupid means Sanskar need to say sorry a lot more..But soon Swara will understand her devar so no need for sorry 😉😉

Abhi toh party shru hui yeh naah..club mood...thanks to ajay and laksh..hahah

20 mintues dance..wow sanskar making her to feel comfortable..and it was gentle moments but both loose themselves hahaha well your words are perfect here sissy..Thanks dear.. Not good at step by step explanation hence left it to your imagination 😆

So swara affected by his touch,smile..almost at his charm..good improvement to her feelings ...WTH ..cheap employees...urghhh but what to many ppl are there like this around us..no can escape from them...you used this idea at correct place ...again ur words hats off..But their words are create some changes..or doubt..Yep not only Swara even Sanskar was affected by it as well😳.. Agreed in this world they are too many people like that..No escape 😡 ..It wont cause a permanent damage dont worry😊

Her blushes change to sad mood..oh god even tears rolled on.." :( to add more spice you revealed mystery person..I think using your ideas at correct place..but happy seeing sanskar reply to his friend.oh pity swara mind rolling seeing tara near her husband..hahahha😆...Yeah the timing was too good to not add tara as well😆

Again swara questions all details about tara..peak of jealousy..i enjoyed it..Swara wants to know everything about tara, poor girl if she knows about all the fandom who loves Sanskar as well ,it will be too much for her to handle😆

Buffet part was awesome sissy..i,loved it...exactly why we can change jealous to curiosity.hahaha ...whole part was well explained..Well Swara loves to deny that she is jealous😉

Awww sanskar too and affected by their dance..he escaped from tara..you cleared it by telling us sanskar thought about whole part sequence..superb sissy...Yeah as i said earlier both of them were affected by it.. Really happy to know you liked the party sequence Lekah dear😃


Finally ..swara beti be happy now..caller is your sister in law..Even im relief..hahaha..swara felt tension free..She is happy 😆

Suprise guest hahaha no way sissy..its shock for me..why her entry..but good swasan can get some moments regarding this problem.oh why laksh playing this kind of game..creating trouble for swara..now she cant escape.. Swara care to Ragini..AP never understand it..Sorry had to bring in some more hurdles.. Lucky had good intentions though like always.. Too bad he is not that capable of understanding what people really want 😆..

Now Ap got all happened things in MM..sujatha ji superb praising swara..non stop..i feel different sasuma from daily soap..i love the portrayed character very well.Nowadays Sujatha from the show is also praising her daughter in law non stop😉

Sanlak convo was too good..sanskar warning him but he was so cool in this cupid play decision..nice sissy...sanskar behaved well matured...Sanskar is also kind of the head of the family ,so he need to act like one though he would love to punch lucky ,he can only talk with him and hope he understands😆

Swasan part..again. Its awesome sissy..
Swara sharing her pain,finally open up about Ap accusations and Ragini jealous for her.sanskar listen everthing and gave perfect answer to console or assure all will set in some time..nice..i love whole sequence..sharing bed idea hope its continues regularly..swara yeah you're lucky until sanskar with you..(forever)..Yeah i want them to share everything with each other😉.. The sleeping arrangement will stay the same 😳..
AP WENT OFF..offo...Good bye AP 😆

Nice family timing ..again one more entry..tired..(fun)..
Actually its suprise entry not AP sissy..Your are right , this one was a surprise the previous one was a shocker 😆

Uttara innocent..loce and care to family nice intro for her..
But when important thing turned out...sanskar handled very well..sanskar is always gem..
Well overall wonderful and perfect update.. You get to know a lot more about Uttara in the next chapter as well, hope it doesnt bore you😊.. Thanks you once again Lekah dear for such a lovely comment .

Love you
Leku

Love

Nita

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Originally posted by: krishuuu

No need for sorry dear...

He is indeed...

Love u way of writing...

U were asking why annoying...it was meant for annapoorna...that women has to poke her nose everywhere...coz to avoid her wrath swara was hiding her beautiful self in gown from her...

Liked..i loved it dear...

Yup im relax now...

Love u again

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hey Nita,🤗
Just now started to read the ff.😳 Its really interesting.😉
I'm res'ing for all the parts of thread 1.😃 But don't know that how much detailed reply I can write coz I sprained my right hand yesterday and its very difficult to type.😭
Okk...Off to read again.😆
With love,
Aheli.

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Hi Aheli dear..🤗

Since you finished the OS and TS..This will the last one remaining 😆..Also this happens to be my first work ever 😳... Happy to know you found it interesting..And Please no need to strain you hand any further ..Just read it for now and if you liked It that is more than enough for me.. 😃..Dont strain your hand for commenting..

Love

Nita