SwaSan FF: Forced into Marrying your soulmate(Thread 2 Link on page 1) - Page 59

Originally posted by: Sharoan

Nice update ..loved it..

Originally posted by: abika

Awesome update

Originally posted by: Olivia12

Hello again and you guessed my name right...
thanks for d pm dear, just finished reading it...
You're fantastic in this latest part as well...

Love the way story is progressing... Swara's opening up
to Sanskaar and their mutual decision to give their marriage
a chance...

With ur tale of swaragini, Ragini's jealousy is understandable,
she is not a bad person, just tired of being second best to Swara all
her life... AP is giving strong negative vibes with her actions throughout...

You're doing great, so be super confident 😃
Count me waiting for next update...

Originally posted by: rinku95

Amazing
Continue soon

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Res for # 6 😊

Un-Res

Wow Nita, I really enjoyed this chapter my dear. You explained so well, the intertwined upbringing of Swara and Ragini...and how, in a way, this constant tagging along with each other has worked to the detriment of both of them. Swara was the person who perhaps suffered more---she never got the freedom to pursue the interests she liked, the hobbies she wanted. It was always activities which the shy and withdrawn Ragini wanted to participate in. But Swara was forced to go along, to give company to her cousin. And what a very complex person Annapurna is! She was forced by Durga Prasad to give importance to Swara too; to make sure she also participates in those classes. But she always ensured the teachers praised Ragini even though Swara was the better student! Thanks Viji . I am delighted to know you enjoyed this chapter. Well i want people to connect with Swara and Ragini ,and i am happy you think i explained it well . Swara suffered more because her dreams are crushed but Ragini suffered too. DP treated them equally but Annaournaji didnt want too. For her blood is thicker than water but family prestige is thicker than blood😈

Poor Swara---she wasn't even particularly interested in those classes, but still she did her best in them and went along just to keep Ragini company---and despite that, she excelled in them.That Swara for you she will give her best inspite of forced in to it. 😃

Ragini--well, she is in a sense, as complex as her mother! She wanted Swara's company, but she was also consumed with jealousy at the thought of her cousin outperforming her always. So in a sense, Swara being tagged with her all the time, worked against her sentiments and interests as well. She wanted a friend true but you do get jealous if they always overshined you . Especially when she is trying harder at it then them . Wel that how Ragini think of it, she works so hard in all those lessons and Swara comes and wins if effortlessly 😊

This suppressed jealousy went on for so long, that when she saw Swara smiling at Sanskaar, she couldn't help feeling a pang, that Swara had once again done so well for herself---by getting married to a guy who was deemed to be perfect marriage material. Despite the fact that Ragini loves Lakshya, she is still jealous of Swara! ..We cant blame her for that , her father spoke so highly of that person , but you choose your love and then to see you cousin sister married him will definitely cause you to be jealous. But she loves Lakshya and unlike the show ,he loves her too. So let hope it is enough for her😆

Hopefully, she would manage to get a grip on her emotions, at least now that Lakshya is giving her so much attention, wooing her in a very romantic manner. Ragini does appear to have a conscience here, she doesn't hate Swara, just has a lot of issues to deal with.As i said above her life is not all lost. it upto her to choose happiness over jealousy 😉

I loved the maturity and perspective which Sanskaar showed, and the way Swara confessed her emotions to him. So they have decided to give their marriage a try as friends and roommates. 😉 😊 If they develop feelings for each other, well and good; or else Sanskaar is willing to set her free, and has assured her he would manage the explanations to their families. It would be an interesting journye indeed for them: a girl who perhaps, does not believe in love; and a guy who believes that soulmates are rare to come by, and is prepared to settle for falling in love with the person he marries. Well let see if cupid strikes first or they use there brain to decide to continue this marriage or as Sanskar said will he set her free when the times comes😉 . Well i am more anxious about this journey then them😆

It would be a fascinating journey towards the goal of him realizing that Swara is indeed his soulmate; and Swara in turn, realizing that she has come to love him so deeply. 😳 waiting very eagerly to read more, to see how you being them to that realization.I am hoping i can do justice to that and not disappoint all of you 😃 Love-Nita

Loads of Love,

---Viji

Originally posted by: taniks

Unres wow nita this was fantastic , I had great expections for this conversation but u by far exceeded them. Thanks Sabarshni ... I am so happy the conversation lived upto your expectations 😃

Reading their the conversation it just struck me hiw beautifully u orchestrated it and u gave this convo between them such significance not only cos it discusses their relationship and way forward but it shows swaras trust in sanskaar and although she ,unconciously is treating him like her soulmate and life partner. A girl like swara who is so good at keeping her pyn and thoughts buried just so others are not hurt , its difficult to talk to just anybody abt such a sensitive issue especially when it involves family. Its is this trust and honesty that only comes in front ones life partner without fear of retribution. Well thanks , unknowingly they started to trust the other person, or feel like they want to protect that person. Agreed you just dont go to a stranger and talk about your family and your deepest fears . They do because they feel the connection with that other person which there brains cant understand for now😆

.poor swara having to live her life with what others want for not her but ragini, its not easy not to resent this forced upon her life but as every girl needs a best friend and most off us r fortuate enuf to find it in our sisters. It is Pari's understanding and patience to listen to her baby sisters shattered dreams and hopes without condemnation , scolding or chiding and her well thought out great advice that opened swaras world on choosing to make it work fir her happiness. A sister is a bond that starts at birth and not even death can break it but as a sister if 3 younger ones and one older it comes with great responsibility and if nurtured well it us a girls greatest treasure.so as a sister i appreciate ur take on Pari's and swaras relationship and the careful way in which u carved it, Nita Well parents can behave like friends but they can never become friends only Sister can do that and Swara is lucky to have a sister like Pari... I also have one older sister with whom i am very close too ,hence i do understand how awesome that bond is...And i agree without Pari wise words Swara might have lost her old self altogether . 😊

Sanskaar , a wonder ful man ( a man afta my own heart if it wasnt already taken ) he is so strong in His silence, u create such powerful aura around him . he is so patient in is silence listening attentively yet giving her the assurance to open up with out fear or discomfort that was fabulous , which wife doesn't want her husband who listens to her pour out her deepest fears , disappointments and shattered dreams with such patience, nycly done Nita.Well i always get happy when everyone find Sanskar perfect , because that how i want him to be just perfect 😆

swaras pyn and elation after learning to play the guitar and tennis really tugged on the heart strings , well depicted dere..We all have been through it one time or other when we didnt get to pursue what we want but not being able to anything they want can be a lot more painful😭

.while reading this i cant help but draw comparsion between swasans relation and raglak, swasan marriage although arranged compared to the love marriage of raglak have a far strong foundation for their relationship which is supported so strong by the pillsrs if understanding and honesty. While swasan have taken many baby steps in their lives wuth each other it makes fir giant leaps in their relationship , raglak in my opinion have yet to strike ground.You are right and that is because Swara and Sanskar were forced to face the world at an young age, the harsh realties of it so they deal with there marriage in an mature way with understanding and honesty, while RagLak have been brought up in an protective environment . So still they are seeing the world in an fictional way, Ragini thinks marrying the guy you love means life will be full of roses and Lakshya think giving her flowers would be enough to make her happy. It love but not matured enough yet even though they knew each other longer than SwaSan.

Sanskaar explainatiin if his concept of love and his willingness to wait for it to happen was fabulous yet he even made peace with abandoning it so that his cousin can marry wuth a small compensation of kavita being a good person or so he thought until she eloped.He was really sweet in explaining His decision to marry kavita , I can't explain it but there's sumthing abt that part of the convo that seems a little more than it is I can't put my finger on it maybe u can explain it nita.u created such great undertones in their interaction so far that gives such great hints of them having a great journey ahead . sanskaars decision so well thought out for their future with a mature handling and great responsibility towards swaras happiness and comfort. Sanskaar bless his heart is already giving swara first priority and cementing her in His life although he us now doing it unconsciously without acknowledging the slight entry she's making into His heart , very subtle but so poignant. Well a part of reason Sanskar putting Swara ahead is because of guilt, while he is an through gentle man. It was because of his brother it all happened and so he wants to give the prime importance to Swara who suffered due to it. Also he is a great guy who understands Swara past and how much she suffered and want her not to feel forced in to this relationship. But she is making an entry into his heart and so is he in to her heart when will they realize it is the upcoming story😆

Thanking you for explain ing swaras not expecting much from her father and his non existing parenting , this really shows how much sanskaars presence in her life is appreciated and how much more his stance off support to her is significant in the road ahead which bodes well for them. This conversation is really a make or break off their marriage and the outcome of it was two strong individuals going forth off their own free will to create a solid relationship with each other.I know u will try and to give sanskaar an opportunity to make up for swaras shattered dreams.Sanskar will be her support system and soon she will appereciate it too but not too soon. They are strong individuals and i wanted to deal with this marriage in an mature way. not repeat i dont love you so i want an divorce seemed not like the best outcome of the conversation. Sanskar will try to make up for Shattered dream as much as he can.After all he is Sanskar😉

The elders if these families are responsible for these two girls pyn , stolen childhood and broken dreams by the actions and non actions to stop the injustices served to them by one woman's obsession , manipulation and pride. Its criminal of Ap to have been given free rein to ruin her child who was forced to grow with her mother's priming her from princess to queen which is only gonna be a hinderabce in ragini life.Ap is kind off delusional with a sharp cunningness pushing her child to conform to her iron rule and it seems there's nothing genuine abt her , I hate that she wouldn't compliment swaras food bcos it was better than Raginis , very small minded person. I am disgusted by her. in serial world elders can never be wrong and even if they are wrong . They will never realize it and no would make then understand it either. Even in the show Shekhar was wrong during Swara incident but he went scott freee due to being her father, DP was wrong to take her signature on the divorce went scott free.Ap was wrong to have spoiled lucky still scott ftee. That is why i wanted to emphaises parents to play a huge role in a child upbringing and you just cant blame them later when they turned negative 😆 like Ragini if she was not brought up by Dadi i think she would have turned out alright😉 .Coming to the SS, Yes AP was wrong, she is just selfish and only loves her family .Her obsession of making her daughter perfect ruined her daughter childhood😡

.For the very first tym I was feeling bad for Ragini , I am shocked reading her story which u illustrated so vividly and painfully that it actually touched me. Poor ragini had no support from her father growing up with her poisoness mother it would be unnatural if she did have jealousy festering in her towards swara but commendable to u that she NVR acted on it until the keer incident which was a great backfire to her.her guilt of it and her envy for swara life turning out well was marvelously described.her understanding off not wanting what swara has and appreciating what us hers was well written Nita.Thanks i wanted Ragini to be more than one dimensional not just plain old evil person for the sake of being evil .So i needed to show the reason for her jealousy. I am happy you felt bad for her that means mission accomplished 😃 .She will not remain evil any longer since even i get tired of Ragini plotting and plotting in the show but she wont have 369 degree change either. She will grow slowly just like all of us .😉 . On the note i am not trying to justify all evil people has become one due to there past. It just that some are often not black as they were painted to be😉

U r an amazing writer but just how good I never truly understood until this chapter , it takes real talent for a writer to write such an unbiased story even though in ur heart of hearts u r swasan fan , that is true genius of u. I applaud ur skill and yr ability to write with impartiality not allowing ur personal preference to dominate the story.👏 Thank you for helping me look at ragini in a slightly different way . wonderful chapter great exceptations for the next.I hope I was able to give this chapter the comment it deserves , nita... Your compliments keep sending me back to moon 😳. Thanks dear. I am happy you liked it. Yes i am an SwaSan fan and i wouldnt have minded a logical Ragya story but with this Cvs it better not to have any expectations😆. Great expectation now you are scaring me 😆, You comment was awesome and your compliments are way too good then i deserve😉 ---Love ,Nita

Originally posted by: Vini224

Love you too Nita🤗

And please don't keep apologizing about your updates not being upto expectations .

Your story is awesome and your an awesome writer too.

I still can't believe this is your first story.You write like a well established writer.

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Nita
Again a superb update
Story of swaragini was very well written 👏
For the first time i felt bad for ragini 😆
Ragini is right in her point
Loved swasan convo sanskar believe in love 😳
Swasan understanding is awesome
Hope they soon fall in love 😉

Originally posted by: anu91

Super update dr...just loved it so much. ...