SwaSan FF: Forced into Marrying your soulmate(Thread 2 Link on page 1) - Page 58

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Nita my dear...🤗 🤗

Res for my comment on Chap 5. read it and really loved it dear. Just got back yesterday, shall un res tomorrow for sure.

Loads of Love,

---Viji

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Hi Nita my dear...🤗 🤗

I really loved the way you've developed the story in chapter 5. The way you described Sujata's affection for both her son, as well as her nephew and niece, who are now her adopted children. That whole back story of Ram--Sujata and Varun--Akanksha was very well developed too.I am so sorry for this late reply dear. Thanks and i am happy to know you liked the backstory of Maheshwari family😃

I liked the Sanskaar--Swara interaction when he was gifting her that lovely designer sari. She assumed it was a gift for Kavita which he was now giving her and got angry. 😆 But then when he clarified he had actually got it for Uttara earlier, she calmed down. Sanskaar certainly was bowled over by her appearance in that sari. 😉 How can he not be bowled over by Swara in an sari that he gifted her😆. Hoping to keep there interaction interesting, i am worried about writing there conversation then anything😉

Lucky is as always--clueless and a bit juvenile. But then in your fic, I like him since he played cupid for SwaSan and is not after Swara. 😉 You like Lucky , i like him too but only in my SS😆

Ragini has some serious jealousy issues. It was so sly, the way she hinted to Swara to make kheer, knowing that Sanskaar does not eat it since his Mom passed away. She really can't bear to see Swara getting compliments and warmth from others, seems to want the attention herself. ...😕 Ragini reason for jealousy must have been revealed in the next chapter and i hope i didnt disappoint you with that😊

Also, her excuse that she was angry at Swara only because she had made Lakshya apologize, was not very convincing. What Lakshya did was wrong, and in fact, Swara entered into this wedding only to save Ragini's marriage with Lakshya. Instead of being grateful to her cousin, Ragini is now trying to spoil her happiness...😕 Well that because it is called first love😆

And Annapurna is such an complicated character. Instead of correcting her daughter, showing her her the right path; she is angry at Ragini because she and Durga Prasad would now have to apologize to Swara's parents. She is bothered more about their prestige and pride than about correct behavior.AP just cares about her family prestige and pride. Poor Ragini wish it was janki instead 😆

I was so happy that Sanskaar had the kheer Swara prepared, and thoroughly enjoyed it. Ragini's plan went up in smoke! 😉 And i am happy that you are happy with that scene

I also really loved the way Swara spoke to Shomi. She was concerned when her Mom started crying and feeling guilty, and she did comfort her then. But she was very clear that she was disappointed in the way her mother had not supported her at all. Swara is perfectly right in that: Shomi might have thought that Sanskaar was a very good guy, and that Swara would be happy in the marriage; but ultimately, she did not give Swara the freedom of choice. She joined the other family members in pressurizing her to save Ragini's marriage. Some felt it was rude of Swara to talk back to her Mom, i find it relatable. I dont want Swaara to hold it all in. You show your anger only to your closest ones and that why Swara let it know how disappointed she was but still you cant hurt your closest ones either hence comfort her later😊

Of course, in the long run, this is all to SwaSan's benefit, since they are truly soulmates. 😳 Destiny works in mysterious ways after all.Everything works for SwaSan in the long run😉

I will comment on Chap 6 in just a bit, Nita dear! 🤗

Loads of Love,

---Viji

Originally posted by: Vini224

Nita🤗

Awesome update again.

Loved the way you described the contrasting upbringing of Swara and Ragini but also how intertwined are their lives. Thanks Vini for the super fast Res and awesome comment.

Nita,you are so cheeky 'Tale of SwaRagini',you had to bring in the word SwaRagini😆I could literally hear the SwaRaginii BG while reading it. Well i wanted to stop with tale of two sister then thought why not let add Swaraginni with BG too😉

While reading I thought AP was forcing Swara to take all the classes with Ragini but then it was because of DP.This was his way of treating the kids equally? Poor Swara, I wish he was unfair then Swara would have been able to do whatever she wanted given how much freedom her own parents gave her.But why didn't her parents stand up for her.She was not allowed to attend the college she wanted and had to go to college with Ragini.And not go on a trip because Ragini will be hurt.Why was everything in Swara's life tied to Ragini. It happens in normal life too dear. Here Bose and Gadodia family are living seperately so it might seem weird but imagine if it is a joined family then the elders decision overrules the younger ones even if they are the parents of the child.

Loved SwaSan conversation.loved how Sanskar understood Swara's feelings.

So Sanskar believes in love but was ok to marry and then love that person but Swara doesn't .

Can't wait for these two to fall in love and also to see how Swara's over active imagination will work at that time.Well if Sanskar believed in love and was not okay with loving some one after marriage then i cant justify him saying yes to kavitha and i also have no interest in making kavitha is first love either.

I was hating Ragini after what she did ,but reading this chapter made me feel real bad for her.

What a tough break for her with a mother like AP who cares for nothing but wants perfection in her daughter.Could really understand why she would be jealous of Swara with all the love and freedom that Swara got.Atleast Swara has her mom and Pari who are like her best friends.But Ragini was all alone except for Swara whom she was jealous about.Hopefully her determination in the end not to do anymore bad things doesn't waver.But worried as to what AP will do now. Well as i said even if Ragini did certain evil things i wont make her as evil as in the show and to do that we need to connect with her. Why she does what she does and also let her feel remorse or else it will be like Cvs redemption which makes no sense😆

Originally posted by: Sree8410

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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Nita 🤗

Very humble request if you have time and it's not trouble- on page 1 can you just drop a note to say which page each of the parts are on? 😳. I'm finishing my read and will comment soon 😃

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Nita- ignore me- prize idiot is my new name 😆😆 Spotted the pages!!!

Originally posted by: Sree8410

Res

Damn this net. Always stops when I need it the most.😡

Love you Nita. 🤗

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Thanks to my treacherous net connection this is way delayed unressing. 😳 I know you will forgive me having a big heart and all that you see. So lets get to business now. No need to forgive you dear, since you were right on time. See i just posted my reply to the first comment due to my treacherous net connection too😡.

Swasan conversation was superb as I would have expected. He was all ears and she poured her heart out to him. I love the way he was able to understand her and insist that he was willing to let her decide what she wants from this marriage after giving a chance to their marriage. And yes they did miss out on each other aweful lot of times. Had they met before things might have been different, but thats not what fate - you , wanted, so strangers it is then.😉 Room-mates, Really??? I wouldn't mind them sharing a bed with pillow bridge but you already know that don't you?I really hope Swara understands that the guy she wanted to spent her life with is actually sitting in fro.nt of her listening to her rants😆. Strangers to soulmates seems like fun 😆 . Really you want me to use pillow wall on the first day give me some time i try to fulfill it 😉 . Well friends seems to soon , let starts with roommates then friends😆.. I am really happy you liked it .

Swara I really felt bad for her. She was always asked to sacrifice for Ragini from such a young age. Forced into everything much against her wishes always. Boy this girl really did suffer a lot thanks to her family. And the best part was that DP was the one behind it and he thought he was giving the girls an equal treatment.😡 Shouldn't he ask her first what she wants rather than assuming what she wanted and forcing her to have it. But since she a gem of a person marvelled at everything. Sometimes our elders think it is the best decision for us not knowing what exactly goes in our mind, when you are child it is easy to over look there pain thinking there are doing what best for them .

Ragini I was right . well now you will say half-right, but half or not right I was in predicting and I'm . Poor girl was really suffering more than Swara as atleast she could go back to her parents and sister where as Ragini was stuck with AP and her tortures. Somewhere I did feel bad for her, she jealous as even after hardworking and loving to do what she is told to she falls short. Swara is a natural who excel at everything. This has totally destroyed the relationship between them. Hope she soon recovers.Swara remained good not only because she was really a good person but also because she had her family to fall back too. Ragini didnt, she might be wrong to let jealousy take control but she sure didnt want to be evil . She had a tough life too . Comparing kids not good and i am sure no body thought it too Annapurna aunty😡

I thought I will have to wait for few more days to get Ragini's side of the story. Glad that you wrote it and posted together. Love you dear for both the parts. First part of Swasan was at pace as they needed to talk their hearts out. She said everything need to be discussed, introduced herself and her life to her husband who is not more than a stranger at this point. Ragini's part was also precise. When we chatted i finished almost half of SwaSan conversation and decided to Add ragini part too. So i wrote Ragini part late at night and hence it was precise otherwise i would have let my imagination get the better of me and you would have been reading about Ragini for so long when it was SwaSan SS😆

Love

Sree.

Originally posted by: Sree8410

Res

"If you realised i am not the one for you, then you will let me know immediately. I dont want you to be burdened by this relationship, you can take as many years as you want to come to your decision and please be sure about it and let me know when you made it " This one line has made me fall in love with him all over again. What a man? What a perfect man for a perfect girl?😳