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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome epilouge
nicely written ... loved it

thnks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Mukta my dear pal 🤗 🤗

Firstly, let me thank you for the very moving dedication in the note. I have not been keeping very well the last few days, but reading that very emotional and touching epilogue; and your sweet note has made me feel better today. 😊

I am so very glad you felt my comments motivated you. It has always been a pleasure interacting with you, my dear.

Coming to the update---it was so very lovely. The way Swara finally found Sanskaar, in the very same home where they had had the misunderstanding earlier, in the very room in which he had earlier covered the walls with her photos, showing his absolute devotion and tender love for her...😳

That scene of Sanskaar's breakdown and Swara comforting him, and in turn being comforted by his return, was so well described. What was most lovely here, was Sanskaar's emotions and why he wanted to stay away from Swara. He felt ashamed of even that momentary outburst of temper, when he had yelled at her for unjustly suspecting him. He then blamed himself for not understanding her fragile emotional state, considering her past issues when her Dad had abandoned his family. He felt bad for not being patient with her insecurities and not explaining the truth to her in a patient manner.

But as Swara says, the fault is definitely not his alone. Given his intense love for her, Swara's lack of trust would naturally have wounded him. She was wrong too, for accusing him of cheating on her despite having come to see that he was such a gem of a person.

In their own way, both of them were right, and both were wrong, too. 😊 That's life, isn't it? It doesn't matter what mistakes we make, its what we learn from it, how we recover from that and resolve it, that counts.

A lovely message you portrayed there, and the SwaSan moments in the end---with Sanskaar resting his head contentedly on her lap, and then kissing her so soulfully, so tenderly, was utterly romantic. 😳

I really liked reading this, and looking forward to you completing your other works as well.

Lots of Love,

---Viji




Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome story dear loved it
Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kritika_201102

very nice dear...will miss it..


Thank u kritika...
glad to know you liked it!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Goldie93

Awsum..yaar..ioved it..srsly u r Amzing. ..keep writing n keep entertaining us wid ur Beautiful Stories on SwaSan


HEY GOLDIE...
THANK YOU DEAR...

YOU HAVE BEEN REALLY VERY EAGER, ENCOURAGING AND APPRECIATIVE READER OF THIS STORY...

THANK YOU FOR LIKING MY STORIES AND FOR FEELING THEM TO BE ENTERTAINING...:-)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you prachi...
GLAD TO KNOW YOU LIKED THIS:-)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anu012

Awsome epilouge
nicely written ... loved it

thnks for pm


HEY ANU...

THANK YOU SO MUCH DEAR...

GLAD TO KNOW YOU THOUGHT IT WAS NICELY WRITTEN AND LIKING IT...

YOUR ALWAYS WELCOME FOR PM DEAR...

STAY BLESSED...
MUKTA
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally! Finally!! FINALLY!!!
Finally you updated & Finally my AZAB of waiting on tenterhooks ended!
I always loved your works, your every piece of writing is in my fav list BUT this one is my most favorite!
And I was really on tenterhooks & reached at the end of my patience!
Bt I knew you were occupied with so many things & your life was complicated; That's why I didn't pressurize you!
Bt thank you & love you more for updating it :)
Lots of love & hugs Mukta dear :*)
Coming to the update: What an amazing epilogue it was. *Claps*
Ohh I really had an intuition that Swara will find her Sanskaar on that place, where they separated bcoz that is the place they will reunite coz that place is their HOME, their ABODE! I so knew it!
And I was right! Swara found her Love, Life, her Sanskaar on their HOME!
I really loved Sanskaar's confrontation! His accepting his fault, his realization, his guilt, his apologizing was soo heart touching & it melt my heart!
Sanskaar is Incredibly Amazing! (Yeah I know I'm sounding like a broken record)
And then their reunion! Awww what a perfect, serene was that!
Both were feeling guilty & sad AND both were trying to pacify other one! Absolutely gorgeous!
I really loved it when Sanskaar confessed that he fell for Swara when she was a teenager & most importantly he loved Swara before Dadu made him promise to take care of her!
I loved it bcoz he didn't marry her out of obligation BUT out of pure love <3
I wish I would get a Sanskaar Maheshwari in my life! *Dreams*
And then their happy ending :)
Their immense, pure love for each other!
Once again Mukta, love you so much hon :)
Love you for this amazing story & love you for PMs :)
Plz update your other stories as well (You see I'm too greedy when it comes to SwaSan)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Mukta!!😊
Lovely, emotional and touchy updates. Read all the parts together. Right from the time when Swara met Sanskarfor the first time, their engagement, how Sanskar didn't want to force his love to her, then Sanskar's accident after their marriage!! Swara was so much concerned about him. How both Sanskar and Swara confessed their love for each other.😳 And after they spent some beautiful moments together, then came the huge blow in their lives. Swara misunderstood Sanskar was having an extra-marital affair with that lady, who was actually the architect of the house which he was planning to gift Swara on their six-month anniversary. Then again he also started to shout at her instead of making her understand calmly and then he left her to her maternal house and never returned as he was feeling guilty to meet her. Oh God!! Poor SwaSan had to suffer a lot. Then the day came when Durga-Maa finally listened to her prayers and she met Sanskar at the same place which turned their life upside down. And oh God!! 4 months of separation had taken a toll on both of them.😭 Then when they finally realized and confessed their mistakes and reconciled it was vry emotional and touchy. I was literary crying. And again Sanskar's confession that how he fell for the teenager Swara. It was so cute. I was feeling so happy for them.😃
Loved it so much!!❤️
Edited by Humnava - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Muktai dear...

Amazing end to a wonderful story...love u n swasan.

Now waiting for ur other stories to get updated...

Lot of love
Talia


HEY TALIA DEAR...

THANK YOU SO MUCH YAAR...
WHAT MADE THIS JOURNEY MORE BEAUTIFUL IS YOUR LOVE...

THE WAY YOU HAVE BEEN EAGER AND AMAZINGLY SUPPORTIVE THROUGHOUT...

YEAH FOR SURE WILL UPDATE OTHER STORIES SOON.

STAY BLESSED
MUKTA

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