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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Mukta my dear pal 🤗 🤗

Hey Viji My dear 🤗 🤗 to you for this wonderful, wonderful feedback.

Firstly, let me thank you for the very moving dedication in the note. I have not been keeping very well the last few days, but reading that very emotional and touching epilogue; and your sweet note has made me feel better today. 😊

Hey don't thank me yaar. You deserve every bit of it. Take proper rest dear. Health comes first. Has my note made you feel better😳? I am super happy then

I am so very glad you felt my comments motivated you. It has always been a pleasure interacting with you, my dear.

Indeed your comments has motivated me. I am actually thanking my sister for making me join IF as because of that I met you here. You have been my gift of joining IF🤗.

Coming to the update---it was so very lovely. The way Swara finally found Sanskaar, in the very same home where they had had the misunderstanding earlier, in the very room in which he had earlier covered the walls with her photos, showing his absolute devotion and tender love for her...

You liked this update😳. I am so very happy. Isn't that adorable the way she found him where she had lost him. I actually imagined him sitting in the very same room in midst of walls covered with her photos...😳

That scene of Sanskaar's breakdown and Swara comforting him, and in turn being comforted by his return, was so well described. What was most lovely here, was Sanskaar's emotions and why he wanted to stay away from Swara. He felt ashamed of even that momentary outburst of temper, when he had yelled at her for unjustly suspecting him. He then blamed himself for not understanding her fragile emotional state, considering her past issues when her Dad had abandoned his family. He felt bad for not being patient with her insecurities and not explaining the truth to her in a patient manner.

You felt that scene was well described...Really?

Then my job is done. 😊I actually wanted to give valid reason why Sanskar who has been so understanding from the moment he met her, behaved in such way. Why he left her to suffer, when he was aware of her fragile emotional state, given her past issues. He felt ashamed of himself for not controlling his outburst. Even though he was not at complete fault, yet he couldn't bring himself to face her.

But as Swara says, the fault is definitely not his alone. Given his intense love for her, Swara's lack of trust would naturally have wounded him. She was wrong too, for accusing him of cheating on her despite having come to see that he was such a gem of a person.

Indeed as you said given his intense love for her of so long, her mistrust, accusations wounded him. Though she reacted according to situations she came across and on top of that he didn't cleared her doubt when she approached him.

In their own way, both of them were right, and both were wrong, too. 😊 That's life, isn't it? It doesn't matter what mistakes we make, its what we learn from it, how we recover from that and resolve it, that counts.

Yeah, both were right and wrong too as you said that's life. They did mistakes, suffered but in the end their love won, they recovered from it, resolved their issues and their relation emerged more strongly.

A lovely message you portrayed there, and the SwaSan moments in the end---with Sanskaar resting his head contentedly on her lap, and then kissing her so soulfully, so tenderly, was utterly romantic.

Thank you if felt I portrayed the msg that nothing matters except the way how you deal with your problems, understand your partner and face every odd staying by each others side. I am actually really bad at writing romantic moments. But if you find whatever scene I wrote then I take it as complement.

I really liked reading this, and looking forward to you completing your other works as well.
I am so happy to know you liked reading this story. This story will be always very special to my heart. Yeah will soon complete my ongoing work.

Plus I am waiting for you to soon recover and get well soon to give us a new story.😊

Lots of Love,
Lots of love and prayers for speedy recovery😊
--

Mukta

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

Finally! Finally!! FINALLY!!!

Finally you updated & Finally my AZAB of waiting on tenterhooks ended!

Yeah Finally I updated this and completed too😊 ending your AZAB of waiting😉

So sorry for taking so long yaar Nupur.😭

I always loved your works, your every piece of writing is in my fav list BUT this one is my most favorite!

Thank you so much for liking my stories. It's in your favourite list...Really?

I don't think I deserve such big compliment that you like my work so much, but then I would only say thank you so very much for appreciating my silly attempts. I see this is your most favourite...lots of 🤗🤗to you for that.

And I was really on tenterhooks & reached at the end of my patience!

Bt I knew you were occupied with so many things & your life was complicated; That's why I didn't pressurize you!

Thank you for understanding re and sorry for making you wait.

Bt thank you & love you more for updating it :)

Lots of love & hugs Mukta dear :*)

lots of 🤗🤗to you for being so patient and understanding.

Coming to the update: What an amazing epilogue it was. *Claps*

Ohh I really had an intuition that Swara will find her Sanskaar on that place, where they separated bcoz that is the place they will reunite coz that place is their HOME, their ABODE! I so knew it!

I must say then you have really good intuition. That place is special for them. I felt that was the most deserving place for them to reunite so I showed it. Glad to know you liked it.

And I was right! Swara found her Love, Life, her Sanskaar on their HOME!

I really loved Sanskaar's confrontation! His accepting his fault, his realization, his guilt, his apologizing was soo heart touching & it melt my heart!

Sanskaar is Incredibly Amazing! (Yeah I know I'm sounding like a broken record)

You liked his confrontation? Thank God. No you are not sounding like broken record, I think might be sounding that way by saying thank you again and again but what to do you not left any choice to me.😉

And then their reunion! Awww what a perfect, serene was that!

Both were feeling guilty & sad AND both were trying to pacify other one! Absolutely gorgeous!I really loved it when Sanskaar confessed that he fell for Swara when she was a teenager & most importantly he loved Swara before Dadu made him promise to take care of her!

I loved it bcoz he didn't marry her out of obligation BUT out of pure love <3

By saying this you made me feel that writing this was worth it. I didn't wanted him to force his feelings on her, How can Sanskar behave so? So I had to show marriage happening between duo with consent of Swara and that out of her own will not any obligations.

I wish I would get a Sanskaar Maheshwari in my life! *Dreams*

Even I wish the same yaar. But what to do he is already taken😆😉

And then their happy ending :)

Their immense, pure love for each other!

Once again Mukta, love you so much hon :)

Love you too swetheart😊

Love you for this amazing story & love you for PMs :)

Love you too for your always encouraging and appreciating feedbacks 😊. You are always welcome for pms re😊

Plz update your other stories as well (You see I'm too greedy when it comes to SwaSan)

Your wish is my command. As you say honey😉😊

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hey Mukta!!😊

Lovely, emotional and touchy updates. Read all the parts together. Right from the time when Swara met Sanskarfor the first time, their engagement, how Sanskar didn't want to force his love to her, then Sanskar's accident after their marriage!! Swara was so much concerned about him. How both Sanskar and Swara confessed their love for each other.😳 And after they spent some beautiful moments together, then came the huge blow in their lives. Swara misunderstood Sanskar was having an extra-marital affair with that lady, who was actually the architect of the house which he was planning to gift Swara on their six-month anniversary. Then again he also started to shout at her instead of making her understand calmly and then he left her to her maternal house and never returned as he was feeling guilty to meet her. Oh God!! Poor SwaSan had to suffer a lot. Then the day came when Durga-Maa finally listened to her prayers and she met Sanskar at the same place which turned their life upside down. And oh God!! 4 months of separation had taken a toll on both of them.😭 Then when they finally realized and confessed their mistakes and reconciled it was vry emotional and touchy. I was literary crying. And again Sanskar's confession that how he fell for the teenager Swara. It was so cute. I was feeling so happy for them.😃

Loved it so much!!❤️

Originally posted by: 7APK

Wow !!!! Mind Blowing ...
Super - Duper Amazing ...
Awesome Epilogue...
Loved it...
Thanks for the PM... 😳

Originally posted by: gayu6

Loved the entire update. Emotional finally he too felt guilty and both ask forgiveness from them.

Originally posted by: Alvapriya

Awesome story.
Loved it.
Lines of song used were amazing .
Superb update .
Keep writing.
Stay blessed dear

Originally posted by: prerulalli

Hey,

Myself Prerana 😊😊

Dont worry girl i read all your works on all the couples and i loved each and everyone

Especially (heart to heart and in the middle of the night )😳😳😳

They are so cute ...😛😛😛

Its just that iam new to the forum still understanding how to post, how to comment and all...

U can understand that by the number of comments i made till date

Nothing else 😊😊

Do write more

😊