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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#641

Originally posted by: Zephyr8
Superb updates...just finished reading chapter 25. Wow, the way you're weaving this story is beautiful. Lots of smaller story plots continue while Swara and Sanskaar continue to battle their emotions and the world around them. Sanskar seems to have made up his mind anyway...let's see how you manage to have him convince everyone around him. Their meeting and subsequent longing, intimacy...oh, it was a much needed respite for them as much as for the reader. It was palpable and you could feel it...Their longing and need for one another. That was brilliantly written by you.
Along with this one, it would be interesting to know about the key code as well. Of course, Ragini will have to face the consequences of her actions, I'm sure you'll make that very interesting too. Once again, superb writing in spite of your ill health and busy schedule. Do take care of yourself. Thank you for the PM.

Hey Sagarika 🤗

Thank you so much for this. I am so pleased you liked it so much and thanks too for the lovely words out the scripting and the plot lines. Yes indeed, I want the effect of other stuff mingling along with the main focus which is of course the love story. Sanskaar is now determined to make a direct play for his Princess so let's see 😉. I am super thrilled you felt that raw emotions that I felt whilst writing coming through in that Part 3 😳.

Ah don't worry- the mystery of the key code will be revealed too. It is one bit I haven't definitely fixed yet as to how I reveal that secret but whenever I do I hope it will be a nice touch 😃. I am so touched by your comments 😳.

Love,

Shruti x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#642

Originally posted by: dilwali
Hey Shru I wish u get well n fit soon
what a update it was so full of pain of separation n they met finally it was like rain after so many years in a dessert I loved this intimacy of them if u would not have included this meeting n kiss in this update my entire day would have been sad but u did it again girl I loved this update n eagerly waiting for next updates
lots of love
plz plz one request for u from my side n I know many others would agree when you will do swasan marriage or anything like that plz add more romantic ahem ahem scenes u do that so perfectly plz

Hey Kawal 🤗

Thank you so much my dear- you always wish me well, which I so appreciate. I am so glad you loved this one! I knew that intense scene was not expected given the MU but as you know I like to keep you all on your toes 😉. That is what I said to some before- there can be intensity in angst and this is what I meant 😃.

😆😆- I have had some requests yes for that you call "ahem ahem" scenes!! Gosh- I never know how much I can get away with on the forum. Some of the scenes that my mind conjures up will surely not be allowed?! 😲😳😆. Let us see what I can do once the time is right, which of course it isn't at present 😊.

Lots of love,

Shruti x

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#643

Originally posted by: .FairyDust.
^^ And I said it wouldn't be a long comment 😆

You made my day hon, will do a proper reply tomorrow 😃. Love xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#644

Originally posted by: sneharay
Superb update..
Swara nd Sanskar's encounter is just awesome..

Thank you Sneha, so glad you loved it so much 😃

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#645

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
Chap 25 anothr amaizing part.
&yayy!anothr kiss plus hickey...
Hehe love it.
&why swara reacting lk ths bt why fear whn our sanskar here.
Sanskar very well knw swara hs feelings,tho wish he smhw get 2 knw actualy swara full in lv,bt ok.
nw our sanskar z fully determind 2 mk swara his.&sanskar maheshwari fulfil his words.
Luking 4wd 2 swasan scns.
Lv it.cntu soon & thnks 4 pm.

Hey again Sonu 🤗

Thank you! So glad you loved it and the kiss! But oh no, no- please no mention of words like the H one 😆. I cannot stand some forms of modern terminology- it reminds me of horrid works like 50 Shades of Rubbish and I would really be devastated if I thought anything in DK was reminiscent of less than pure unadulterated love 😊.

Ah, yes- Swara- - the poor girl cannot help but be lost and upset- she loves a man she mistakenly thinks doesn't love her, her parents now hate him and his mother has made clear she doesn't accept her and wants him married elsewhere . But yes Sanskaar is in determined mode. Let's see how it unfolds but like with everything in DK- it won't be easy 😉.

Thank you for reading and liking!

Love,

Shruti x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#646

Originally posted by: Red.orchid
Hi shruti
Part 25 : beautifully written, swara is still battling with her emotions.
Their kiss was awesom😉☺️.
Wow he thinks his love is enough for both😳.

Hey Sadhana 🤗

Thank you so much. So pleased you loved the Chapter and especially the kiss 😳. Yes, Sanskaar is now in his determined warrior mode- this time his prize is his Princess 😉

Love,

Shruti x

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piccola1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#647

Sinfully and unforgivably late, Shru..but not responding to this superbly angsty, intense (and oh so frustrating) #25 was making me unhappy..especially when you're doing this when still unwell. Do get well soon !👍🏼

The much awaited meet of our royal sweethearts was rain to my parched Swasan soul..as much as it was for them. That the situation has got far worse for our princess - oh she is safe now and with her family, but she was far happier when far away with her prince - only made my heart go out to her. She has suffered far too much..from being betrayed by her beloved sister, being kidnapped by a declared traitor, being assaulted by ruffians and even worse at that D scum's hands...she braved it all ..like a true hero.

What sustained her thru it all, after the initial trauma, was her own courage and the deep sense of rightness she felt with Sanskaar. She felt protected, cosetted, cherished when she was with him. And even when thibgs went really bad, she unconsciously leaned on him to gain strength and fight back.

He was her anchor. And I feel, today she is totally adrift..because the turbulence is far worse. Now she is among her own but more alone than she ever was..and her anchor is denied her as well.

Loved your powerful writing that moves these characters off my screen..to flesh and blood and make me want to lock them up together till they sort out their differences!

LOVED Sanskaar's determination to make things right for his Swara..He has a tall task in front of him. With a traitor around, he holding the key, a Mom who detests his beloved, his Swara very much still at risk, and this MU going on..all his bravery and intelligence is going to be needed to sort it all out. On an aside, while that passionate kiss was delightful, can he talk and make her listen to him ? Its so frustrating to see them so at odds !

Good luck to him! Knowing our Prince, he will win nonetheless! But I want his fiesty Princess by his side as he unravels it..please? Cant bear to have her so unhappy!

Was this last interlude witnessed by someone..I hope its not going to make it worse!

Absolutely loving DK. Its gripped my imagination.😃 so much so that every Swasan loving character is now a loved one..be it Veer or Pavan or all of the Prince's bravehearts ! And Swasan are a delight to read about.

Get well soon ! And God Bless you for making so many people happy with your gifted writing.👏

Love ya🤗

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jasw

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Posted: 9 years ago

#648

My heart was thudding too(just like Swara's) while reading the last part of Ch25! 😳 The setting was perfect, read the earlier reference ..so this was kind of a turning point in their life earlier. Both Sanskar and lakshya, were fascinated and attracted to Swara. And Sanskar's protectiveness towards Swara already kicked in(covering her in biggest blanket😆), though he realized this much later!

I sooo loved their conversation! Swara's question "What r you doing here?" and Sanskar's reply "Well It's nice to see you again too Swara!" 😆 Perfect understanding by Sanskar about Swara's turmoil! 😳 And then the kiss! Heart-warming, earth-shattering, desire-driven kiss! It was natural given the love they both have for each other! I kind of expected this when they met after the tense few days. I loved Sanskar's determination about their future. 'You will be mine Swara'.

Will be waiting for the day when their misunderstanding clears and they realize how much they love each other. Till then will be enjoying their interactions in your words Shruti.