Ragini SS Main pyaar kho diya hai - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb start
continue soon nd thanks fr pm
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Very nice. update soon
Edited by sandiab - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2:

Ragini was still in her lehenga. Sumi enter the room, she was very sad to see Ragini in that condition. But compose herself and tell

Sumi- Ragini beta, change your cloth. But Ragini doesn't respond. She was still in her position, so she shake Ragini, but Ragini fall, when she touch Ragini she was shocked and scream

Sumi- RAGINIII
Everyone come to the room, and see Sumi crying like a mad. Dadi sense something fishy and goes to Ragini, she touch Ragini and break down

Dadi- Shekhar please doctor ko phone do, our Ragini cannot leave like this.

Shekhar was shocked. This time Swara and Sanskar enter the room and watch everyone crying. Swara help Sanskar arm very tight, and goes to Ragini

Swara- Ragini tum... She touche Ragini and then cry.
Swara- you cannot leave and go like this

Just then doctor come and examine Ragini. And tell

Doctor- I'm sorry to say but your daughter is no more. She get a heart attack and pass away maybe in the morning.
Everyone cry and Swara scream

Swara- This cannot be possible. Ragini you cannot separate SwaraRagini. Swara need Ragini, and Ragini need Swara. We cannot be separate, you cannot leave. You have to get up, you have to prove the world that you are a strong women, you have to prove that you are not weak, you have to prove someone that you are happy without him. Please utto Ragini please for me utto.

Everyone was crying seeing this. Swara was unable to stop crying, she just shake Ragini to have a respond. Sanskar was crying seeing his friend dead, Shekhar come to Ragini

Shekhar- What I will tell your mom when she will ask me if I've take a good care of you? She left your responsability to me, but I've failed to be a good husband to your mum, and I've failed to be a good father to you beta. I hope you forgive me. I know it's late to ask you for forgivness, but please mudje maaf karo. Shekhar was crying. Dadi in front of Ragini and tell

Dada- I know I'm responsible for your condition. I'm responsible for your death, mudje maaf kardo

Voice- Parvati ji, you are not responsible for Ragini's condition but our bete is.

Sumi- Ha, you are right, Laksh is responsible for this!

Maheswary Mansion

Laksh and his new wife were drinking champagne. They celebrate they union, but someone come and throw the bottle away. This person was Pareenita, yes Ardash wife. Her eyes was red in anger and Laksh was shocked to see this side of his wife bhai.

Kavya- How dare you to enter in our room. You don't know new married couple should have some privacy?

Pari- Just shut up! I will not tarnish my mouth in talking with you. You two are just a disgusting people! I
She just held Laksh arm and say

Pari- Come with me

Laksh- Babhi I don't misbehave with you, so please let me alone with my wife.
Pari slap him and tell

Pari- If you don't come with me, I will call police and put you and your wife in jail. You have a choice come with me or pass your suhaagraat in jail?
Laksh come with Pari, ans was stunned to see, she bring him in Baadi.

Laksh- Bhabhi I don't want to come here! I've no relation with them now, the people here can died, I won't mind.
He again get a tight slap by Pari

Pari- Don't do dare to utter a word on this family! UNDERSTAND?
Pari drag him upstair, and he was dazed to see doctor, police, and his family around a body. Pari drag him inside the room and tell

Pari- Congratulation Mr Laksh MAHESWARI, you won, you kill her.
Laksh was shocked to see Ragini dead and then compose himself and tell

Laksh- So what? She can died if she want, she won't trap me again.
DurgaPrasad come to him and slap him tigh that blood come out from his mouth. DurgaPrasad was enrage, we can see this in his eyes and tell

DP- What do you think of you Laksh? She and point toward Ragini; This girl give you her everything just to make you happy, now she is DEAD! do you understand? She cannot take you dhoka and leave her family alone. You deprive her to all she has! You snatch her her love, her smile, her dignity, even her life. ARE YOU HAPPY NOW? I cannot believe you are my son. Maybe i'm paying for my past misdeeds. I don't know what you want from her? It's you who married her, because you think Swara was left you! You don't give her her right, and she did all this to get your attention, your love, your time for her. You try to kill her, it's logical that she will take her revenge. I would do the same if I was in her place. How can you be so heartless and don't see her unconditionally love for you! Today I'm ashamed to say that you are my son. I give you everything, I just want you to be happy with a girl who will love you like anything. This girl gives you all, and she even give you her life, so that you can leave happily with your new wife. I cannot tell you how I feel today when I see you and when I see her. She did all the duty of a daughter and daughter in law, but you what you did? You KILLED her Laksh, you just broke her heart.
DurgaPrasad was crying for the first time. Swara come to Laksh and bring him near Ragini

Swara- Dekh Laksh tumhara jeet! See how Ragini is, just look at her face! Today you snatch my sister's life. You have kill her, you kill Swaragini. Today all is finished! Today my sister gone away from me! You have snatch my sister from me. How could you?

Laksh was just standing next to the bed; Tears were flowing, Kavya enter and said

Kavya- Laksh come, you will not stay here!

AP- Who told you to come here? Get out of this house before I lose my control and hit you very badly, that you won't recognize your face.

Kavya- I come here because MY husband come! Why I would come to this dramebaaz house?

Sanskar- Just get out of here Mrs Maheswari, before I threw you out, and stain the little dignity you have.
Kavya get out with a shocked Laksh.

Ragini's room

Shekhar- I think we have to begin with the ritual and was about to call the pandit

Swara- NAHI!! Ragini cannot go, Please Ragini utto, for me, for us! Will you leave your sister? We have many dreams together to realize! You cannot left me, because of Laksh. Don't you love me? Don't you care for me, like I did for you? Please Ragini come back to me!
Sanskar was not able to see Ragini like that and tell

Sanskar- Hey meri duppata wali dost utto, your friend call you! Your friend need you! With whom I will fight? With whom I will share my secret? With whom I will complain when Swara will scold me? You are my special friend. I know you are angry at me, because I'm also your culprit, I will accept your punishment, but don't leave us like this. Get up please.

Swara and Sanskar- You are our first dost, best friend how can you leave us this! Please stand up.

Just then Ragini left finger move, swara saw this ans continue to talk to Ragini with a hope that she will wake up

Swara- Yes Ragini, You have to get up, fight with life, fight with death. You cannot lose this war, you will have to be strong! I know my sister is strong.
Ragini was now breathing hard, the doctor came, and give her oxygen mask. She begin to breath normally, but then shut her eyes. Everyone was shocked, they think Ragini is dead, but Ragini sign them. And they have a sigh of relieve. Swara and Sanskar were happy to see Ragini breathing normally, she take off the oxygen mask and said

Ragini- Swa... Swa... Swara You... You.. Sh.. Shou... Should let... let me died! And with that she faint. The doctor give her an injection and everyone come downstair, except Swara and Sanskar.

After two hours, Ragini wake up and see Swara and Sanskar next to her. Sanskar holding her left hand, and Swara her right hand. She take her hand of Sanskar arm and get up. Sanskar call everyone. The all family come with a smile, but they was shocked to hear what Ragini said

So you like it?

I'm sorry Shattered and Beraang will be update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow brilliant update thank you
OMG Laksh is such an a** and his wife she is a b****

I ilike what DP and AP sad to him

Pari wow she is amazing if only she get to do something like this on the show it would be nice

Sanskar is so sweet both him and Swara staying with her was nice

I wonder what Ragini says hope you get time to post the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful update
Aw swasan bought Ragini back to conscious
Wonder what Ragini said
Can't wait for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow going Along with current track :) really great waiting for. what ragini said Yaar and thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update, plz update ur other stories to
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice story! Loved how ragini replied! Continue soon and please pm me. Thank you
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry for commenting late
it's awesome 👏
wow ragini is strong in ur story
Really want this side of ragini in the show
u r a really good writer and Keep posting beautiful stories
Thanks for the pm
Please continue

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 3

Everyone was happy to see Ragini alive. Ragini look at all the people around her.

Ragini- Papa

Sheckar- Yes bete?

Ragini- Kaun hai wo log? Why this women and man take my hand?

Swara who was crying said
Swara- You don't know me?

Ragini- I know you! You are our neighbor right?

Swara- Haan but your sister too

Ragini was stunned but say
Ragini- I don't have sister. My mom passed away long time ago, and she give birth only once. Papa yeh kya kehte hai?

Shekar- She is right, she is your sister, and her mom is my wife and your mom.
Ragini was assimilated the news, but then tell

Ragini- Aur wo log kaun hai?

Swara- Main aur tumhara sasural
Before Shekhar can stop her she tell her the truth

Ragini- Meri sasural? Main shaadi chudahoon? kaise?
Swara was about to say something but dadi intervened

Dadi- You are not married, not anymore. Your husband betrayed you, the day of your wedding.
This was too much shocked, she cannot take the news and faint. Shekhar call immediately the doctor, and after 30 min she comes. The doctor look at her and then give her an injection.

Doctor- Why she faint? This is already a miracle that she survive at her heart attack.

Shekhar- In fact, she wake up, and then ask us who were the people around her. Swara reply her that she is her sister, and theses people are her sasural. But my mom tell her the thruth that her husband betray her, and then she faint.

Doctor- I see, she has a memory loss due to the shocked, and she fainted because she tried to remember what happened. In her case, I should advise you, not to tensed her, because she survive at one heart attack not two. I have give her injection, just let her sleep, when she wake up, don't talk to her about her past. Avoid any shocked news, and yes if she remember something call me.

Shekhar- Thank you doctor

Doctor- Welcom
Maheswari goes out and come to MM

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Maheswari Mansion

Laksh enter the room with Kavya, and she tell

Kavya- She must be acting! But I must say she did it very well.
Laksh was lost in his thought, and Kavya sees that

Kavya- Laksh, don't tell me you believe what you see?

Laksh- I don't know what to think!

Kavya- Oh common hubby, you are the one who tell me that she is very clever and smart. She must be act this, so she gain some sympathy from the family. That's it

Laksh- Ya maybe you are right

Kavya- Anyways, lets not talk about that. She has already mess your life, now I will be the one who will make you happy.
She said kissing Laksh in his cheeks. Laksh hug her and tell

Laksh- You are right, you are my happiness. I should just forget my past.
Downstair everyone come, and DurgaPrasad shout at Laksh

DP- LAKSH come downstair right now
Laksh and Kavya come hand to hand and Kavya tell

Kavya- What you want now? You cannot let us celebrate our wedding peacefully?

DP- Laksh tell your wife that I'm not talking to her but to you, so she must be quiet!

Laksh- Why dad? She is my wife, she can tell what she want

DP- Don't test my patience Laksh!

Kavya- Why I should keep quiet? Tell me where I'm wrong? I'm married the man whom I love! This Ragini did so much to Laksh, but you didn't tell anything! This Ragini cannot die if she want, but that doesn't mean I should keep quiet. Ragini is just a drama queen, she pretend a memory loss once, she can pretend to die today! That doesn't mean we should believe her

AP slap her hard and tell
AP- Khabardar! You will not take her name in your nasty mouth. Ragini may have made a lot of mistake, but we forgive her. But why I should tell you this, you cannot be like her, you cannot take her place in our heart.

DP- Rehnedo

Lawyer come with some men, and then DP say

DP- From now on this house will be divide in two section. I will live with my family in this section and you and your wife the other section. Mr Bansal give him his share and tell hi that from now on, he is not my son.
Mr Bansal give Laksh his share and tell that from now, he don't have any relation with Maheswari, just his name will remain. But then a group of media come and bash at the Maheswari.

Media1- So this is real, our big star Kavya is mistreat in her sasural?

AP- No, just we don't have any relation with him

Media2- Why?

AP- Because he married this women

Media1- But she is a big star

AP- She must be a big star for outsider, but for me she is just a home wrecker.

Media1- Why you tell this? She married only yesterday, how can you tell that she is a home wrecker

AP- Because, she break this house, she separate a son with his family, that's why

Media2- But Mrs Maheswari you know torturing your DIL is a crime

AP- I'm not torturing her

Media2- You are, we see that you slap her, and will file a complaint to you

AP- You can file a complaint, but you sees only what you want to see. I know I'm innocent

Pari- Laksh see what type of wife you are. She is a big star in front of people, but in our eyes she is a total zero. Just a shame for Maheswari's bahu.

Swara- Here my sister is more better than her

Laksh- Shut up Swara, your sister make my mom a waitress in her party.

Swara- And your new wife made this drama here. But why you don't tell her she is at fault?

Laksh- Because I'm sure she didn't want that.

Swara- Alright then, tell her to stop the police coming here.
Laksh was about to say something but then police come and tell

Police- Who is Annapurna Maheswari

AP was shocked because she didn't know that the police will come;
Everyone was shocked, Laksh too. But Kavya was enjoying and think

Kavya- Now they will be out from my house, and my life.

Laksh- It's a misunderstanding

Police officer- This is a case of family torture! Just the judge will tell if it's misunderstanding or not.

Swara- You cannot take our MIL in jail, because she never torture anyone here. We are two bahus in the house, and never we complained.

Police officer- But we have a proof, a video where we can see clearly Mrs Maheswari slap her DIL.

But before Swara reply, a voice come behind shocking all of them.
Edited by Berlin - 9 years ago

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