SwaSan FF- Tujhse Pyaar Ho Gaya ( Sorry Note :- Pg - 70 ) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: mystery75

3rd one❤️

is mostly matching the prologue i think😳

thanks 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Nice prolouge
Tujhse pyaar hogaya title is superb
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Good prologue...
Thujhse pyaar ho gayaa will be good
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sruthi007

Nice prolouge

Tujhse pyaar hogaya title is superb
Continue soon

thanks 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: hasinig89

Good prologue...

Thujhse pyaar ho gayaa will be good
Continue soon

thank u 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank u😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hola everybody...! thanks for showering comments and likes on my FF it really encouraged me to continue and regarding the story this will be a flashback storyand mostly will tell the love story of our beloved SwaSan and this part is short and i promise to make the next one longgg ...

Soundharya
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PART 1

And police went off with Shekhar leaving a sad Sharmishtha . They loved their daughter very much ...But sadly she eloped with Sanskaar that left them in utter shock and drowned their respect ...
She remembered those days and felt very angry on themselves that they rejected their love and decieded to marry her to someone else which made her to elope and also on Swara as she eloped and made them ashamed ... A tear droped as she started remembering this...

Meanwhile At the police van ...
P- Sir ..! i regret for ur daughter's doings but we cannot do anything ... but can try to mend it
Shekhar nodded as he was really sad
Constable whispered to police inspector and he asked him
p- sir...! if u tell us exactly what happend then it would be easy...
Sh- (in low tone ) ok
P- so when did they elope ?
Sh- at the night before swara's marriage ...
P- Mmm ...when did their story start ...
sh- its a long one but as u need a perfect explanation I will tell u So...

<<<<<<<<<<<<FLASHBACK >>>>>>>>>>
Sanskaar mehta commonly known as sanskaar was a easy go man say a Rowdy type and he had a crush on Kavitha ...and she was ... she was...swara's TEACHER...!!
whenevr she used to get down of the bus near the school she would see her and would smile and he would find many means to propose her... One day he and his best buddy lakshya were as usual standing near the bus stand when...
sa- laksh i am getting frustated every time i try to propose her my plan miserably fails..!! (angry)
la- (laughs) hey !! buddy don't worry did u do what i said u yesterday...??
sa(smiles)- yeh dude i wrote a love letter as u suggested and i am confident that she will surely accept ...
The bus arrives he looks at her in a funny expression and she laughs seeing him..
sa- see laksh she is smiling...
laksh sees him and her agn..
la- stupid sanky she is laughing at u seeing ur expression ( laughs)
sanskaar frowns and beats him
sa- ok i leave u know as i need ur help
la- wat help?
sa- how i can give this to her ?
la- simple man..
sanskaar gives him a blank look
la- call any one of the school gives
sa- but... why ?
la- call...!!
sa- ok ..ok..tter
sanskaar sees two girls walking ...
sa- hey u !!!
a girl turns ...
girl- u called me ?
sa- yea ... come here
girl comes and lakshya tells him to give her the letter..
sa- take this letter
girl- chee chee i don't accept love letters
sa- oye...!!! this is not for u its for ur miss and u ... u ... u are swara shah ... right !!! the headman shekar shah's daughter wait ... wait let me tell him about u accepting love letters
sw- (scared)sorry !! sorry !! i will give her the letter
sa- that's a good girl
la- sans come we will come later on...
sa- yea...ok... and u miss swara do remember ur work
Swara nodded ...
sw- such rude boys ragini ...!!!
ragini was her best friend
ra- yeaa ... but i really feel funny when i think how kavitha mam will react seeing this(laughs)
sw-(laughs) yea ... me tooo ...!!
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At Class Hour ...
Swara and ragini were sitting and laughing reading the letter
sw- really funny ( laughs )
ra- i feel sad for maam since she has to read his (laughs)
kavita notices this.,
ka- Mmm Swara and Ragini what are u reading ...
sw- ma...mam
ragini not in her senses
ra- Actually we r reading a love letter and it is very funny ...!!! (laughs out loud)
others too laugh...
ka- Love Letter? ok .. class go out for a while i will call u
class moves out..
ka- hey u SwaRagini jodi come here ... give me that letter ...
swara gives it...Kavitha reads it
ka- is this needed for u guys ? know? at this age? ( gives angry look)
ra- mam... actually this letter is for u
sw- Sss.. mam
ka- WHAT!!!!
ra- yes and this is given by sanskaar ...
ka- Sanskaar ?
sw-yes that guy sho always smiles seeing u at bus stand..
kavita thinks for a while
ka- oh!! that man (laughs) he and his funny expressions !!
sw- and mam this letter too is very funny
ra- yea really ...
ka- ok guys pls keep this matter only within us promise me ..
sw- ok mam.. promise
ra- promise
and continued with their class
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After School
sanskaar and lakshya were waiting for them ...
swaragini come asusual chatting and laughing when...
sa- hey swara...!!( shouts)
swara turns around and waves at him signalling a bye
sa- oh god i am calling her and she is telling me bye ( hits his head)oh madam..!!!
come here
swaragini come there
la- so u did our work
ra- yea we did
sa- good girls !! what did she say
sw- she said u to meet her at 28 feb
lak- great !! come lets come on 28
sa- and thanks once agn beautiful ladies !!
swaragini- u r welcome
Sanskaar and laksh fled ..
ra- swara ...
sw-Hmmm
ra- i have a question
sw- yea..
ra- why did u say them 28 ?
swara giggles and whispers something to ragini
ra- wow!! will be funny !!
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Do comment and like guys
Edited by Soundharya_01 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Superb update 👏
Elope with sanskar also
Sanlak jodi rocks
But i think swaragini jodi will double rock 😉
Kavita 😆
Sanskar funny expression 😆
Update soon after dil mil gaye 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
hey dis s on d basis of tamil movie varuthapadatha valibar sangam right???
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res

Unres...

Pooja... 🤗 ..awesome da... Fantastically modified...

I love your modification... Kavita as teacher nice thought...

Ahhh.. Soo Waiting for next... Sikkitan sivanandi... 😆

I'm loving it... I' was waiting for it...

Love you...
Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 9 years ago

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