SwaSan Valentine's Day Drabble: 'Meraki' - Page 4

So simple. Yet so deep. Simply beautiful.

beautifully written viji.. loved it and the title too.. 👏

..Swara is a totally meraki kind of character... there is no half measures in her ... and when she falls in true love or realises it.. it will be whole heartedly..

Love the swasan interactions and their awareness of each other... . and the loved way you have described sanskar as a all-embracing room, a refuge, a shelter from all the world's troubles..👏
.. everyone needs such a room in their lives.. and its a matter of destiny that swara thinks sanskar as her safe room .. 👏😳

.. can't wait for the next instalment when swara realises her true feelings.. 😳

Yayy...drabbles are back...and what better timing than Bhalentinesss :)

Hey!! Lovely OS! Sanskaar saying he'll never let swara fall, instead fly away with her was 😳😳😳 And also swara comparing sanskar to a room to seek refuge in was very touching, also something different..😃 Good one, Viji!😊

Lovely story. Just awesome. I have noticed one thing. Your stories refer to Greek mythology and epics one way or other. You love Greek mythology and epics, don't you? Well I love them for sure. Poor Hera, I really feel bad for her. Poor woman had to live with such a casanova hubby, famous for his infidelity, who compelled her to marry him. Also I feel bad for Apollo's unfulfilled tragic love story, his love turned into tree. Perseus and Andromeda's story has a kind of fairytale touch in it. At least I feel so. Hero came, rescued damsel in distress, fought with his rival for her and finally got married to her and went away to live in his home. Hector and Andromache's confrontation before the Trojan hero returned to the Greek vs Trojan battle, underlines how an honorable and valiant warrior should be and also the fear and uncertainty a warrior's wife feels, that niggling fear of losing her husband any moment.

Oops! See I got carried away. I started commenting on the stories of this Greek heroes and heroines. So Swara is in thrall of Greek mytho and epics and not only that, they are also responsible for shaping her nature to give it all when she gives and to love with her whole being when she loves. Poor darling! In spite of giving her all she got nothing from her so called relations.

I feel so bad for Swara. I didn't see in the show and I don't see here in this story too exactly why she is so hell bent to make her spineless, sorry excuse of a father accept her mom. I mean it should be her mom accepting that craven man back. And I personally believe that she and her mom are better off without him.

Wow! So finally she is realizing her feelings for Sanskar. Lovely. Finally her train is moving on the right track. They sang together!!! Oh my! I can just imagine the awesome scenario ! Sigh!

So Swara has recognized Sanskar to be the source of her peace of mind and is finally waking up to the fact that he has become more than a friend' to her. Lovely! The chocolate scene is too good. I love how sanskar allayed Swara's fears and bolstered her drooping spirit. Awe! They hugged each other and now are shy! They are just so adorable. I can't refrain from smiling myself. It is also the magic of your story telling that has made the scenes and the characters so lively. So feelings are blooming on both sides and both are hesitant to accept them. So finally Swara has realized his indispensability to her. Well not the realization we all wanted but still she is well on the way. Go Swara!

Awe! You have just put most of my favorite dialogues by Sanskar here! Love you for this and love this awesome story too.

Res

Your in for a whole essay so...
Thank you for the PM

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

beautiful os

Originally posted by: nisha_hc_bs_dd

Loved it !!