SwaSan Valentine's Day Drabble: 'Meraki'

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: sujoyricky
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Viji viji viji what a awesome drabble 👏
Really loved it 👏
I wish this can be shown in the show 😊
But overall i loved it specially when sanskar was boosting swara energy.
Do write more.
Happy Valentine day 😃

Hey Sujay my pal...🤗 🤗

Thanks so much buddy. It really made my day to know you loved this drabble a lot.

That is one of the best things about Sanskaar na---he is always there for Swara, giving his all to their relationship. He supports her and adores her with that unconditional, selfless love, no matter what.

Glad you liked it!

Cheers

Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: foresight
very warm story. loved the subtle warm that their relationship is shown bringing to their life, the happiness, the strength, the peace. all wonderfully portrayed as always. you have turned some of his show dialogues around beautifully to reveal what he feels. and glad that this swara is more aware about herself to realise that there is something going on in her own heart with it comes to sanskar.

Hi Sapna 🤗 🤗

Thanks a ton my dear...had been missing you the past few days.

I wanted to weave in some of those memorable dialogues from the show. Some of Sanskaar's dialogues are such classics, na? 😊

So happy to hear that you liked the portrayal of the SwaSan bond, the warmth and camaraderie in their relationship; the strength and tranquility they derive from each others company. Yup, I did want to show Swara a bit more self aware of the growing depth of her own feelings for Sanskaar. 😉 The one on the show was in denial enough! 😆

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: jess_27
Wow... What a gift on valentine day for all the swasan lovers..
Loved the story... How sanskar was trying to cheer swara and assure her that he will always be there to pick her before she even falls... And the slight urge growing within swara towards sanskar, and then she finally giving up yo the urge and hugging him tight..

Thanks for this OS viji, seriously..

Love
Jessica

Thanks so very much Jessica dear...🤗 🤗

I wanted to show Sanskaar the way he always shows so much protectiveness and warmth towards Swara...always lavishing that intense, selfless love on her. Truly, this is the way he feels, that he would want to protect her from any hurt. She never needs to fear falling when he is around! 😳 😉

So glad you loved this portrayal and also of Swara---gradually becoming aware of the depth of her own feelings for Sanskaar.

Hope you had a lovely Valentine's Day. 😊

Cheers

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa
Happy Valentine day..
Its a awesome piece...

Perfect balance of emotion and sweetness...
Loved the swasan hug scene...

Thank u fr the pm..
continue soon with next OS..

Thanks so very much Jidnyasa my dear...🤗 🤗

So very glad you liked the portrayal of the SwaSan emotions and their warmth and camaraderie in this OS.

You're always welcome about the PM. I'll write the enxt one as soon as I can, might be a little bit of time though, as I am stuck in a bit of work now.

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: rashidhingra
It was so beautiful!
I wish the CV's would have shown this turmoil in the serial itself!
The way both of them are fighting their feelings, its so surreal.
And yes the word merika describes sanskaar's adoration for swara so apt. I doubt any other word can do justice to this.
Thank you so much for letting us know about the existence of such an amazing word.
Waiting for the Kairos now eagerly! :*

Thanks so very much Rashi 🤗 🤗

I am so happy to hear that you loved this OS, the portrayal of Sanskaar and Swara's feelings for each other. They have started developing much stronger emotions than just a close friendship, and both of them are gradually becoming aware of the fact.

Meraki is truly a wonderful word na? As you said, it does describe their adoration for each other very well, indeed.

I will post Kairos as soon as I can...but will take some time as its a longer piece, and I also have quite a bit of work this week.

Will PM you as soon as its up.

Thanks again, and Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: MusicAddict
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Hey Sakshi...🤗

Hope your exams are going well, am sure you'll sail through with flying colors. 👍🏼

Look forward to your comment when time permits.

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Dear Viji,

UnRes page 1😊

Nyna

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Dear Viji,
UnRes page 1😊

Nyna

Thanks Nyna sweetheart. 🤗

Will reply on that a little later, mired in some work at the moment and running late with individual replies. But in meantime...amaranthine... sigh...You just sent me on a day dreaming stint with that one. Both meanings, literal and chromatic. 😆 The japanese word was nice, too (I hadn't ever heard that before BTW, reminded me of Sayuri and the Chairman from Memoirs of the Geisha 😊), but amaranthine just struck a chord with me.

Shall revert in detail later, as soon as my problem customer who's behaving like a Norwegian Ridgeback out of the HP books, stops breathing fire down my neck! 😉

Love,

---Viji