SwaSan Valentine's Day Drabble: 'Meraki'

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APUDEEP

@Apudip

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

It's awesome Viji 😊

Edited by Apudeep - 9 years ago

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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Happy Valentine day..

Its a awesome piece...

Perfect balance of emotion and sweetness...

Loved the swasan hug scene...

Thank u fr the pm..

continue soon with next OS..

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Vini224

@Vini224

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Hey Viji

What an awesome Valentine's Day gift from you.

The early stages of Swasan bonding was the best and you have brought that out beautifully here.

Loved the OS.

And wishing you a very Happy Valentine's Day.🤗

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: sujoyricky
Unres on pg-2

Thanks a lot Sujay my buddy 🤗

Will reply on that in a bit.

Happy Valentine's Day 😊

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Ahaa!those dilgs of sanskar!<3
love it.beautifully written.
HAPPY VALENTINES DAY

Edited by LoveSonu2408 - 9 years ago

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rithika2015

@rithika2015

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

hi vijji

first of all happy valentines day my dear.

that was an awesome one.

it was a perfect valentine treat.

just loved the way u portrayed swara's feelings right from her teen age to the present day.

teens are the most awesome days of everyones life and i loved the way u portrayed it

I must admit that i seriously fell in love with ur choice of words and the quotes u give in each of our works,

the word MERAKI is something i loved it totally, its really hard to describe that word.

i must give u a standing ovation for the quotes u quote in ur works. they are always awesome, apt and inspiring. they perfectly ans simply describe the situation u are trying to explain.

great work my dear. keep writing and i keep waiting for more and more works from u..

i forgot to mention in my ss that the character vijji in my ss true love is completely dedicated to u and i have named that character just after u. since u are one such writer i always love admire and get inspired by though i know i m no where in par with u. i chose this way to show my love and respect for u.

as usual waiting for ur next works..

with love

rithz.

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soapbubble

@soapbubble

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+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

What a sweet, open ended drabble!

And a few choice Sanskaari classic dialogues thrown in for good measure!

Indeed, he is Swara's refuge and harbour... the sweet monotony that comes from knowing..

Thanks 😳

And oh, Happy Valentine's 😃

Edited by soapbubble - 9 years ago

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TRPS

@TRPS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Viji! 🤗
A very Happy Valentine's day to you too dear! 🤗
and Thank you so much for dedication among others. 😊
and it seems that gonna learn many unique words from you! :))
Meraki!!!! seems that made for Swasan it is!! :)
just love the way, you started the chapter , this preface! so good and apt , perfectly describing Swara and then her match made in heaven, her soulmate , Sanskaar.
by the way! Do you love gardening?
another chapter starting from beautiful scenario of colorful garden. :)
Is it the flowers or thoughts of the
person who tends to them, that you
seek solace from? this line was sooo sweet!!
Swara noticing his li'l li'l gestures, his features, his gaze and still confuse!
I just love this understanding of Swasan how they tell and share each thing to each other, their fear, their feelings, their happiness and everything! :) I just love it!
so apt dialogues were here Viji!
"I'll catch you long before that, and
fly away!"
I guess, what else Swara needed to understand her feelings!
and I adore Sanskaar for realising and asking forgiveness for his mistakes again and again though so sweet Swara forgave him already!
by the way, Sanskaar turning red by his own sweet words was a treat to read! and of course the hug! that vanished all doubts of Swara!
so prefectly placed dialogues Viji!
and those quotes of writers too! so good!

I can understand why Swara is so protective of his family(though most of them don't deserve this love of Swara) but still yet to see this passionate Swara for her Sanskaar in the show! still I console myself saying , she is but director couldn't show this among melodrama! :P Hain naa!!!!
and another work Viji! eagerly waiting and yeah! still reeling in that intense, passionate and full of love kiss of Swasan from previous Valentine week OS. :))

Edited by TRPS - 9 years ago

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reeyacute

@reeyacute

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Happy valentines day viji!
Amazing like always...

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: The.Lannister
Unreserved on page 1

Thanks a ton Shruti. 🤗 Will reply on that tomorrow morning. Had promised my long suffering 😆 Hubby after posting this drabble, that I would put away my laptop for the day. 😆 Don't wanna torture him by spending too much time on mobile today, either. 😉

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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