SwaSan Valentine's Day Drabble: 'Meraki'

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

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Viji viji viji what a awesome drabble 👏
Really loved it 👏
I wish this can be shown in the show 😊
But overall i loved it specially when sanskar was boosting swara energy.
Do write more.
Happy Valentine day 😃

Edited by sujoyricky - 9 years ago

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svg98

@svg98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Awesome drabble.. Really miss those days when there love story was story evolving.. May CVs have shown more of it.. Sanskar was so intense while saying those lines..he really does everything with every fiber of his being..just like Swara does everything with all her heart.. Even Swara must of thought is she can love as passionately as Sankar does, give everything of his..holding nothing back.. You truly are a beautiful writer..u create some sort of magic which binds us all.. Its my humble request please if you can do write something on current track..Kavita's proposal of marriage to Sanskar to prove Swara innocent.. please..

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Viji, my friend wishing you a happy valentine's day.

I knew that it is a late wish. Sorry for my late reply.

The Meraki was a gift for all the swasan fans. For all the swasanians, the current track is a real torture.

After seeing yesterday's episode I was sad for them.

The stories in the forum gave the positive thoughts.

My friend, the story Meraki was really nice.

In the first part you beautifully portrayed the character of swara. Her selfless character, and giving nature

Swara is a girl who always wanted to gave happiness to others. But she was betrayed by her sister.

She always tried to gave happiness to others. But for that she was ready to sacrifice her happiness.

The characters of swara and sanskar have so many similarities. They love their family unconditionally.

For the sake of the family they was ready to sacrifice their life.

But the destiny played in the story of their life, and they became pillars for each other.

Sanskar supported swara when she was alone.

She was shattered. He realized her pain and suffering.

They share a beautiful friendship bond.

They understand each other and they are uncompleted without each other.

The journey of their life was really different

But atlast their path of journey mingled with each other.

I really loved the story.

You beautifully crafted the story.

Thank you so much for giving such a beautiful os

Edited by Sakkiyah - 9 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Thanks so very much, guys for the warm comments. You are making today all that more special for me. 🤗 🤗

Please bear with some delay in my individual replies. I've to go out in a bit, and won't be accessing lappie till tomorrow. And I really don't want to torture my poor Hubby today, by spending too much time on my phone. 😊 😉

But I'm reading all the feedback, and I'm most touched and humbled by your words.

Love you all!

Cheers

Viji

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

very warm story. loved the subtle warm that their relationship is shown bringing to their life, the happiness, the strength, the peace. all wonderfully portrayed as always. you have turned some of his show dialogues around beautifully to reveal what he feels. and glad that this swara is more aware about herself to realise that there is something going on in her own heart with it comes to sanskar.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Awesome! 👏

Thanks a ton. 🤗

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Sneha Ray

@sneharay

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Amazing.. 👏
Happy Valentine's Day ❤️

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sneharay
Amazing.. 👏
Happy Valentine's Day ❤️

Thanks so much Sneha. 🤗

So glad you liked it. Happy Valentine's Day to you too. 😊

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jess_27

@jess_27

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Wow... What a gift on valentine day for all the swasan lovers..

Loved the story... How sanskar was trying to cheer swara and assure her that he will always be there to pick her before she even falls... And the slight urge growing within swara towards sanskar, and then she finally giving up yo the urge and hugging him tight..

Thanks for this OS viji, seriously..

Love

Jessica