SwaSan Valentine's Day Drabble: 'Meraki' - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Anusha62

1st sorry for da late post i just nw read it.aww vijji i lovd it 🤗 da story Meraki was really awsme yaar..you beautifully portrayed da characters of swara nd sanskar very well..nd u knw na i love ur tittles alot they r unique..fantastic os re..nd belated happy valentine's day!!!!!!!! 🥳


Hey Anusha dear...🤗 🤗

Please don't say sorry yaar...you know the rule, no sorry between friends na. 😊

So very happy you loved this OS yaar. The word Meraki really describes the essence of Swara and Sanskaar, na? They both pour their heart and soul into the relationships they hold dear, especially their love for each other, of course. 😳 They give their all, with every fiber of their being.

Thanks so much for saying you love the titles of my fics and the character portrayals yaar. 🤗 🤗

Love

Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago
Unresed on page 11 dearest! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Unresed on page 11 dearest! 🤗


Thanks darling. 🤗 Will reply from lappie tomorrow. Are we getting Spells #3 tomorrow? 😊


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum


Thanks darling. 🤗 Will reply from lappie tomorrow. Are we getting Spells #3 tomorrow? 😊


Yep, I'm planning to post one tomorrow😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Yep, I'm planning to post one tomorrow😊


Wonderful 😊 Looking forward to it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi viji
awesome update
keep writing more🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rayab_rajpoot

hi viji

awesome update
keep writing more🤗


Thanks so very much Rayu sweetheart 🤗 Hope to write an OS/2S after a few days. Shall pm you as usual.

Cheers

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Res, dearest, I'm still on travel will unres tomorrow when I go home. For now, this was as sweet as honey and warm as spring!


Unres

Viji my dear, darling, sis,
I'm back finally and unpacked my stuff, had my dinner...and now finally back in bussiness😊 So coming to Meraki, you do know how much I was looking forward to this one. Thank you so much X thousand for the dedication dear!

I don't know now SwaSan are an officially established couple and their wedding track is going on, still I have a soft spot, almost a yearning in my heart for those old times. They had a charm of a different level no? It was what made me a crazy fan for one fact, even if you keep my love for them aside I really feel that old SwaSan was once in a life time couple. They had such a forged in pain bonding, such trust and friendship... All that they had in that dark era of vile Ragini, it is here in this drabble!

Do I have to say how much I loved the way you drew a parallel between Swara and the lovely word Meraki? I mean it was so true in the way you put it. She is a girl who always put Meraki in her relationships...and yearned to have the same level of Meraki returned to her..only to get disappointed each time she had high hopes.

As for Sanskar. I guess his capacity at Meraki is far greater than his lady love's. And so is his expectations. I guess that explains why he was so afraid of falling in love initially, he didn't want to place someone in that god like position he imagines for his love and get disappointed in return.

Now from this angle, I can see no one better to be treated with Sanskar's Meraki than Swara and no one who deserves the Meraki Swara puts in her relationships than Sanskar.

The scene you wave between them, the casual discussion, the chocolate sharing, the comforting and planning, this is the SwaSan I fall in love with. As you had mentioned the next part containing bitterness, I think it will be a continuation of this story line? I'm so excited to read it already! YOu know I am a fan of lighter moments, but painful ones have an appeal to me equally.

Loved it so much, that I don't know a perfect word that would fit here. Waiting for the next.

loads of love,
Saku


Hey Saku darling...🤗 🤗

Thanks so very much sweetheart for this amazing comment. 🤗 I am rushing for a meeting today morning so I will reply in detail later from lappie. But in meantime, it made my day to read your comment. You know how much your feedback means to me.

The next one would not be a continuation of this one my dear. ...this track of drabbles (Vignettes from the Past, Sepia Toned Memories and Meraki) ends here. The next OS/2S would be a standalone one. May take some time though, I need to get my thoughts in order and flesh out the plot for that one.

Will revert in more detail shortly dear. And looking forward to Spells # 3 too. 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Res, dearest, I'm still on travel will unres tomorrow when I go home. For now, this was as sweet as honey and warm as spring!


Unres

Viji my dear, darling, sis,
I'm back finally and unpacked my stuff, had my dinner...and now finally back in bussiness😊 So coming to Meraki, you do know how much I was looking forward to this one. Thank you so much X thousand for the dedication dear!

I don't know now SwaSan are an officially established couple and their wedding track is going on, still I have a soft spot, almost a yearning in my heart for those old times. They had a charm of a different level no? It was what made me a crazy fan for one fact, even if you keep my love for them aside I really feel that old SwaSan was once in a life time couple. They had such a forged in pain bonding, such trust and friendship... All that they had in that dark era of vile Ragini, it is here in this drabble!

Do I have to say how much I loved the way you drew a parallel between Swara and the lovely word Meraki? I mean it was so true in the way you put it. She is a girl who always put Meraki in her relationships...and yearned to have the same level of Meraki returned to her..only to get disappointed each time she had high hopes.

As for Sanskar. I guess his capacity at Meraki is far greater than his lady love's. And so is his expectations. I guess that explains why he was so afraid of falling in love initially, he didn't want to place someone in that god like position he imagines for his love and get disappointed in return.

Now from this angle, I can see no one better to be treated with Sanskar's Meraki than Swara and no one who deserves the Meraki Swara puts in her relationships than Sanskar.

The scene you wave between them, the casual discussion, the chocolate sharing, the comforting and planning, this is the SwaSan I fall in love with. As you had mentioned the next part containing bitterness, I think it will be a continuation of this story line? I'm so excited to read it already! YOu know I am a fan of lighter moments, but painful ones have an appeal to me equally.

Loved it so much, that I don't know a perfect word that would fit here. Waiting for the next.

loads of love,
Saku



Hey Saku darling...

So glad to have you back!! And eagerly looking forward to Spells # 3!

You are absolutely welcome about that dedication, you know much your feedback means, and how much I enjoy our crazy discussions! 😆 Ranging from cobras to toads to peregrines to zombies to duchesses as mad as march hares! 😉

Oh yes, I enjoy the SwaSan bonding at any time, but those days of warm camaraderie and that companionable friendship were so cute. As you said, that bond forged out of a shared pain, a shared loss. And the trust, loyalty and affection they built for each other. It was priceless!

Meraki really does describe both Swara and Sanskaar, na? They pour the very essence of themselves, with all their heart and soul, into the cherished relationships and pursuits in their life---most importantly, in their bond with each other! They truly hold nothing back, give their all, with every last fiber of their being.

They truly are so similar in this respect, inspite of having superficial differences. And they always would be there for each other---for I do believe that they are at home with each other, they feel that warm sense of belonging when they are together.

I will let you know whenever I am ready to post that more intense OS/2S dear. Would need some time, though, as work is quite hectic these days. Like I mentioned in my earlier brief comment, I do not plan it as a continuation of this storyline. Meraki was the concluding part of my Drabble series, in a way.

Lots of Love, (and eagerly awaiting Spells # 3! 😉)

---Viji


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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Friends...🤗 🤗

Thanks for all the very touching feedback. I trust I have replied individually to all comments now.

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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