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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#501

@ishanita...i missed your earlier comment? 😕 didnt realise it. do you know for which part? did i miss replying it for part 5 or 6? sorry about that. will check those parts now

Edited by foresight - 9 years ago

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zeenucharm

@zeenucharm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#502

Windblown update yar... Updatsoon next part

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Kiara.25

@Kiara.25

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#503

👏👏👏

Mindblowing update...the tittle is apt..ENTANGLED HEARTS..

..till 7th episode they where in fringging f**king mess...

N a single step by swara they were out of it...

Guts hai boss bandi me..

Shekher reactions were awesome.. i was🤣🤣..

Poor sanskar have to wsit till marriage to give a reply to his father in law...

😳😳sanskar n swara were being naughty before marriage..

Waiting for epilouge...👍🏼

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 9 years ago

#504

RES...Final chapter before the epilogue😲, i will read it soon ..Thanks for the super fast update Sapna🤗

Unres

Well after last chapter, i thought we are reaching the end but didnt expect this one will be the last chapter though...You did a great job in building suspense and only i was able to crack it after the last chapter. So i was right double wedding indeed😉...

But even if i guessed it , the sequence that led to it was an treat to read, Starting with Garland on Sanskar neck and his reaction to it, leading to the lovely but my favorite swasan mini confrontation in the ballroom . Especially the reaction to the kiss from shekhar and there mini apology... Loved Sanskar immediate concern to lakshya once he remembered him...So this one was a happy SS , so no angst , no brother fighting over a same girl. And for that i am very happy😃...

Sanskar proposal and shekhar reaction was hilarious🤣, Lakshya and Adarsh pulling his leg was always fun to read but i didnt expect Sanskar to speak about Adarsh and Ragini affair in the open ...Shekhar dominating Lakshya since Sanskar cant be scared easily..Atleast he agreed to the marriage ... Loved this SS and the final chapter Sapna❤️ ,It has become another one of my favourite SS .Sad that it ended but Eagerly waiting for my Epilogue ...

Edited by NitaReid - 9 years ago

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Sree

@Sree8410

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#505

Res

Sapna I love you man..🤗oops woman😳

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Sapna 🤗Can I hug to death?😉

I'm actually struggling with finding the actual words to convey what is in my heart after reading this update. Amazing, wonderful, beautiful... all the adjectives you can add please include to this one.

To begin with the way Sanskar felt around his neck and looked up at Swara, wow. He must have felt like a mountain being lifted from him. And what a mind-blowing awesome confession. Both right at their own perspective. Loved the way he said "our kiss" didn't mean anything to you and they way Shekar responded to it. God I still can't help but laugh at this.

The proposal. Could there be any other perfect way to do it. I doubt it seriously. I want to take you to honeymoon every year and have a lot of babies with you😆. This one was for his fil right asking him to stop😆. I like her response as well.

Oh my God Laksh. What a way to tell his brother he was in love with his would-be's sister. 🤣 I loved the way both sasur and damad was pulling him in a fight which they had for each other. Finally him coming up with the solution to elope rather than staying there.

You know I thought Ragini must have kissed Adarsh thinking that he was Laksh and then said all those words and ran away. But again I was wrong he was kissed by his wife.

Oh I love, love the sibling bond here so very much. Especially the way they kept on pulling Sanskar's leg reminding him how he described her to them. And yes she did show them all that she is feisty.

I'm sad though. This is the last part and now just epilogue😭. It was a fast paced SS and I loved every bit of it. Love you more for this one.🤗

Love

Sree

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Krishnabhisarik

@Krishnabhisarik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#506

Wow!! Simply awesome!! Ek hi jhatke mein dil khush rooh bagh bagh ho gayi😆 The shekhar-sanskar-laksh convo was hilarious🤣 This shekhar i like😃 Getting a damaad just like him... Sansku is such a wise-ass, smart-ass and bad-ass too 😉 (no offence) Also how everybody was chipping in the proposal, super cute Finally SwaSan n RagLak are bound together in holy matrimony😛 Waiting eagerly for the prologue...

Love,

Akshata😊

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950660

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#507

wow what an update sapna !!
i loved sanskar n shekher more now !!
they can make a lovely couple 😉
n ending seriously 😭
m soo gonna miss this ff !!
try to come back soon with a brand new SS !!
will be waiting for it !!
n btw swara and sanskar fight a liitle fight was also very interesting then all that confusion drama.. i was just rolling !!
what an act u created there !! *commendable* 👏
n then poor laksh !! holding her hand then leaving her hand !! 🤣

once agaqin completely love ur update !!
n i edit my earlier comment "this update/part is my fav!!"

tc

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Soundless_mirth

@Soundless_mirth

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#508

OhMyGod shekhar and sanskaar! Hah if only shekhar was like this in the show. Swasan are just so cute! I hope they have loads of babies XD The proposal scene with everyone chipping in was epic. It felt like the ending of a romcom. This was a really sweet story absolutely positively endearing! I cant wait for the epilogue and just to let you know you made my sunday!

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maaneetfan

@maaneetfan

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#509

Adorably cute and Hilarious Finale Sapna...I didn't know u were capable of this also
The hilarity came entirely courtesy of Shekhar Gadodia..lol...how funny he is ... I was laughing throughout the entire exchange!!

Hahahaha so Laksh loved Ragini and felt compelled to marry Swara and swara Sanskaar but the same kind of compulsion...heavens ... Whatever would hv happened if Swara hadn't overhead tht fateful conversation the earlier night...such a big disaster!!

But as Shakespeare said it.. All's well that ends well...finally there is a double wedding...and feeling pretty relieved tht adarsh wasn't having tht affair with Ragini...

Looking fwd to the babylicious epilogue tht I'm sure u hv planned...since Sanskaar wants loads of babies

Lotsa love
Tas