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wow awesum one..👏
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Nice update thank you I cannot wait to see what happens in the meeting it will be good

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Nice update
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AWSOME STORY PLZZZ UPDATE SOOON👏😳
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Sorry for the late guys but I have a lot of pending work, and so update late! And yes I don't know but with work, I will post smaller update!

Chapter 6


Finally she come back to India! The city who just give her pain, and the city she left for a better a future! She doesn't forget the sound of train or people around! How quickly they were! This city is still same! Ragini think

Ragini- It's just me who change a lot! I'm not the same women who left! I have change, people made me change! I'm not change mentally but physically too! I'm not the same shying, or obedient girl. Now I'm Ragini Gagodia, who wear modern dress, even if it's short! I'm not the shying women like before! I can decide by my own and not let others decide for me! This Ragini is dead, the new was born at America along with Chaudry's family!

Karan sees Ragini lost and say

Karan- You know Rags, it feel weird to come to your city once again! I mean you know I was born here, but grow up at America! And since doesn't turn up! I don't like India, people are still old thinking, like boys and girls don't have to meet up before shaadi or sagaai. And arrange marriage how old fashion hai yeh. Mudje samadj nehi atta how can a girl marry a boy she doesn't know!

Ragini- You cannot understand! Every girl dreams to have a prince charming as a husband! I have dream that. I have dream that my husband will be my friends, my best friend. A husband who understand me, who talk with me, who see me like the first day! A hsband who will love me like anything! Mudje yeh sapne dekte hi hai, aur pir mudje pyaar hoga ya, lekin with the wrong guys! And for fullfiling my love, I have snatch my sister's love. I became a vamp, and when I was repenting and thinking that everything will be alright, my life became dark. Lekin ab mudje accha feel kar raha hai. Mudje tumse dost mili, ache patner bhi! And rahi baat ki India is old fashion, you are wrong Mr Chaudry, because India is not old fashion, but people who live here.

Karan- Rags you know don't remember your past! I'm here for you like a friend, best friend. You will be my guide to visit India.

Ragini- Ok buddu now can we get out from the airport before anyone sees us like that.

Karan- As you wish ma'am but too late! See the media are already here for us

He wink at Ragini

The media come around the family and ask many questions

Media1- Ragini ma'am why you came to India? You will have a concert here?

Media2- Ragini ma'am you have came here for your personal or professional life?

Media3- How you feel to come back to your city?

Media4- Will you live here now, or going back to America?

Media5- How long will you live here?

Ragini said- Guys guys! I will answer all your question when time will come. For now, I won't because my family and I are very tired! It's was a long journey for us! Will call you for an interview!

Media1- Ma'am still reply us, when will you go?

Ragini- I don't know yet! So I have answer you, please excuse us, we have to go our home.

Media continue to ask her but she remind quite and come hand to hand with Karan. Karan open the gate of the car for her, then close after she enter. Karan sit next to her, and the driver drive till their house. It was a beautiful one, but Ragini was shocked to see the house.


Maheswari Mansion


Swara was watching TV. Sanskar and Laksh come home and Swara tell

Swara- Are Sanskar tum aae? Tum to office janna chate hai na?

Sanskar- Haan lekin appointment cancel so have to come soon.

Sanskar eyes come to the TV and spot Ragini

Sanskar- Ragini?

Everyone gather around Sanskar even Laksh

AP- Where is Ragini ?

Sanskar show the TV and Swara increase the sound of the TV. They see Ragini speaking to the media, and come hand to hand with a man. They don't see the man, and media tell

Media- Ragini Gagodia the new famous singer and designer is in India. Who is the unknow man with her? Her boyfriend? her fiance? Ragini Gagodia didn't tell us the relation between them, but seeing them so close, it's means that he is special to her. Don't miss anything with ABCD channel Myriam at report

( Sorry don't know the channel of india)

Everyone was happy that Ragini finally came back to India. Laksh was happy but yet hurt because Ragini forget him so quickly. Here he is repenting for what he did to her, and there she enjoying her life.

Swara tell- Now I'm happy because my sister finally come back to me. That's why today morning I was feeling weird, I know Ragini was not far away.

Swara seeing Laksh in his own world tell

Swara- Now no one can harm her! See bari ma how she is happy, not like when we saw her? She smiling and was happy! And I hope that man was her fiance, she have the right to be happy after what Laksh did to her, haina Maa?

AP and DP was sad, because they like Ragini, AP want her to be her bahu but destiny change everything.

Sujata- Haan chori! Ragini bohot sundar hai, in modern dresses. Yeh ek Rajkumari ki tarah lag raha hai.

They remember how Ragini was and how she look now. AP was happy to see her smiling like before. They come back to their sense and continue their work.

Sanskar, Swara and Laksh was alone now.

Sanskar look at Laksh and tell

Sanskar- Lucky kyon tum naraz lag rahi ho?

Swara- Why he would not be angry? He want Ragini to suffer and right now she did the opposite! She is happy and smiling! He want to break my sister but see how she break him.

Laksh- Shut up Swara! You know what I prefer when you shut your mouth, because when you open it, it's just to speak rubbish

Sanskar- Laksh how dare you to talk like that with my wife, don't forget that she is your bhabhi, and Ragini's sister! After what you did, you think we will forgive that easily! And that too with this comportment of yours, you just put you in trouble! And you Swara, kab tak tum unki naraz rahogi? main manti hoon, use galti ki chuki ti, lekin Laksh sudar gayi! When you can forgive Ragini's deed, and even my deed why you cannot when it comes to Laksh?

Swara who was fuming tell- Now you will speak up with me Sanskar that too for this cheater? I think you both bhai are same! But I will never forgive Laksh for what he did to my little sister! And Sanskar how can you forget what Ragini undergone, she lost her smile, she lost her life, for whom? For a cheater! You ask me when I will forgive Laksh? When Ragini herself forgive him! Even if she forgive him, I will not, because he just don't break my sister inside but outside too! He play with her feeling numerous time; not that he also let her face humiliation alone! Main manti hoon ki Ragini bohat galtiyan chuki thi, lekin main bhi janti hoon, kyon kiya tha yeh sab. Only for this man, no not a man but a looser! Jab tak I didn't tell him anything because he is your bhai, I just keep stabbing him with my taunt, you know why? Because he keep me apart with my sister! He keep Ragini apart from his family! Even dad and mom have her news, but I don't because they are afraid thats Laksh find her and hurt her once again! I lost my sister! I need her during my pregnancy, I need her care, her food, when I'm craving to have a hug from her side, i just took her photo frame to get some solace, even when I'm talking with my baby about Ragini he kick, when I'm crying for her she don't came! Today I'm telling you why I will never forgive Laksh! I love my sister, my little sister have to be strong, and decide to go, and she didn't tell me! Ragini who never keep any secret from me, go away from me! My sister have to go away from me, because of him! During all theses months I keep thinking about her, about her health! She scared to be alone, and now she is alone!

A voice come behind and tell- Who tell you I was alone?

Everyone turn around, shoked, happy, some have tears, some have smile! Ya Ragini was here. Swara run to hug her, but Ragini stop her. Ragini come to her and wipes her tears and tell

Ragini- Swara look I'm here, fit and fine

Swara breaking the hug look at Ragini from feet to head and tell

Swara- Ragini what are wearing? Modern dress and you? that too short dresses?

Ragini- You know Swara, everything change in theses months! I have a wonderful family now and I have to present you someone too!

Swara- Ragini tum

AP sees Ragini and are happy

AP- Meri bahu, meri beti

Ragini feel uncomfortable to hear the word bahu and then tell

Ragini- AP aunty, you know na I'm not the bahu of this house now

AP- I know for me, you will always be my daughter!

Someone call Ragini from behind. They see a handsome guy, wearing a black jacket and have a big smile on his face! He was at the entrance, and wait for someone to tell him to come down. Ragini come to him with a smile and bring him downstair

Ragini- Karan come I will introduce you to them

They come down and everyone look at them curiously! Uttara who was coming down see Karan and immediately have a smile. She was lost in her world. Karan and Ragini pass near her, and she get her sense again. All this was watch by Laksh, who are happy to see Ragini again and furious at the same time because of the closeness between Ragini and Karan.

Ragini- See Karan Chaudry and Karan see the Maheswari family

Karan- Means your ex- family in law?

Everyone was shocked to know that Karan know about them

Ragini nod and tell- This is DP uncle and AP was his wife. Laksh and Ardash are their sons. Laksh was my ex-husband. Pointing to Parineeti, she is Ardash's wife. This is RP uncle and Sujata aunty. Sanskar are their son and Swara's my sister and Sanskar wife.

Karan smile at them- Nice meeting you all. And specially Swara and Sanskar because, Ragini talk a lot about you. And yeah you too Laksh

Ragini- I want to introduce you my best friend, my partner, and my love too

Everyone was shocked and happy except Laksh and he tell

Laksh- Love?

Ragini- Haan love Mr Laksh Maheswari! Do you have a problem with that too?

Laksh was stunned to see this side of Ragini. The Ragini who agreed on all what he said, and was the type of behenji is changed now.

Laksh- No, but I'm must say you forget me so easily! I think you ..

Ragini smiling sarcastically tell- You think I will cry all my life for you? I will not move on and wait for you to come and take me? No Mr Laksh Maheswari, this Ragini dead the day you didn't turn up at he altar, letting me facing all people taunted, comment and critics. The new Ragini you have before you is due to Karan my fiance, and would be husband. But yeah I must say thank you to you, if you didn't leave me, I would never meet such a wonderful man, not physically but by handsome by heart too, unlike you. You know what wrong with you Laksh you want what you cannot get, but unfortunatly for you I'm not a doll with you can play whenever you want.

Laksh- That's not what I mean

Ragini- So what you mean Laksh? What do you want to say? Sorry?

Laksh- Yes I want you to forgive me, and then think to himself and you to come back to me! but I think I'm late for that

Ragini- You know Laksh I know you, sorry I think I know you more than yourself but I was wrong, I don't know you. But Yes I know one thing, you regret what you did. You want forgiveness I will give you that; but I don't want to see you again in my life. I'm sorry but for what you did to me I will never forget!

And Swara, why don't you forgive him? Because I'm not forgiving him? I have forgive him, who are you to not forgive him?

Swara and everyone was more than shocked to see Ragini like this! She was not angry, and not talking loudly, but whenever she talk, it's like the sky is falling.

Swara- Ragini what are you saying? Who I am? I'm your sister

Ragini- I mean you are this house bahu, you are a married woman now. See how Sanskar are matured and understand the situation. I'm asking something to you, when Laksh and I were engaged, and you both fall in love? When you both decide to marry? you think about me? no you didn't! You know how I love Laksh but you even you fall in love with him. It's hurt a lot Swara, that's why I became bad, not because Laksh betray me, but because my sister betray me! If I was in your place and fall in love with Sanskar, how will you feel? tell me? Don't look down, I'm just asking you! Being an elder sister, you should have talk with me, try to convince me, but no, you just told me Ragini are you happy with my marriage? I wasn't! Because you didn't inform me, and fall in love behind my back! So tell me why are you angry at Laksh? and not on you? You try to put a blame on Laksh but you yourself are the culprit! If I have forgive you and Laksh, tell who are you to not forgive him, and behave nicely with him? Tell me?

Swara was looking down, tears was not stopping from her eyes! Ragini come to her and tell

Ragini- Shona look at me! You know Swara now I don't have any grudge on you all! What happend months ago, have to happen. God write this and we cannot fight with that. I loved Laksh, and now I'm happy with my life! I'm happy with my new family, and you have to be happy for me, because now I'm smiling like before, I have a good job and I'm a famous singer. I'm never dream to have such a life, but God gave me this second life with Karan.

Ragini to Laksh- I'm sorry for whatever I did in the past, I don't have the right to tell you that, but find someone and live your life happily with her. I cannot forget what happened in the past, because there will a part of me who will make me always remember my past. But yeah I'm happy that Karan and his family accept me with my past.

Everyone was crying, even Laksh because he love Ragini, but due to his idiocy he lost her again. But then think of something and tell

Laksh- Yes Ragini I will move on! I will happy if tomorrow you come to my sagai!

Ragini was shocked but then with a smile tell- I'm sorry Laksh because I don't want to see you again! I'm here for a purpose and after that I will came back with Karan. I tell you I cannot forget the past, and what you did to me, I forgive you, but don't forget what you did with me. I'm sorry I cannot.

She was about to go, when Laksh tell- You cannot forget what I did to you or you cannot forget me Ragini?

Ragini was about to reply him but Karan come between and tell- I will reply you Mr Maheswari! Ragini cannot forget what you did to her and cannot forget you either. Shocked? Don't be! Ragini don't wish to come here, but I tell her to come, and overcome her past! She don't need you but me! She was suffering past 7 months, and I came and recollect her heart, give her smile back. And how can she forget you, when you give her so much pain, and meantime gave her happiness.

Ragini- Don't need to tell him all that. He won't understand.

She turn to everyone and say namastey to them and go back with Karan

So everyone you liked it? Tell me in comment how you think about Ragini's character?



Edited by Berlin - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow this is awesome update I like how Ragini was firm and assertive she didn't show her anger and become all crazy

She told the truth and was honest about it which great the way she said it was brilliant

Aww Karan telling Laksh what he needs to know was great

Sanksar was good to in what he said to both Laksh and his wife

Can't wait to read the next part, hope you post it soon when you get time
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

Wow this is awesome update I like how Ragini was firm and assertive she didn't show her anger and become all crazy

She told the truth and was honest about it which great the way she said it was brilliant

Aww Karan telling Laksh what he needs to know was great

Sanksar was good to in what he said to both Laksh and his wife

Can't wait to read the next part, hope you post it soon when you get time


Yeah I mix the ragini I want her to be and the ragini of the show, and so we have a modern Ragini with values !

For me and for the beginning Swara is at fault and she is the main reason for what Ragini change, so I write this!

Sanskar was always the most mature and understand everyone!

Don't worry I will bring more twist ;) Don't know If I will turn this FF on Raglak or Ragan! I'm still thinking :p
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pls make it ragini and karan ff
I mean karan is perfect men for ragini
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Love Ragini's character
Can't wait for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATE👏 AND PLZZZ MAKE THIS A RAGAN FF KARAN IS PERFECT FOR RAGINI
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