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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh how sweet of you! <3 I will try to update tonight, but I'm not sure! Because if I write, I will kill Laksh in this story!

yay cant wait to read your update 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 4

I just don't know what to write because I'm very very angry, upset, revolt ect... with the turn of the track! But yet Rbb1 want me to update so I update <3 Thanks for supporting me Rbb1! This is FOR YOU

We are in a hall, very well decorated. A man come to the middle of the hall and said
" Hello guys, you are here for the clip! The person who will make her entry is very special to me. I want this clip to be a memorable moment" he said with a charming, beautiful smile. This guys is very handsome, muscular type, his deep brown eyes make every girl faint. He then take a call and said away from the people around him

The clip begin
Then a girl make her entry. We cannot see her face, just her back. She wear a pink short dress and begin

The girl's got everything ! (x4) said in the girls in chorus. The women come and take all the dress which it was shown to her.
I've got it all, Jimmy Choo & Manolo, Prada, Galliano,
Cant get nuff, I want more and more...
Louis Vuitton & the Stella Mccartney, Donatella Versace,
I Use bag from GUCCI !! She look, and takes all the dress which she choose.
The women sing
Gulabi ankhein jo meri dekhi, The women is shown now, and she is none other Ragini. She is now in Pink dress, and take the bag. She then dance with the people around her.
Diwana har dil hogya,
Sambhalo khud ko, zara becharo,
Ki jeena mushkil ho gya !!
The girl's got everything ! (x4) said in chorus
Ragini then sing. She has change her dress, for a silver short dress
Mujhsi kahi, koi nahi,
Jo sab k khabo me hai, I'm the one !!
Duniya mere, piche chale,
Mai sabse age hu, I'm number one !!
I've got it all,
Jimmy Choo & Manolo, Prada, Galliano,
Cant get nuff, I want more and more...
Louis Vuitton & the Stella Mccartney, Donatella Versace,
I Use bag from GUCCI !!
Gulabi ankhein jo meri dekhi,
Diwana har dil hogya,
Sambhalo khud ko, zara becharo,
Ki jeena mushkil ho gya !!
The girl's got everything ! (x4)
The song end.
Everyone applaud and Ragini come to the man, but before she could tell anything he spoke

" Kahan hai tu?" he said

" Main yaha hoon" she said innocently. He smile, showing his teeth. OMG his smile, can turn every girl on.

" Oh oh you are lated yaar" he said

" Karan I'm not late, you are ahead" said Ragini

" Malkin aaga ye, to ham kam shuroo karsakte hain?" he said amusingly.
When he sees the women, he stop and come to her

" Ragini kyon tum rona?"

" This word " Malkin" he tell me that before leaving me" said Ragini.

" tumhare ateet ko bhool raho. I can see your present will be very shinning. You will be the best singer of the world"

" Haan haan, Mr Chaudry are you trying to flirt with me?" she said with a smile

" Oh God, main flirt, aur tumhare saat? No chance. But I can put a smile in your face"

" Oh what do you mean by "no chance?"

" You are not my type Ms Ragini" he said smiling

" I'm not your type? So what is your type? theses girls?" she pointe towards some girls who was watching them far and then continue " These girls who don't have cloth on her. Wear mini, we can see they underwear! Chee"

" Tum kya matlab! Every girl want me to be there boyfriend! I'm still young and fresh" he said smiling and a bit arrogant, but nice arrogant.

" You are still young and fresh? I don't want a bahu like this" said a man behind Karan.
Karan frowned and bit his tongue, turn around and say

" Papa, wo... No I'm mean I've to gain" he said stammers. Ragini are trying to hide her smile
Karan father's name is Anirudh Chaudry. The one of the top businessmen in America. He rules Chaudry designing and have a part in a production house. He is the friend of Sheckar.

" Gain what? experiences with girls?" said Anirudh

" Oh Mr chotte Chaudry is afraid of his father?" said Ragini always trying to hide her laugh.

" Ragini, you are smiling, help me yaar" said a pleading Karan

" Main tumhare kyon madat karenge? Ask theses girls who wear mini" said Ragini faking an angry voice

" Oh papa, main samadja gaya hoon. Ms Ragini are jealous"

" Jealous of what? theses girls no, not a tall " she said turning around and add " I think we should go home now"

" Yes beta" said Anirudh

" You cannot go so easily Ms Ragini" said Karan, taking her arm

" Karan, chodo mudje. I've to go" said Ragini

" Yes me too. So chale?" Karan said with a smile. He have already release her hand, but she didn't realize. Karan smile at her and wink to her. Ragini was smiling

They drove to Chaudry mansion. It's was a big a house. Karan park the car and come home.
Everyone was in the living room, chatting.
An elder women come to Ragini and tell
" Ragini beta, tum aa gaye. It's good I want to show you a dress for tonight"

" Tonight?" said Ragini

" Yes Ragini, we have keep a small party for you. It will be tha launch of your album." said a women

" sacchi ma?" said Ragini

" Yes " said Karan Mother, Ratna Chaudry.

" Ok " said Ragini

" Hello! I'm still here?" said Karan

" Yes, we can see you" said Ratna

" Yes and I don't have the right of " hello beta! Tum kesse hoon? Tum tagayi? Chalo main tumhare baal ko massage karvate" he said with a sad face " I'm no more you laagle now"

" Mera beta jealan hai? "

" Nahi main kyon jealan ho? "

" Karan you are my son and will always be. Ragini have also a particular place in my heart" she said with a smile

" I know mom"

Ragini was looking at the sarees, and then ask with her eyes to Karan what she should choose. Karan faking a call tell

" Oh Mr Richard how are you? You will come tonight, that's great! What you should wear? Yes you should wear the royal blue saree, I mean suit. Ok talk to you later"

Everyone know he was faking because Mr Richard have already call, and tell that he won't come. So everyone was smiling at his antic.

" So Ragini you choose?"

" Ha I choose"

" Kaunse saree? blue ?"

" Nahi ma, red saree" this was a shock for everyone.

" Kyon tum blue nahi passand ?" said Ratna

" Yes of course, but I like the red dress" said a smiling Ragini

" Ok. The red is beautiful"

" Thank you ma. I will go upstair. Call me if you want any help"

" Ok"

She go upstair, and come to a room. She was alone and smiling at the saree. Someone come to the room and and hug her from behind. So Ms Ragini, you choose the red saree?"

" Kyon red nahi passan hai Karan?"

" Bohot "

" That's why I choose the red Saree. I know you don't like the blue"

" How do you know?"

" Because I know you"

Someone knock on the door. Karan and Ragini separated and Ragini tell

" Come in"
A servant enter and tell

" Ji Didi, Ratna ji tell you to have some sleep and then she will call you to come to the party"

" Ok"

" Uffo, this Kaka cannot come at another moment " said an angry Karan

" Mr Chaudry, will you please get out of my room?"

" No I won't what you will do? "

" Don't challenge me, you will lost! "

" I'm afraid"

Karan come to her, and she back up, till she hit the wardrobe. She close her eyes, because Karan was near her. She can fell his breath, but then she opened her eyes, to see Karan smiling at her

" You cannot win this game Ragini"

" Karan tum" She begin to hit him, but then Karan said

" Aaram se "

" Yes I'm alright"

" Sleep and I will come after"

She nod, and Karan get out of the room. Ragini was smiling, then remember her past. Her smile vanishe. She take out a photo of Laksh and said

" I will forget you Laksh! That's my promise"
She sleep and then wake up, she look at her mobile for checking the time. She got up and take the saree and goes to her bathroom. She finished and was very beautiful just with the saree. She make her make up. Take her jewelries, a set of precious ruby stones. She was extremely beautiful. She goes out and come down. Everyone was watching her, she look like a princess. Karan come to her and tell
" You want me to get a heart attack? I tell you, I'm still young?"

" and fresh I know" said Ragini
Everyone compliment Ragini with her attire. She come to elder and then Anirudh take the mike

" Hello everybody, like you know this party is for Ragini. It's a launch for her album Swaragini. We are proud of you my girl. Thank you everyone for coming and share our happiness. Lets proceed with a spectacle"

A group a women come and dance on D se Dance. Then Karan and Ragini dance with other couple. The party was fantastic and a women far away said

" Ragini jab tak tum khush hoon. I will soon take you happiness away" she smile and laugh evilly.

The party finished, and Anirudh tell

" Guys, I have to tell you something"

" Anything wrong dad?" said Karan

" No, just we have to go India day after. I want all of us to go, you too Ragini. You have launch your album already. You know your designing have been appreciating by the client, so they want us to come."

" Ok " said Ragini

" Beta is anything wrong? " said Ratna

" Nothing" she goes up stair. Karan follow her

" Ragini what's wrong?"

" I don't want to go there" she said crying

" Why? "

" You know why? "

" because of him?"

" Yes "

" I thought you have already forgetting him"

" I cannot forget my past "

" Yes but you will have to learn, because I won't let him to break the women you are. I'll be always beside you" he said hugging Ragini

" Thank you "

" Welcom Ms Ragini. Waise bhi Ragini, tonight you were very hot and sexy in that red saree"

" Karan, tum kabi nahi sudrega"

" Nahi, I don't want " he said with a smile. Ragini too smile

" Ye hui na baat, you smiled" he said

" Thank you "

" You will thank me every time?"

" Yes, you have a problem?"

" No, I like when someone thanks me"

" Go out now, if someone sees you here"

" What they will do? It's my house, I can go in every piece of this house"

" haan baba go now"

" Ok main chalti hoon. Today you tell me go, maybe some day I will really go far away from you" He said with a dramatic voice. Ragini chuckle and tell

" Yes yes. I will get ride of you"

" Soccho if I go, you will crying " he wink at her, and she smile.

She take the photo and tell

" You will not be able to break me now Laksh. I swear on you, you make fun of my love many times, this times it's my turn. Main aarahaon Mr Laksh Maheswari, tumhare barbadi aati hai" She said with a determinate face.

So how was the chapter ?







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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
What can i say as always brilliant update
loving this new and confident Ragini she is great

Karan is awesome he is sweet caring nice kind and funny

Karans parents are so sweet and i like how they care for Ragini like their own daughter Shekar did the right thing sending her to them

I like how Ragini promised herself she is forget Laksh

It is good she is going back to India

I cannot wait to read what happens next

Hope you post the next part soon

Thank you for the update you made me feel better now

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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: rbb1

What can i say as always brilliant update

loving this new and confident Ragini she is great

Karan is awesome he is sweet caring nice kind and funny

Karans parents are so sweet and i like how they care for Ragini like their own daughter Shekar did the right thing sending her to them

I like how Ragini promised herself she is forget Laksh

It is good she is going back to India

I cannot wait to read what happens next

Hope you post the next part soon

Thank you for the update you made me feel better now


Really? you was so much hasty?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Superb update dear
karan and ragini are so adorable loved their bonding

please update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Berlin


Really? you was so much hasty?

you are a brilliant writer, if only the CVs thought like you and other amazing writers here
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sudhi03

Superb update dear

karan and ragini are so adorable loved their bonding

please update the next part soon

i know right Ragini needs someone like Karan in the show
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: rbb1

you are a brilliant writer, if only the CVs thought like you and other amazing writers here


based in I want to be an actress ;) but fate make me a writer! I wish I could tell the CVs my thought :(
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Awesome update
Love Karan and Ragini's bonding
Can't wait for Laksh coming face to face with Ragini
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
hi hun when are we getting the next update 😃

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