SwaSan Valentine Week OS-- 'Toska' - Page 7

This is amazing, Viji!

Originally posted by: Forum.Maniac

This is amazing, Viji!

Perfect dose of intensity, laughter and romance ❤️ Absolutely loved it!

Viji! 🤗
beautiful !!!!!
when ended reading OS, this word escaped from my mouth! so intense and peace generating it was , Viji! really loved it! :)
err! name kinda matched with my name , Toshika!😆 hoped, it would have some happy happy meaning errr!! noo!! pain!!!
ummm! Viji please next time find a happy one which rhymes with my name! 😛 😆
by the way, I refrained from asking you since long! when are you going to write an intense sane love filled one on Tagore's poems! 😊 its OK! if you don't want to write or are busy! :)

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

its awsome & beautiful.

different take of tht scn.

lk shomi swara's heart to heart talk.

swasan ka to kya kehna,

jst love love it.

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Is it the patronus spell? 😆 Mine is now the peregrine, you know...😉

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

It's awesome

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik

From Toska to Ekstaz.. This was sooo good , Viji! The absolutely miserable condition, aching hearts, every breath was a struggle for Swasan during separation.. And then the joyous moment of realisation followed by ecstatic reconciliation.. Very well written dear.. Loved it😊

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

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Viji 👏
I don't have any words to say but i will say something 😉
The way you have portrait swara and sanskar feeling it is beyond awesome seriously
Swara and sharmishta mother and daughter relationship you have showed it is speechless
The way sharmista was convincing swara is very well written
The kiss with moustache or without was lovely 😳
Overall it was a delightful os to read.
I simply loved it to the core.
Waiting for your future os eagerly 😃

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Interesting...

Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1

awsome 😳