SwaSan Valentine Week OS-- 'Toska'

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Awww..😳😳 This was such a sweet valentine special OS dearest Viji 🤗
And love you ❤️ for saying that I have become a good friend to you,
thanks a lot for the dedication also😃
And now coming to the story..☺️
Poor Swasan..😭 they were pining for each other for six weeks😲😲 poor things..can't even imagine such a long separation Thankfully in the show, Swara always came back to MM for her so called missions😆😛 Otherwise, we all would have pined for seeing them together..😳

I really loved the way Sharmishta confronted her Shona, trying to make her understand that she is really missing Sanskaar..Poor Swara, I can imagine her worry that she might not reach Sanskaar's expectations compared to Kavita.. But Sharmishta being Sharmishta, knew how to boost her child's confidence level😃😃 And the result was that Swara just went off to Kolkata , to profess her endless love to her husband..
Uttara is such a sweet nanad..she knew what Swara was after..😉 and pointedly told that Sanskaar bhai is in Swasan's room..The way she told your room was so sweet😳😳
You have beautifully described Swara's fast paced heartbeats her anticipation while going to their room..❤️ Even my condition was same as Swara..😛😉
When Sanskaar came from the balcony, I had the same feelings of Swara..you write beautifully Viji..🤗 Mmmuaaah..😳
And that "tum mere neeche ho Swara" moment😆😳 was so cute..and Swara's dialogue, last time main tumhare upar thi na🤣
Loved it when you said that his fingers and hands had a brain of their own..With Swara being so close, how can he help it😛😛 she is so attractive na😳
I really loved the words Swara chose while proposing him..They were sweet and subtle, deep enough to show her heart's feelings to him beautifully..Loved those lines❤️ And Sanskaar hugged her so tightly, saying that he was afraid that she would never ever tell those words to him😭 poor Sanskaar..I just love him for his character..😊
And the kiss was..Ohh my Godd..Top of the world..☺️ Swara initiated it..That is the main thing I loved about it..And the way Sanskaar's lips took it forward into a deeper one was..❤️ blissful..
Really loved this OS yaaar..Love youuu 🤗

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
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Dear Viji,

What a blissful OS" from 'Toska' through 'mizpah' till 'mudita'.

A beautiful journey! We have Sanskaar burning in the fires of separation and Swara mourning the loss of her heaven (I somehow derived a certain sadistic pleasure in reading about Swara's plight - she does deserve it right? I mean how blind can one be to one's heart?😉)

Sharmishta is the true herione in this tale - how well she addresses Swara's fears, especially that line - " she was his past, you are his present and future. With you he will be happy. But you need to have the courage to take that final step" and indeed, she does - decides to go home, to Sanskaar.

"the fiery steeds of helios himself could not have held Swara back' - it is a wonder he decided to rise - after all I sure Swara was glowing enough to outshine him.😆

And the saree you described, another one from your collection? (you seem to have a lovely one if the sarees you describe are anything to go by 😊).

And then the epic - fall!😆 and what a fall it was - followed by another epic one liner - 'Tum mere neeche ho, Swara' (Oh god - I went into raptures here😆😆😆 - it completely brought back memories of that other fall and that (a)Sanskaari one liner).

BTW, how did Swara know he lost weight😉😉 (he could look leaner, but the actual weight loss?)

Then the beautiful confession, the acknowledgement - it was not only Sanskaar waiting for Swara - even we waited😊.

Madame Swara's naughty avatar - her academic interest in being kissed😊... truly Ekstaz.

Thank you for this wonderful valentine day's gift.🤗🤗🤗

love,
Nyna

Thanks so mych Nyna dear...

I have a nephew (cousin's son) named Mudit, BTW. 😊

Am so glad you liked the portrayal of both Sanskaar's and Swara's anguish. Yes, Swara's pain and desolation is, to an extent, caused by her own insecurities/ uncertainties about her own emotions. But I think she deserves the benefit of doubt (which Sanskaar always gives her 😊), since given her childhood without a strong father figure, and the lackadaisical, fickle nature of Shekar even after he acknowledged she was his daughter, would have bred a deep insecurity within her. I would not at all be surprised by her self esteem issues...

Yes, I did want to portray Sharmishta in that light here, thanks so much for your lovely words there. Mothers are wonderful aren't they---as are Fathers, too. (Except, of course, for Shekar...but then that's a discussion for another day. 😛)

Swara was certainly glowing with purpose and hope enough to put Helios in the shade that day! 😆 Ermmm, well it so happens I have that sari...but not all the ones I describe in other OS's. 😉 (My poor Hubby, if indeed I demanded all of them! 😆). Some are based on saris I see my family members or friends wearing. As you've remarked before, we do share a number of tastes in color and novels and poetry. 😊 I am fairly obsessed with blues/ purples as well as pinks. 😆

😳 I SO wanted to turn that epic dialogue from the serial on its head. ☺️ So the unforgettable "Tum mere upar ho, Swara..." was mirrored by the "Tum mere neeche ho, Swara..." 😳. I don't think Swara minded at all, either way! 😉

Ermm...Nyna, what ideas are you putting in my head, re? I just thought Swara would note Sanskaar lost weight since his clothes hung more loosely on him. ☺️ I mean, this was the first time she had been "neeche" him, so she couldn't have registered his weight from before, na? 😃 😉

Oh yes, Swara wants to compare the reality with the dream---and decide which kiss is better--bearded Sanskaar, stubbled Sanskaar, or clean shaven Sanskaar. ☺️ I have NO idea what she finally decided. Perhaps that will be an OS for another day!

Thanks again, dear!

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

And still I was not the first.😭 - Unres page 1

Hey Nyna sweetheart...🤗 🤗

Replied on your comment. Loved it, dear---thanks a ton!

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: reeyacute
Viji... am short of words to decribe this
Hilarious tum mere niche ho...
Hw i want to see swara ib a saree yaar...plain simple saree not gaudy
ones
Lovely as usual

Hey Reeya my dear...🤗

Thanks so very much. Am so happy you loved this.

That "tum mere upar ho, Swara..." is such a classic moment from the serial...I wanted to give a mirror image of that in my OS with the "Tum mere neeche ho" dialogue. 😆 😳

Oh I also would love to see Swara in some elegant saris. Not too flashy or dressy but the subtle and lovely type. It would suit her character and image so well.

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Vini224

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

What a beautiful OS.

I wish the Cvs showed something like this in the show instead of what we got on the show.

But why bother about them when we have amazing writers like you who make our Swasan special as they deserve to be.

I fall more in love with our onscreen couple after reading such beautiful stories.

Thanks a ton for the PM, Viji🤗

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Hi my dear friends...

Thanks so very much for all your lovely comments. They've really made my evening, and have made my Friday in advance, too. 😊

Really touched and humbled by all your warm words. Am catching up with my individual replies to all comments, and should be through later tonight, or tomorrow morning.

Loads of Love

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Sakura24
Unresed in page 2 Viji dear, feeling Ekstaz myself :)

Thanks so much Saku my darling! will reply in just a bit. I was so very moved by your comment. Will un-res my spot on the Spells #1 as well. That immensely moved me, too! 🤗

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: bwvianna
Unres page 2

Thanks Vrinda sweetheart. 🤗 Will reply in just a bit.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Anusha62
vijji love u yaa 🤗 ..ur a fantastic writer...ur stories are always professional..i smiply loved it..wht a beautiful 'toska' u gv us amazing dear..perfect os!!!!!!!

Thanks so much Anusha my dear. 🤗 Am so very glad you loved this OS. 🤗