SwaSan Valentine Week OS-- 'Toska' - Page 8

My dear Saku, Anna, Vrinda and Naina...🤗

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Thanks so mych Nyna dear...

I have a nephew (cousin's son) named Mudit, BTW. 😊

Am so glad you liked the portrayal of both Sanskaar's and Swara's anguish. Yes, Swara's pain and desolation is, to an extent, caused by her own insecurities/ uncertainties about her own emotions. But I think she deserves the benefit of doubt (which Sanskaar always gives her 😊), since given her childhood without a strong father figure, and the lackadaisical, fickle nature of Shekar even after he acknowledged she was his daughter, would have bred a deep insecurity within her. I would not at all be surprised by her self esteem issues...

Yes, I did want to portray Sharmishta in that light here, thanks so much for your lovely words there. Mothers are wonderful aren't they---as are Fathers, too. (Except, of course, for Shekar...but then that's a discussion for another day. 😛)

Swara was certainly glowing with purpose and hope enough to put Helios in the shade that day! 😆 Ermmm, well it so happens I have that sari...but not all the ones I describe in other OS's. 😉 (My poor Hubby, if indeed I demanded all of them! 😆). Some are based on saris I see my family members or friends wearing. As you've remarked before, we do share a number of tastes in color and novels and poetry. 😊 I am fairly obsessed with blues/ purples as well as pinks. 😆

😳 I SO wanted to turn that epic dialogue from the serial on its head. ☺️ So the unforgettable "Tum mere upar ho, Swara..." was mirrored by the "Tum mere neeche ho, Swara..." 😳. I don't think Swara minded at all, either way! 😉

Ermm...Nyna, what ideas are you putting in my head, re? I just thought Swara would note Sanskaar lost weight since his clothes hung more loosely on him. ☺️ I mean, this was the first time she had been "neeche" him, so she couldn't have registered his weight from before, na? 😃 😉

Oh yes, Swara wants to compare the reality with the dream---and decide which kiss is better--bearded Sanskaar, stubbled Sanskaar, or clean shaven Sanskaar. ☺️ I have NO idea what she finally decided. Perhaps that will be an OS for another day!

Thanks again, dear!

Hey viji

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

So you have a nephew named Mudit 😊

And yes, agreed that Swara would have insecurity issues - I am sure anybody - the men who had been in her life (both her father and lakshya) were quite pathetic and did let her down all the time. But still, seeing the pain she put Sanskaar and herself - was exasperating at times.

And regarding that epic dialogue - do read the post TEP#2 if you get a chance, in case you have not already done so.

@bold above - no ideas😉 emm - actually if you think we / me have /has a dirty mind, I clarify - we don't have a dirty mind, we have a sexy imagination😆

And to round it off maybe, we could have a story about Swara's research - though I am sure that in the end the reality would be far better than any of her dreams. Trust Sanskaar on that 😊

Nyna

Originally posted by: luvakanksha

Hey viji

This os was simply awesome

Brilliant work 👏

It was intense in the beginning when both of them were missing each other

Then sharmishtha walked in to advice swara and as a mother understood her insecurity and bought her out of it

Then Swasan scene at the end was emotional, romantic, cute and intense at the same time - only a perfect writer like u could bring out so many emotions in just one piece of work

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Nyna...

Yup, so I was familiar with the term mudita and that it means happiness. What does the other word you mentioned in your first comment mean? Mispah?

Coming to the other points above...Oh yes, we certainly have a sexy imagination. 😳 ☺️

Hahaha a story about Swara's research, to "academically" compare reality to her dreams huh? 😳 May run foul of the forum rules if I attempt it. And oh yes, practical is always better than theory. 😆

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Mizpah (n) means a deep emotional bond between two people, especially separated by distance

And yes - we would run foul of the forum rules - we should leave it to our imagination😉

Nyna

I am on the 12th page this time? Hmph! Me no likes...but then I was out of town😳 Kya kare real life gets in the way of important things😆

Sorry for the previous rough answer 😭

Loved the story ya... Perfect for the Valentine week... :)... Thou I wish we got something like this in the show.. 😆 😆 ... Pehle main tumhare upar thi... 😆 😆 ... Loved that part...

This part of the show when Swara finally realised her love for Sanskaar was just great... And memorable.. Loved her confession... And love the way you showed sanskaar... Awww... 😳 😳 .. Isn't he just every girl's dream... ...

Loveddd their romance and their part in the bedroom... 😳 .. Too cute.. Amazing surprise in the week since the show is offering no romance between the couple, your lovely and heartfelt stories make up for it... 👏 👏 ... Needless to say, that your works are just great to read.. Keep awaiting for the updates..

Sorryyy for the late comment.. Was a little busy... But wanted to just tell you that you made my dayyy... 😊 🤗 ...