SwaSan Valentine Week OS-- 'Toska' - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

164

Views

9.4k

Users

47

Likes

228

Frequent Posters

simsen23 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#11
viji ❤️
i love You... 😊
thank you so much for considering my request..
I just love this Toska
well sounds confusing considering its meaning,
but the way you have potrayed all the characters is just superb.
First time i liked Sharmistha's character a lot(my mom's name is also sharmistha)
Wow that lady has so much understanding about life (she had faced a lot of hurdles in her life)
Those words regarding meaning of love are excellent.
Swara's pain and insecurities were so genuin.
oh my poor boy sanskar became weak physically and mentaly after separating from swara 😕
They love eachother so much..
and that kiss(i became emotional for the first time after reading about a kiss)
It was like all their pain or as you said Toska went away with that blissfull kiss... 😊
lovely.
I think you made me more demanding...next time i will request for mose os on swasan
love,
simi 😊
taniks thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Wow , that was an incredible experience reading this os .how beautifully vivid u emote those pangs of love. The pain of swaras was so real , her longing for him conflicting with her insecurities from both their past was so done brilliantly , Sanskaar a true gentleman , I just love this character , ever so patient , true to his love and nature, but his feelings was NVR explored in the serial to the extent u have in this os , awesome in capturing his pain it almost broke me.u know I think u r a fabulous writer but my God u have outdone urself with this one. Truly loved it , it had everything in it, pain , longing , desire , happiness ,motherly love , love of soul mates , joy if reunion of lovers and so much more but the one think that captures the reader is that the story was told with intense passion by the writer clearly showing ur love for ur work and mostly for the characters. Its always a huge pleasure to read ur work cos it NVR , ever disappoints and always better than the one before it.
Sakkiyah thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Awesome os
You beautifully portrayed the emotions of swara and sanskar.
Really loved the os
Edited by Sakkiyah - 9 years ago
Cogito_Ergo_Sum thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#14


Thanks Nyna sweetheart. 🤗 I think you res'd even before I'd sent out PM's. Was very touched by that. Eagerly looking forward to what you thought.

Love,

Viji

Apudip thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Will read it if my son gives me a second 😕
Cogito_Ergo_Sum thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#16


Thanks a ton, Mukta darling. 🤗 So very touched, that you res'd literally in a flash!
Mallika-E-Zain thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#17
res

Unres-
Hi Viji! Unresing very late I know. But I'd so much workload and exams, I'm really sorry!
Hope this one is forgiven.
So continuing with it. The OS was awesome! I loved it too much. The description of the pain and turmoil in the hearts of both Swara and Sanskaar was too good!
Sanskaar was so pained with Swara's absence as if his life has been drained away from him. He loves her so much. Unconditional, irrevocable, selfless and pure! This guy is too amazing ain't he?
God I love him so damn much!!<3
Swara was equally in a horrible condition. She appeared so sad and sullen. I guess that would be an understatement. It looked as it was some excruciating pain that was stabbing her each and every second as she was away from Sanskaar. Aw...
Swara and her insecurities. Sheesh she's so worried but not about the fact that she'll be hurt but the fact that she won't be able to love Sanskaar to the extent that he deserves. How cute was that gesture.
Finally these two half dead souls meet! OMG what a meeting ahem..ahem. Right falling on the sofa.
Amazinggg. And Sanskaar's epic dialogue- Tum mere neeche ho Swara😆 Lol.. this guy is choo cuteee. And Swara's reply was epic😆😆 I loved it<3 The confession was nice and the emotinal outburst. Such a treat for a Valentine week!😳

Edited by MusicAddict - 9 years ago
tootiefrootie11 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Res! And that too with great annoyance that I'm already on page 3 😆

My treat for after office- love you sis xoxo

Unres:

My dearest sister from another mother 🤗

First, can I multiply that hug as many times as you can take without shoving me away?😆 This beautiful (nothing new there) piece was literally my lifeline all through the madness of my day yesterday. I read it, and it kept a happy bubble around me despite some stressful moments all through the day and despite having slept after 3.30 am and having had approx 4 hours kip, I am happy as I re-read this multiple times and also read Saku's lovely Spring spin offs so all is well! For the dedication ❤️- and this is going to sound very strange but on this one, if my name hadn't appeared, I would have demanded it did! 😲 No, no, I am not becoming a demanding harpy but seriously, the P&P connection here!!! As everyone who has ever had real interaction with me re writing and reading knows, I possibly hold a record for loving that book and a work like this so perfectly aligning that, I would want to claim some connect to, however tangential 😃.

Sorry to ramble even more so as usual but of course the title captured me and then the reference to the Plato's Symposium, given my love for Greek mythology buried the hook very firmly in. And the crowning glory- as soon as I read the slightly modified version of THAT quote, I was literally gaining ear to ear!! My PA just looked and decided not to even ask 😆. Took me straight back to the mammoth discussions you, me, Geetu and some others had re my insistence that Sanskaar is most Darcy-like in the ways that matter! I was so so pleased! And of course as you had written it, I rubbed my hands in glee as I knew that this would be special and it was! By the time, I got my Lizzie Bennet, I could have danced around the office.

I know we were dealing here with Tosca but when it is so sweetly poignant, it reminds me of "Melancholy is the happiness of being sad. (Victor Hugo)". So it was here. I fell in love all over again, crashed to despair and torment at the parting and then was uplifted into SwaSan heaven at the reunion, all in the space of this one masterful OS. In my very humble opinion, this is probably one of your most stellar OS pieces, but I am happy to admit bias due to the major P&P "feels" I had throughout.

A few special mentions in an already notable OS:
Lovely use once more of memorable dialogues form the show, you re-use so deftly and with the changed emphasis you give, they really pack the punch. Especially the Benares reference and the reminder to that Diwali scene, which you already know from "Trial by Fire" is one of my favourites for the sheer romance it implies.

Adored the slightly modified version of Sharmishta's role/ words here in making Swara truly see what her heart already knew but she was being so dense about. Especially loved her directly explaining the dichotomy the show's Swara has always had about her feelings for Lakshya and Sanskaar's for Kavita.

Uttara and her cute teasing 😳. Me and you have always loved the potential for that bond and finally even in the show we at least get that with a fun Uttara making the most to make her bhabhi blush and also pull her desperate brother's leg.

And then of course that journey culminating in Ekstaz- a word that actually doesn't even need translation no? Such a lovely sound it has in a language that can sometimes be harsh on some connotations (my best friend at uni has a First Class degree in Russian incidentally and spent a year living there- totally irrelevant fact share!). Their joy and the passion, but infused with the blended humour that is your trademark for SwaSan romance - all so perfect and well, just krasivaya really!

Oh last but not least, glad a certain someone did not have to be dealt with in this. Hate that character to the core and I flinch each time I have to think of "tackling" her 😉.

Love you Viji 🤗

Edited by tootiefrootie11 - 9 years ago
soapbubble thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Ha ha!
Bereft in Benaras!!
So happy you brought that sequence in... I was half hoping Shomi would have summoned Sanskaar to Benaras and Swara would run out to Sanskaar who was waiting for her "Ganga kinaare" but I like your version too - besides much more fulfilling in the privacy of their room 😳 😆

Very nice! Three more days to V Day - are we going to get an OS every day leading up? 😳⭐️ Please say yes!
Cogito_Ergo_Sum thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Res, I'm still about to read😊



Thanks, my dear Li'l Sis! 🤗 🤗 Looking forward to your take.

Love,

--Viji

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".