RagYa ss milan Abhi Adha Adhura Hai part 10 Pg 26 updated 2/4 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

Did u write something? Actually no one informed me yet so I don't know if u wrote something or not, sudhi...

Now m talking to the writer of the ss...
It was really really nice... so finally Laksh babu is stuck between his brain n his heart...n Ragini gotta know about the truth... wow!!!
It will be amazing when Laksh starts to love her n she leaves him...
But plz end up with RagLak...

To a friend...
If u remember me I m neha...


Hi Neha🤗ofcourse i remember you dear. Thanks for liking. Don't worry RagLak are end game.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

Btw...I liked the title..
I always wanted RagLak to act as prem poonam of vivah


Vivaah is one of my favourite movie i really love the song. shahid and amrita rao gosh they are so adorable in that movie.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
really nice update
plzzz continue soon
waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

really nice update
plzzz continue soon
waiting...


Thank you😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting start to ur story
Can't wait for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb story dear. I loved it🤗
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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update the 2nd part.. waiting..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Milan Abhi Adha Adhura hai part 2

Ragini makes a decision she wants to leave the house as soon as possible she doesn't want to face laksh she wanted to tell everything to annapurna but something stopped her.

Ragini: No ragini how can you do this how can you forget about swara her concious stopped her. swara and sanskaar are also getting married on that day this truth can snatch their happiness i can't do it she thought herself. I have to think of some other i will leave this city forever once swara and sanskaar gets married she thought. Finally ragini gets an idea.

Ragini: ma i want to talk to you

Annapurna: Ha beta bolo she said.

Ragini: Ma woh sharmishtha ma called she asked me to come to badi till me and laksh gets married said ragini.

Annapurna: yes beta she is right i forgot to say you that now you go and pack your things i will ask driver to drop you in baadi she said.

Ragini: i already packed my things ma

Annapurna: smilingly "lagta hai bahut jaldi hai apne maayke jaane ki tumhe"

Ragini: trying to control her tears "ha" ma

Annapurna didn't notice the pain in ragini's voice.

Ragini came down stairs with her suit case she took blessings from Annapurna, sujatha, and parineetha. she couldn't hold her tears anymore she hugged Annapurna tightly and started crying.

Annapurna: why are you crying beta it's just a matter of 1 week right then you will be back in this house as laksh's dulhan she said.

Ragini: Gives her a sad look and wipes her tears.

She starts moving to the main door from there she turns and looks towards the house for one last time all her memories becomes fresh she thinks about her grihpravesh when she first entered the house she was welcomed by annapurna. Tears starts rolling down through her cheeks. She waves good bye to everyone and leaves without turning back.

Tea Time in MM


Maheswaris enjoying their evening tea with a plate full of pakodas and talking about wedding preparations. laksha enters the house

Uttara: look laksh bhaiyya is back from office

laksh gave a surprised look usually everyday it was ragini who greets him first after coming from office but she was no where to be seen his eyes are searching for her may be she is in her room he said to himself.

Laksh: mom i will go and get fresh

Annapurna : thik hai she nodded

Laksh enters the room but ragini was no where his room was dead silent. where is ragini he asked himself. After getting fresh laksh came down stairs to have his tea. He was with his family but all he could think about is ragini .

Uttara: Bhaiyya what are you thinking?

Laksh instantly answers ha woh ragini ke ba..

He stopped realizing what he said. everybody starts laughing

Sujatha: ragini tho apne maayke chali gaye hai

Laksh: Got frantic and started to ask what why, when when will she return she didn't said me anything why did she go asked seriously.

Everybody laughs at laksh

Uttara: Bhaiyya you are missing her from now but still 1 week left she cannot come before that.

Laksh: But why did she go she didn't tell me anything about this.

Annapurna: Beta why are you getting angry it's just a ritual you both can't in the same house before marriage she explained.

Uttara: teases laksh bechare bhaiyya he is missing bhabhi too much and she laughed.

Laksh to himself why didn't she tell me about her going. But he didn't want to accept the fact that he is indeed missing her.

After dinner in laksh's room


laksh entered his room and it was pin drop silent. The silence and loneliness his haunting him. he never felt so lonely in his entire life. he tried to sleep but all his thoughts are occupied with ragini her smile, her innocently saying sorry laksh couldn't stop himself from thinking about ragini.

He desperately tried to sleep but couldn't so he decided to do his office work and opened the cupboard to get some files. As he opened the door ragini's jewellery boxes started falling on the floor.

Laksh: look at this girl how carelessly she left her jewellery like some piece of thrash he said. He started placing but suddenly he noticed a small box which was placed very caefully in the cupboard as some treasure hidden in it. laksh became curious now what is in this box that she preserved it so carefully he thought.

He opened the box and to his surprise it's the watch which was gifted by him to ragini after their marraige. laksh cannot believe he wasn't serious when he gifted her never he thought in his wildest dreams that the watch matters her so much he remembered that day her face was to be seen when he gifted her the watch. There was so much of happiness on her face as she got all the treasure of this world.

Lakshya's mind and heart was filled with ragini's thoughts. why ragini why do you love me so much i didn't do anything for you till today all i did was breaking your heart not once but twice fell in love with your sister decided to marry her then why didn't you forget me ragini.

Laksh's started remembering about his and swara's moments. He thinks i thought i loved swara i chased her, threatened her to love and finally she too started loving me but when the time came she moved on like there was nothing between us she didn't give a single chance and never looked back. But you ragini i gave you so much pain hurted you so much but you never stopped loving me why ragini why?.

His eyes fall onto ragini's photo which was palces on the side table beside his bed. He took the photo in his hands and starts talking to it. You know ragini i always thought i loved swara but i don't know why my heart always choosed you to trust more than swara. If i loved swara then why did your truth hurted me so much as i never wanted you to be proved wrong. You know ragini today i understood one thing i never loved swara.

Ragini in GM in her own thoughts

Ragini: i know laksh today you will be so happy after coming home because i'm not there. i know you won't miss me laksh afterall you are waiting for this day. You know laksh i thought one day you will also love me i was living in that hope but you snatched even that also laksh. But i don't blame you maybe this is my punishment for hurting so many people and i accept it laksh.

Laksh: i want to punish you ragini for what you did then why my heart is saying that it's wrong.

ragini: it's just a matter of some days laksh then i will be gone from your life for ever.

laksh: Untill today i never realized it, but you became an important part of my ragini.

Thinking about each other finally they go to sleep.



I hope you guys liked it.

part 3

sanlak talking about love



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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
OMG this is awesome I like how you are writing about them both one wants to leave and other one realises he loves her, it's funny how Laksh blurted out he was thinking about Ragini cute

Him missing her is a good start I guess now he will realise what it feels like to not have the person you love with you

Aww Ragini crying when she left knowing she is not coming back was so sad

Can't wait for the next part

Thank you please PM next if you can thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Aww this is so cute.
Laksh missing ragz. Thanks for updating dear

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