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Posted: 9 years ago
Bubble dear.. first of all a big hug for these last four marvelous updates..🤗

Awesome superb mind blowing..mmuaaahh..❤️

So Lakshya has started missing Ragini and he even went to meet her at the Baadi, making an excuse that he wanted to meet Sharmishta😳😳 Loved Sharmishta's advice to Ragini that after planting a seed, you must not dig it up now and again to check its progress..👏

And Swasan..❤️ What can I say now..☺️ Sanskaar and Swara became one in every sense..HayeeAnd that scene was beautifully written..Swara asking him please Sanskaar and then they took the plunge..Wow just wow..👏😃😃 Take an extra bonus hug for this update 🤗😳

And when Ragini arrives at the Maheshwari house, Lakshya's becomes happier just like that..😳😳 Hmm kuch kuch horaha hain..😉 But Poor Sanksaar and Swara. he has to leave to Tokyo now..

Swara got feverish too..Oh no😭 But I am glad that AP and Sujju will take care of her..And even Ragini is there na..😊😊

Poor Lakshya he is happy for Swasan, but still he nurses a bit of resentment against Sanskaar for taking Swara completely away from him..Its natural..😊




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Posted: 9 years ago
NIce update bubble. So she cant live without her loved ones. Loved the entire update. Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Swasan were truly made for each other

N lovely update


Thanks Kritz - yeah they're certainly good for each other

(I have another universe in which Swara is with Lakshya so can't fully agree with you there but... 😛 😉 😆 😆😆)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: soapbubble


Ishq ka bukhaar! 😳

Laksh sayana ho gaya hai 😛😆


Yeah! Pyaar Ka Bukhaar
Laksh and sayana..Lol!😆 Do update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: soapbubble


Thanks Kritz - yeah they're certainly good for each other

(I have another universe in which Swara is with Lakshya so can't fully agree with you there but... 😛 😉 😆 😆😆)


Really Bubble - and I had written an OS in which SwaSan are together whichever reality / world / universe you picked😆
Guess each to their own😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Bubble dear.. first of all a big hug for these last four marvelous updates..🤗

Awesome superb mind blowing..mmuaaahh..❤️

So Lakshya has started missing Ragini and he even went to meet her at the Baadi, making an excuse that he wanted to meet Sharmishta😳😳 Loved Sharmishta's advice to Ragini that after planting a seed, you must not dig it up now and again to check its progress..👏

And Swasan..❤️ What can I say now..☺️ Sanskaar and Swara became one in every sense..HayeeAnd that scene was beautifully written..Swara asking him please Sanskaar and then they took the plunge..Wow just wow..👏😃😃 Take an extra bonus hug for this update 🤗😳

And when Ragini arrives at the Maheshwari house, Lakshya's becomes happier just like that..😳😳 Hmm kuch kuch horaha hain..😉 But Poor Sanksaar and Swara. he has to leave to Tokyo now..

Swara got feverish too..Oh no😭 But I am glad that AP and Sujju will take care of her..And even Ragini is there na..😊😊

Poor Lakshya he is happy for Swasan, but still he nurses a bit of resentment against Sanskaar for taking Swara completely away from him..Its natural..😊





Thanks Naina, for your sweet sweet response!
Lakshya has "turned towards" Ragini right now. Let's see what happens. 😳

Swasan - yes, really truly united - and poor Lakshya is feeling a little complicated about the development - very natural, like you say.

Thanks so so much mmmuah. 🤗


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gayu6

NIce update bubble. So she cant live without her loved ones. Loved the entire update. Continue soon


Swara is an emotional girl, and once she loves, she does so with all her heart 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve


Really Bubble - and I had written an OS in which SwaSan are together whichever reality / world / universe you picked😆
Guess each to their own😉


Hahaha 😆😆

Hey did you have this same signature before? 😲 - I just noticed it.

About many verses, sigh - yes, I have many mental verses. 😆 Swasan is a strong one and I like it a lot. Also it gets a lot of romantic input from what's happening in the serial, of course.

SwaLak - I liked them very much in the beginning - cute and kiddish - so I can imagine a sweet little story of young love around them

I even have feels for SanRag - because I thought they had cracking chemistry in the beginning when he pretends to be mad - and they can both be badass

Sooo, yeah I guess I swing every way 😳😲 😆😆 - just give me two people 😛
Edited by soapbubble - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Bubble sweetheart...🤗 🤗

Like I mentioned in my short comment prior, I just loved the last 3 chapters. Of course, they were predominantly centered on SwaSan 😉, but apart from that, it was the finesse and subtlety with which you handled the equation between them, the progress in their relationship to complete intimacy that really struck me.

Chapter 47 showed the final consummation of their mutual passion, and you ensured it wasn't in the least bit risque. You made it so exquisite, such an integral part of their lovely relationship. Loved how Sanskaar is attuned perfectly to Swara's nervousness, and paces their drift towards their ultimate union in such an understanding, careful manner. Liked all the descriptions about how he knew when to back off, and when to be right next to her, giving and demanding her full attention. And how on a rare occasion, he would soothe her worries with comforting murmurs, but insist that she give way that once to him; but usually he would always rein himself in even before she was willing to let go of him. 😉 😳 Intelligent man! Knows how to make it piquant, indeed!

Oh, a few references here which I so loved, I was grinning so much to myself. The "Thoda dard hoga" reminded me of Arnav & Khushi from Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon...😉

And the lovely maang filling scene from the morning after, was of course, reminiscent of SwaSan's sindhoor marriage---one of my very favorite scenes form the serial, indeed, my favorite moment of any TV show or film, come to that!

Chap 48, loved the banter between the younger set at the breakfast (brunch? 😛) table. Oh dear...Sanskaar certainly was embarrassed at being called Shona. 😆 😆. Probably Swara called him that in their--ahem ahem---provate moments together? 😳 The priceless bit was Lakshya asking him---"Can you pass me the salt...Shona?" 🤣 🤣

I must tell you, the way Sanskaar tells Swara he has to leave to Japan, and the way she reacts, were true gold. Exactly how a newly married couple (in this case, SwaSan certainly are newly married in a sense)...reacts to a temporary separation. Its logically only 4 days, but would seem like 40! Every moment apart is a sheer burden. Swara's plaintive "Main jiyoongi kaise" was again evocative of Sanskaar's heartfelt dialogue (which he tried to cloak as mischievous raillery) of the Diwali episode.

And again, in chap 49, so many little tidbits which rang so true. Swara and Sanskaar's faces, drawn in misery at their impending separation...His abruptly asking his mother to take care of his wife...Sujata's histronic reactions, amusing as usual! 😃

Swara got so emotional at being parted from Sanskaar, that she started running a temperature. For me, both Ragini's and Lakshya's reactions stood out here, as did Swara's own. Swara did not want Sanskaar to be told about her illness, for fear that his oncentration and focus during his trip would waver. She was right, actually, his heart would never have been on the meetings had he heard the news.

Ragini---actuallt felt concerned about Swara, and recounted to the family what she knew about her sister's predilection to get emotionally beaten down and show the physical aftermaths in terms of a raging fever! Chalo, at least she has started showing some empathy and concern for Swara; better late than never!!

And Lakshya---continues his "growing up" process. It is possibly a slightly bittersweet moment for him, he does have a wry grin on his face reflecting on how devoted Swara and Sanskaar are to each other now. There is that tiny bit of him that does wonder, how would things have been had he chosen to trust the person he claimed to love? But, as you so wonderfully explained, he also recalls what he saw his brother do after he himself refused to believe Swara. How he noticed Sanskaar focusing all his resolute determination, his potent adoration to be there for Swara when she needed him.

That was a lovely line there, BTW. That he was never obstinate or obdurate, but just quietly determined, always supporting Swara and doing whatever it took, showing immense patience, to win her over.

Waiting for Chap 50, dear! Woo Hoo! A half century of chapters huh? That truly is a Grand achievement!


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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks so much Viji!
Have responded inline 😳

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Bubble sweetheart...🤗 🤗

Like I mentioned in my short comment prior, I just loved the last 3 chapters. Of course, they were predominantly centered on SwaSan 😉, but apart from that, it was the finesse and subtlety with which you handled the equation between them, the progress in their relationship to complete intimacy that really struck me.

Chapter 47 showed the final consummation of their mutual passion, and you ensured it wasn't in the least bit risque. You made it so exquisite, such an integral part of their lovely relationship. Loved how Sanskaar is attuned perfectly to Swara's nervousness, and paces their drift towards their ultimate union in such an understanding, careful manner. Liked all the descriptions about how he knew when to back off, and when to be right next to her, giving and demanding her full attention. And how on a rare occasion, he would soothe her worries with comforting murmurs, but insist that she give way that once to him; but usually he would always rein himself in even before she was willing to let go of him. 😉 😳 Intelligent man! Knows how to make it piquant, indeed!

Oh yes, intelligent, clever man! Patient and never in doubt of the outcome but for a few desperate days in the middle when he thought she would leave the house.

Oh, a few references here which I so loved, I was grinning so much to myself. The "Thoda dard hoga" reminded me of Arnav & Khushi from Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon...😉

Hahah, trust you to spot that. I was chuckling to myself as I used ASR's line here - after all THIS was the kind of occasion THAT scene hinted at... 😆😆😆


And the lovely maang filling scene from the morning after, was of course, reminiscent of SwaSan's sindhoor marriage---one of my very favorite scenes form the serial, indeed, my favorite moment of any TV show or film, come to that!

Yes, mine too - such great intensity among a plethora of conflicted feelings!

Chap 48, loved the banter between the younger set at the breakfast (brunch? 😛) table. Oh dear...Sanskaar certainly was embarrassed at being called Shona. 😆 😆. Probably Swara called him that in their--ahem ahem---provate moments together? 😳 The priceless bit was Lakshya asking him---"Can you pass me the salt...Shona?" 🤣 🤣

I must tell you, the way Sanskaar tells Swara he has to leave to Japan, and the way she reacts, were true gold. Exactly how a newly married couple (in this case, SwaSan certainly are newly married in a sense)...reacts to a temporary separation. Its logically only 4 days, but would seem like 40! Every moment apart is a sheer burden. Swara's plaintive "Main jiyoongi kaise" was again evocative of Sanskaar's heartfelt dialogue (which he tried to cloak as mischievous raillery) of the Diwali episode.

Again, yes, I was trying to echo that moment. He said it as a joke but did mean it kinda... why else would be almost plead to be allowed to go with her... I thought that was so sweet.

For Swara to say it, and almost mean it... because she's made herself ill with bereavement... made sense. Now she matches him in love and longing.

And again, in chap 49, so many little tidbits which rang so true. Swara and Sanskaar's faces, drawn in misery at their impending separation...His abruptly asking his mother to take care of his wife...Sujata's histronic reactions, amusing as usual! 😃

Swara got so emotional at being parted from Sanskaar, that she started running a temperature. For me, both Ragini's and Lakshya's reactions stood out here, as did Swara's own. Swara did not want Sanskaar to be told about her illness, for fear that his oncentration and focus during his trip would waver. She was right, actually, his heart would never have been on the meetings had he heard the news.

Ragini---actuallt felt concerned about Swara, and recounted to the family what she knew about her sister's predilection to get emotionally beaten down and show the physical aftermaths in terms of a raging fever! Chalo, at least she has started showing some empathy and concern for Swara; better late than never!!

And Lakshya---continues his "growing up" process. It is possibly a slightly bittersweet moment for him, he does have a wry grin on his face reflecting on how devoted Swara and Sanskaar are to each other now. There is that tiny bit of him that does wonder, how would things have been had he chosen to trust the person he claimed to love? But, as you so wonderfully explained, he also recalls what he saw his brother do after he himself refused to believe Swara. How he noticed Sanskaar focusing all his resolute determination, his potent adoration to be there for Swara when she needed him.

I felt for Lakshya at this point - his was the least of the misdemeanors against Swara on a human scale, but he got the worst of the punishment.
Of course, his offence as a lover was huge: lack of loyalty and trust - and he HAS paid the price. And taken it with grace. Now if his heart knows a few pangs... then they are his secret to bear. 😕😭😭

That was a lovely line there, BTW. That he was never obstinate or obdurate, but just quietly determined, always supporting Swara and doing whatever it took, showing immense patience, to win her over.

Waiting for Chap 50, dear! Woo Hoo! A half century of chapters huh? That truly is a Grand achievement!

Thanks 😳- what a long story I'm writing *facepalm* - but it has a mind of its own.

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