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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Absolutely fabulous Bubble. Loved all the 3 chapters 47 to 49. Have some pressing commitments to attend to this weekend, so shall un res for a longer comment on Monday.

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Viji

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Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Aww.!! Swara gets fever because she has to stay without Sanskaar!
How sweet<3
Lakshya has really changed. I really like this Laksh.
Here, all the characters are quite adorable!
Loved this one too Bubble

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

Dear Bubble,

Simply loved this update- and surprisingly in this update - it was lakshya who gets my admiration - the ending was beautiful - " As he felt the soft grass under his bare feet, there was a small part of Lakshya that felt regret for the things that might have been... but on the whole, he called down blessing on his brother and the girl he had once loved."

He is truly on the road to redemption.

Nyna

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sudhi03

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Awesome update

Gosh I'm looking loving this laksh

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soapbubble

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: dewcute
Nice update..

Swasan is so much in love..

Can I get some ragya?plz..plz with a cherry on top????

Thanks 😳

Coming up... but it's not milk and honey 😕

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soapbubble

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: sneharay
Awesome updates.. 👏

Thank you!

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soapbubble

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: simsen23
bubble
wow i like the way you potray the emotions
she was missing him..(fever due to separation)
so much in love
sujju's line char din ka viyog...lol
i hope she will be fine
ragini is so positive now a days
ya laksh was right
sanskar has fallen in love with swara that day
lakshay had a little feelings for swara..which is genuin
but now he has accepted his mistake and happy for her and sanskar
thats awesome
update soon
love
simi 😊

Thanks Simi!

Haha - Sujju has put it right - Swara is suffering from viyog 😃😆😉

Ragini is undergoing a lot - in her mind and heart. It's time for Laksh to move on from Swara as well

Thanks a lot!!

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#168

Hi bubble 😊

Have been following FF for a quite a while and I must say I really like the way you are handling ragya and swasan, They act like such a matured characters in your FF esp Lakshya and ragini andthe the grdaul progreesion of swara and sankaar till their becoming one in every sense was brilliant and beautifully portrayed and I love how you pendown the intimacy in such a subtle and elegant manner👏👏👏

Lovely FF ..Waiting for next parts

Lucky

PS; BTW were u a part of Sapno se Bhare Naina Forum ,DakshNa, A vague recollection ..

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950660

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Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Wow superb updates..

M sorry for commenting so late..

But loved every single part !!

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maaneetfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#170

Aww Swara fell ill Sanskaar Se bichharne ke ghum Se?? Sujju as usual her belligerent and unthinking self but so glad Ragini is all set to take care of Swara now and knws the exact reason she is unwell...

Poor laksh..thinking of what could hv been but so glad tht he put things in perspective and knows tht things have gone ahead of his hands and he has also accepted his own fate willingly and will soon realize his own feelings for Ragini too

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