SwaSan SS- Dire Consequences. Part Eleven Updated on Page 28 (24/03)

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Shaheenq

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Interesting..

Thank You. 😊

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Shaheenq

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: leku
Well written...
Amazing

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nida

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

read chap4 and 5 together

cant believe what just sanskar did only for a mere bet😡

come on is a bet with his so called friend that much important??? he even has a sister right?? how can he do this to someone

i thought he just tried to...but no he just 😡😡

chap 5

NO NO NO why arent they punishing him this is not the solution of it to get them married...wahh??

he should be arrested...he should be guilty of what he did... he should right the wrong he did... then somehow he can be forgiven... somehow or maybe...

cuz HE COMMITTED A CRIME not a mistake

really didnt like how elders are taking this situation lightly i mean comeon ur son commits a crime how would they react if the same would have happen to uttara???

umm just my opinion on the situation...otherwise the update was nice😊

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aamias

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: ishanita
so true asmita
we sometimes unknowingly encourage such things
even i wanted to say to the writer that me too can't see d ravan as ram now.
for this story no more swasan for me
even I asked her initially was it like ek hasina thi . she told me its diff so I kept on reading .in this age where durgas are ready to punish shorya any how , how can they now marry and HV a love story ahead. can't digest
even hate dprasad ideology to d core...he is dam so so selfish...
@writer HV no offence to u but m presenting my views...

the thing is that even if he changes and become GOD that rape is a rape or trying to rape is the most heinous crime . how could any human think of marrying then changing that person . ofcourse it is our traditional thought that when boy does wrong marry him if then also he is doing infidelity produce children at some point of time he will stop. Ofcourse boys need pleasure for that they did it and they fall in love with that girl all sins redeemed. then ofcourse delhi rapist r need to be just married up . I am so happy we dont need any more fast track courts just marriage registers. Nobody want to marry a victim? so we marry her with the rapist what a solution dearie

I have no offence against writer I am quite glad that she is writing and we cant close our eyes on every aspect bcoz it just gave me away to vent my thoughts. Even Sanskar dies saving Swara or Swara leaves him I will always say rape is rape or even trying to rape is also a blot on womanhood.

u r very good writer just keep writing and u r really talented.

Edited by aamias - 9 years ago

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Shaheenq

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Note: Recently I have come across some people who have (I'm sure in a positive way) have put forward their comments on the SS. Honestly, no offence to any of them but this is my first SS and I had no clue that it would all result this way. My apologies to everybody. I wish I could change the storyline but Now it is not possible. So to all the people who have a problem with this SS I would request you to pls PM me your views and suggest any possible suggestions you might have. Even if you want me to discontinue I will be ready to do it. So please PM me your views. 😊

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Vini224

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Eagerly waiting to see how the story progresses.

Edited by Vini224 - 9 years ago

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svg98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Hey your story line is great..
Please do continue it..
Yes Sanskar has done bad..but i know soon he will realize his mistakes..
And make it up to Swara..
Do continue..

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Shaheenq

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: svg98
Hey your story line is great..
Please do continue it..
Yes Sanskar has done bad..but i know soon he will realize his mistakes..
And make it up to Swara..
Do continue..

I sure will continue it. Thank You 😊

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Hi dear...loving ur story...

Its fic story... i knw sanskaar is bad but its just his character...if he ask for forgiveness ...swara will decide if she wants to punish him or forgive him... i knw rape is a serious crime...but its upto swara to decide what she will do... i consider it as a story...ignoring facts regarding rape...

I like ur story...do continue... i want sanskaar to redeem himself... feel guinuine guilt...

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Shaheenq

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Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Hi dear...loving ur story...
Its fic story... i knw sanskaar is bad but its just his character...if he ask for forgiveness ...swara will decide if she wants to punish him or forgive him... i knw rape is a serious crime...but its upto swara to decide what she will do... i consider it as a story...ignoring facts regarding rape...

I like ur story...do continue... i want sanskaar to redeem himself... feel guinuine guilt...

Sanskar will surely redeem himself thats for sure, Swara will eventually make him realize. I ll update asap.