SwaSan SS- Dire Consequences. Part Eleven Updated on Page 28 (24/03) - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Waiting for the redemption track of sanskar.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Waiting for the redemption track of sanskar.



It ll take some time but yes Sanskar will redeem.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Do continue..waiting for ur next update 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneharay

Do continue..waiting for ur next update 😊



I ll update by Tonight.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I ll update by Tonight for sure.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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no you should definitely cont. it but just make sanskar realize his mistake
make him to literally BEG to swara
make him suffer really badly and heavily then after serious punishment can only be forgiven and to forgive or not should only be in swara's hand only

p.s only my opinion 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mystery75

no you should definitely cont. it but just make sanskar realize his mistake

make him to literally BEG to swara
make him suffer really badly and heavily then after serious punishment can only be forgiven and to forgive or not should only be in swara's hand only

p.s only my opinion 😊



Yes ofcourse. I really liked your idea and I ll surely implement it. Thanks for the opinion it is something I ll surely implement. 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part Six

The Same Day: Swara's Room
Swara lay on the Bed crying her heart out. She and her Family had returned from MM after the great Durga Prasad Maheshwari had put forward the claim of getting Her and Sanskar Married. Marrying Sanskar...the one who had done so wrong to her. Yet, her Dadi had taken the Maheshwaris side and throughout the journey to her Home she had continued taunting Swara and saying that due to Swara no good guy would even Marry Ragini. Dadi continued scolding Her Baba for giving Swara so much Freedom to go out at Night, Party with Friends and so on. She clearly stated that if Swara would be the way Ragini was i.e Simple and Shy away from all these things then nothing like this would happen to her. When Ragini had tried to defend her sister, Dadi had clearly said that now No One Would Marry Ragini Too thanks to Swara if She refuses to marry Sanskar which according to her was the only way out of this. Swara lay on her Bed remembering the past night incident, the confrontation with the Maheshwaris and Dadi's taunts. If it would be about Her then she would be able to manage but when it came to Ragini she knew she couldn't handle it. Ragini was her soul sister. She couldn't let anything happen to Ragini. As She remained lost in her Thoughts, she got a call from an Unknown Number. At first, she was scared to pick it up but she eventually did. "Hel...Hello" she said her whole body shivering.

Half an Hour Later: Gadodia Hall
Swara gathered the Courage and moved towards the Hall. She could still hear her Dadi continuing her Taunts. Ragini was trying to defend Swara but in vain Dadi wasn't listening. Her Maa was crying on her Baba's shoulder. Suddenly all the sound stopped as they had seen Swara approaching. "Swaraa tum bilkul..." Ragini couldn't complete as Swara said loud enough for everyone to hear "Mein Sanskar se Shaadi Karne Ke Liye Taiyaar." It was evident that everybody was shocked her Decision. But before anybody could oppose her Decision she continued "Aur yeh mera Aakhri Faisla Hai. Please mujhe iske Baad Kuch Aur Nahi Sunna Hai." Saying this, Swara went back to her Room. While going back, she could hear her Dadi being overjoyed and telling her Baba to call The Maheshwaris and inform them. She could also hear Ragini consoling her Maa saying that what has got into Swara to accept Sanskar. Swara walked in her Room and shut the Door Tight. She sank on the Floor and started Crying thinking This is the Last Time She Would Cry because After This She Would Never Cry. She picked up her phone and replied a 'Thank You' to the person who had called her. 'My Plan Will Work' she thought and wiped her tears.

Meanwhile in Maheshwari Mansion
Sanskar was pacing up and down in his Room. He had not expected things to turn out this way. His impression of an Obedient Boy had changed completely. His Bade Papa was not talking to him. His Badi Ma was angry at him. His Father had refused to acknowledge him. Adarsh Bhaiya and Parineeta Bhabhi were disgusted by him and Adarsh Bhaiya had clearly told him to stay away from him as he couldn't handle a Brother like him. Uttara had been angry at Him saying that she had never thought her Brother would do this. Even his Best Friend, his Brother had refused to speak to him and had blamed himself for hiding Sanskar's true nature from his Papa. Laksh said that if He Had told his Papa earlier about Sanskar's actions then atleast Sanskar wouldn't do this. He had been extremely angry at Sanskar and walked away. The only person in the House who was not angry with Sanskar right now was his Mom. She had continued pampering. He was not able to understand why he was so Angry. Was he Angry at Swara for telling his Family? Or was he Angry at Himself for Doing All this just for a Bloody Bet?

Sujata entered Sanskar's Room only to find him Angrily throwing his phone away. "Woh Phone mein gussa kyu nikaal raha hai? Usne Kya Kiya?" She taunted him for his actions. "Mom please. Aap jaao yahan se. Mujhe thodi der ke liye Akele Rehnedo." He said Angrily. "Arre mein thaare waase khush khabri laayi hoon" she said and gave him the sweets she had bought with her "Swara ne Shaadi ke liye Haa Kardi Hai." She exclaimed happily. "Kyaa? Usne sach mein Haa Kardi. Par Kyu? Aur Aap itti khush kyu hai, pehle toh usse bahut taane maar rahi thi." He asked. Sujata smiled happily. "Yeh to Manne bhi samjh nahi aaya ki usne haa kaise kiya? Jab maine usse call kiya tha jab toh bahut naraaz dikh rahi thi, Usne kahaa ki woh tujhse kabhi Shaadi nahi Karegi par Pata Nahi kya hogaya Achanak Se?" She told. Sanskar was shocked by this discovery that his Mom had called Swara. "Aapne Swara ko kyu call kiya?" He questioned. "Arre tu nahi jaane hai unn logon ke jaane ke baad Bhaisa Jiji se keh rahe the ki agar Swara ne iss Shaadi se mana kar diya toh woh Tujhe khud Jail pahuncha denge. Woh toh accha hua ki maine sun liya aur Laksh se kehkar Swara ko phone lagaya aur usse kaha ki woh tujhse Shaadi karle. Par woh nahi maani aur usne phone cut kardiya. Phir pata nahi kya hua? Par jo bhi hua chalo accha hai ki Bhaisa tujhe Jail nahi Bhejenge." She completed. Sujata handed him over a Kurta Pyjama to wear Tonight as Bade Papa wanted to conduct their Engagement today and Tomorrow would be there Shaadi. Saying this Sujata left. Sanskar stood shocked. So Swara had agreed to Marry Him for Reasons unknown. Probably because of Family Pressure. He had seen how her Dadi had reacted when his Bade Papa had suggested their Marriage. But whatever it was, he had to meet Swara once. He had to find out what was going in her Mind. As much as he knew Swara, she would do something than sit and cry. She was a Fighter nobody knew it better than him. But he thought that his actions would make her loose her self-confidence and she would stay away from ways of getting her Revenge. Hence, it was important for him to meet Swara to know whether she was Traumatized by the incident or whether she was in a Mood of giving him a Trauma. Once his doubts were cleared then he could Marry Her. He had only today to find out. If she was still scared then it meant he could Marry Her but if she was in a Revenge Mood then there was no way he was Marrying Her because as far as he knows 'A girl like Swara can be the best person in the world if u treat her Well, but she can also be a Devil and take your Life.' It was time for him to find out what Swara was after this Incident.

Precap: SwaSan confrontation and Engagement.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's really interesting. I hate this Sanskar. He should suffer a lot for what he did to Swara. Please please please make him suffer. There is a hint of guilt in him but I don't think that's enough. He should first realize what he did and then suffer like hell. Please continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Awesome story 👏
Pls pm me

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