DARK KNIGHT- A SwaSan FF- T2- DELETED- AN- PG 1

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: sneharay
Fabulous.. 👏

Thanks a lot Sneha 😃

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: simsen23
shruti.. 🤗
update after a long time..
ya this chapter was indeed beautiful
first of all ragini's insecurities,feelings,guilt and unhappiness was well described.
she has everything,but due to her karma she cant enjoy..
laksh's genuin behaviour is making her more restless..
then swasan part..perfectly shown
swasan are bonded in a frienship.
finally swara is accepting him and she is also falling for him
sanskar and swara ,two broken souls are trying to keep away the bitter memories from each oyher..
then the way sanskar is feeling for her..well he had fallen for her a long ago...
i am excited for further story
keep writting
love,
simi 😊

Hey Simi 🤗

Haha- you found the 5 day wait very long?! 😲😆 Trust me, if I didn't have work, I would update every day:)

Really happy you loved this chapter, am so pleased to read your kind comments. Exactly re Ragini- now she has what she thought she wanted, she realises it comes at a price- the price she paid with her soul and now regrets and yes, Lakshya is being genuine in his way and that makes it worse for her. SwaSan are indeed drawing towards each other, both helpless and unable to really resist. I hope you will like the next part, I have something exciting planned! 😉

Love,

Shru xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#203

I am so sorry to those I haven't yet replied to. Am conscious of that, I just have so many tasks as I was up till 4 am and woke again before 9 am 😆 Am reading every comment and feeling blessed so please keep them coming and I'll respond to each person as soon as I can xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: Red.orchid
Superb 👍🏼

Thank you so much Sadhana 🤗

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: Sampriti.
Amazing update..👏
So well written and Swasan part was beautiful ...😳
I really enjoyed reading it..😳
Loved all chapters ...
will wait for the next update 😊
Thanks for the PM

Thank you so much Pubi 🤗

Glad you are continuing to enjoy this story, will PM on the next update too 😃

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: amimus
Omggg what an update. I am spell bound by the interactions between Swara n Sanskaar. Ufff poor Sanskaar unable to control his desire well don't be him if school a beautiful princess is in front which man will be able to control.
Waiting eagerly for the next update.

Dear Amina 🤗

Thank you so much for the lovely words and kind appreciation. Poor Sanskaar- as you say, what can he do with such a Princess around him eh?! 😉😆

Love,

S x

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#207

Shuru dear... awesome update...cant tell u how desperately waiting for this update...finally read it...ahhh im at peace now...😆😉😊

Coming to chapter 10 ...ragini how convincingly u made us hate her...nice...nightmares haunting her...serves her right... but i love her too...bcoz of her swara will get her prince charming sanskaaarrr...😳😳

Liked her n lakshya convo...n her fears...👏

Coming to the bestest part...MY SWASAN...❤️

I just love their slowly blooming friendship...their confusion...gazes...hesitation..smiles...OMG... im getting addicted...muahhh😳🤗

Thank u for update n pm...love u...

Keep writing...waiting for next...

1thing can i request something...can u give us a scene where swasan encounter bandits...n they demand swara...for safe release of sanskaar...but our hero..fake accept their demand...swara panics...but in minutes kill each one of them...plzzz☺️

Edited by krishuuuuuuuuuu - 9 years ago