SwaSan OS:: 'Air'

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akanksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Hey viji

Brilliant os I loved it

Especially sanskar's concern for swara was so touching

Lakshay's realisation and redemption was handled fantastically

Ragini as usual was irritating and evil

The serial itself is going good now because of all the Swasan moments cvs are giving us and this os was cherry on the cake

Thanks a lot for the pm

Love your work pls continue this

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: khushi_shankar
Really nice! Loved it!

Thanks so much. 🤗 🤗 Very happy that you loved this OS.

Cheers

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: sarathy321
Awesome
beautiful

Hey Arathy. ..🤗 🤗

Thanks a ton for your warm words. Very glad you loved this piece.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: nisha_hc_bs_dd
Awesome! !

Hey Nisha...🤗 🤗

Thanks so very much dear. Very happy that you loved this OS.

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SIMI

@simsen23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Thank you viji for liking my DP.its anna from frozen.i like both princess elsa(ice queen) and Anna.but Anna is my favorite,the naughty one like me 😆 ...Oh You have a daughter thats so cute.Forward my love to her 😊
ya viji the air sign characteristic suits lakshay's personality so much ...coz i m also a geminine(i guess its an air sign too)..
Lovely chapter that depicts the true meaning of every relationship..and thanx for liking the quote
love
simi 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik
Beautiful os.. I seriously felt for laksh in this one😲😛.. Loved Swara's pull towards sanskar when she was drifting off into a near-comatose state.. Wonderfully descriptive.. Also the main characterisation of laksh as the element air, and attributing it to his chaos-filled life was also beautifully conceptualized... Now he'll have a better, happier life, hopefully purposeful too.. And the sanlak moment, those 3 hours⭐️👏 Senti kar diya yaar tumne toh😛 Loved it😊

Hey Akshata. ..🤗 🤗

Thanks so very much dear, for those very warm words of appreciation. I was so very happy to hear that you loved this OS.

Glad that you liked the portrayal of SwaSan and their bond, Sanskaar's speaking to Swara when she was unconscious, and the way she is moored to her life, her sentience because of the intense love they have for each other.

So happy you liked the character portrayal of Lakshya, related to Air as the element in his zodiac. He does seem like an Air sign, na? I agree with you, I hope he will now find a way out of the chaos and indecisiveness that has plagued him so far, and can move forward to a happy, purposeful life.

I wanted to show Lakshya being there for Sanskaar, giving him a strong shoulder of support when he needed it the most. Just as Sanskaar has been there for Lakshya in the past, throughout their childhood and teen years.

Thanks again. 🤗

Cheers

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: sharif_lafungi
you are sheer brilliance...
the way u pen down ur words...it has such a spellbounding captivating affect on readers that they will read anything u will give them...at least...me will read anything of yours...
many ppl here will appreciate the is but I seriously appreciate the skills u hv in u...
godbless...

Thanks from the bottom of my heart, for your very lovely comment. Your warm words of appreciation really made my day. 🤗 🤗 🤗

Your comment made me feel both deeply touched and humbled at the same time. 😳 So very happy to hear that you loved this OS and my writing style.

Hope I can continue to live up to your expectations and write more.

Loads of Love

Viji