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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Awesome update Viji
Loved it
The elements series is one of my favorite writings by you
Sorry no time for long comments
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
What a wonderful OS!!

Thanks for writing another OS on Swasan..

Really liked it!

The way Lakshya supports Sanskaar and understands that his bhai needs him the most now.. I wish that they show such a scene between our SanLak in the show too...

I hate ragini so so much and her Urvashi Maasi too..
Sometimes I really feel that Ragini should be punished for whatever she did from the beginning to everyone, Swara, Lucky, her parents and everyone else she has hurt..

The last moments between SwaSan was ❤️
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
😃 What a divinely beautiful snapshot of Swasan amd Lakshya you have woven together, Viji ! A biiig hug for this one..especially at a time when goodness and sanity are so very much needed in an increasingly dark (and mind-numbing/dumbing) show.
Fell in love ❤️ with Swasan again at the end of that delicious reunion of our golden couple!😃 I couldnt understand how the CVs missed building up the maanjha-strangle incident into the legit fear and angst Sanskaar would have felt at seeing Swara nearly dying..and you are an absolute sweetheart for giving is that scene here..🤗

Loved too the 😳"blazingly in love" 😳 reference..it describes their total delight in one another perfectly !

And while I am warming up to the maturing Lakshya we are getting to see on Tv, your Lakshya here made my heart go out to him..This Lakahya is worthy of respect - for realizing he has lost Swara to a better man, and dealing with it with a late but strong maturity. And for having the gumption to try and turn the tables on his evil wife😡.

But most of all for recognizing, respecting and even more significantly, protecting the deep love of Swasan!

Reading your stories reminds me of my delight in opening up birthday and XMas goodies..they tantalize and tease and promise so much ! And they more tham live up to their promise ..you should see the delight I feel when I first see them in the post and the relish with which i savour them !😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
vijji thanks for the awesome piece of writing. tight hug to u my girl🤗
i loved the way u explained the connection of AIR with laksh kundli. that perfectly describes his character.
the interaction between swasan after swara was injured just brought tears in my eyes. i so loved it. it was so simple clear yet passionate and loving.
i always had a soft corner for laksh even when he hated swara as i always thought what his reaction will be when he will get to know that he lost his love because of his foolishness but cv's disappointed me with his reaction and obsession for swara though for a short period. i really started to feel pity for him and liked him after he clearly said that he is freeing swara. and today with ur piece of writing i have fallen in love with him.
seriously im liking this laksh and the one in the show too as he is now clear and clever in what he is doing. in this os i loved the way he hid his anger in him and gave an answer to ragini making her shut her mouth.
i loved the way u described his happiness seeing swara and sanskaar together and also the way he stood beside sanskaar when he was in need. i can relate this laksh to the one onscreen now as he is shown matured and real when it comes to swara and sanskaar.

this is really surprise from u as u always made laksh a grey shaded or a much more dark shaded character in ur earlier works but i loved to read this new laksh for a change.

keep writing more.. as usual i love with ur writing and waiting for a brand new one..

with love
rithika

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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Viji...😊

Air is a Fascinating Element, your description of Laksh and Air is spot on... I liked your Laksh... He was a true brother here...

I used to like Ragini's character but they have killed her... I don't know what to feel about her anymore...

SwaSan, watching them through the eyes of Laksh was superb. Sanskar vulnerable, Swara waking up to his words... your words were beautiful👏

Loved the OS

Love

Latha

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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Hi Viji🤗,


Awesome OS dear, Air perfectly suits Lakshyaji . I certainly was very disappointed after monday episode, but this OS makes up for it. loved how you made the kite sequence unravel instead of how they did it on the show.


Lakshyaji realisation of his bhai and swara love was good, i like that he could genuinely move on from swara . Not follow on his wife foot steps of pehla pyaar.


Thanks for the PM dear, i have yet to read your other elements, will do soon .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey viji... u r awesome as always
first of all thanks to u for writing this...cvs really need to roam around this forum fr ideas which they lacks...
swasan convo was too emotional and touchy.
i loved it the most...
keep it up.
a tight hug to u fr writing dis.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey viji
im speechless
this was awesome
outstanding
i so wanted to read sanskaar's pain agony to d thoight of loosing swara
bt cvs didn't give that
bt here i can feel that pain
n laksh i actually read this by his pov
simply brilliant os 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
That was such a lovely read...👏
Absolutely brilliant... how you used 'air' to depict his fickle mind and impulsive nature, but comes into his own and becomes that calm and collected support that his brother needs.

Loved how you've depicted the kite incident and what Sanskaar might have felt in a more grave scenario. The emotions all so well fleshed out, from the pain, the terror and despair to finally relief and joy.

Back to Lakshya...If you ever think of exploring how the gale force will launch itself on Ragini, I'd love to read how he gives her a lot to worry about :)

-Priya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Viji writes about Lakshya!!! *faints*
Heheheh

But seriously, this was so well done! Loved the elemental descriptions - how a little balance in his natal chart would have helped Lakshya...

And of course, his slow but sure way to acceptance and even celebration of Sanskaar and Swara's relationship!

This made for lovely reading this morning :)
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