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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Hi Friends...🤗

Woke up to some lovely comments earlier today morning. 🤗Will start replying individually to all in just a while.

So happy to hear you loved this OS. 🤗

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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_InDreamWorld_

@_InDreamWorld_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Superb os👏

Thanks for pm😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Pinkylibbi
Res.
Reading.

UnRes.

Viji.. 🤗
Sabse pehle, Give me a Tight Hug.😉.
Here you go. Mine🤗

Just Loved this Awesomeness😳. After the Ridiculous mistake of the CVs in the Monday's episode, I so wanted to read something like this. Sanskar,s pain, his ineer emotions just stilling him. A beautiful Conversation between SwaSan, where they realise that they can't simply BREATHE without each other, as their HEARTS LIE WITH EACH OTHER. God, I so wanted to read something like that. And Here you are, with this Brilliant piece of yours.🤗

Can I say I just LOVED Lakshya here.😳 The Caring Brother 👏and finally a MATURE MAN. 👏And the SENSIBLE one also. I just love the way he stood up with his Brother when he needed HIM the MOST. Truly. Sanskar's brother. I really wish CVs explore more of the SanLak bond just like you did. He could also turn out to be a good Character in the show, if CVs wish to😕. Just like his BROTHER.😛

And Ragini, I LOATHE her.🤢😡 Seriously. No Comments on that unimaginable disgusting character.
I really don't want to spoil your Best Work by nikalyfying my bhadas about that Lady.

Yes Viji. Of all Your Brilliant Works, this would hold a very SPECIAL place for me and I would call it to be the BEST of yours till date.😳👏 That's completely my view. Maybe, you just stole my thoughts and beautifully penned it down just as I wished.😉 I think we have a telepathic connection dear.😆

Anyway, AWESOME it was. Please continue your Previous OS on SwaSan Engagement. I BEG you.😭

Hey Swathi darling 🤗 🤗

Thanks so very much for those lovely words sweetie. 🤗 SO very happy to hear that you loved this OS so much.

I really wanted to show the intense adoration between SwaSan, the way Sanskaar's heart and breath would almost stop, seeing Swara in such pain, and at the very doors of death, perhaps. And Swara, of course, being moored to this world, to consciousness, by her own very intense love for Sanskaar.

I normally don't care too much for Lakshya. 😛 He's been the antagonist in most of my works so far, definitely gray shaded. But of late, he's won a certain measure or respect, hasn't he, by learning from his mistakes? He's making sincere efforts to move on, to be more mature, and to see Sanskaar's and Swara's point of view. He's accepted, finally, that they belong together. I wanted to show him in positive light here, as someone who supports his Bhai & Bhabhi.

I seriously can't see any reason why Ragini is behaving this way anymore. Would have liked to see either a genuine, sensible redemption track for her sometime back, or to see her as a formidable, cunning antagonist. Right now, the petty and senseless way she's behaving, makes me completely puzzled. I just can't see how they can redeem her now, she's gone too far down the vile and vindictive path, to really turn around now. Well, let's see what happens in the serial. 😊

Thanks once again for those very warm words of appreciation, dear. It made my day! 🤗

I will certainly think of continuing my SwaSan Engagement OS, into a series covering their tilak, haldi, mehndi ceremonies and then the shadi. Just waiting to get some more concrete ideas. 😊

Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: --Anna--
Viji,
Surprise Surprise! I am going to be un-reserving on time 😆

What a wonderful OS Viji. When I started reading it, going back in time, I did not think that the OS was going to be about Laksh or Lakshman, as I so fondly like to call him now. 😳 Absolutely loved how you explained the Pandit's discomfort while he worked on Laksh's Kundali. I could totally see - what was rattling him given the show has told us so much about Laksh as a person. 😆

What I loved about this OS was how you explained Laksh's realisation about Swara and her love for Sanskaar and how he finally understood that Swara shall always remain a loving part of his memory if nothing more. Also, the relationship between Sanskaar and Laksh and how Laksh feels about Sanskaar and Swara was SO beautiful! I missed that in the show - even though I like a reformed Laksh SO much more! 😳

Ahhh! You picked the kite-flying festival and the accident from it! Absolutely perfect. Sanskaar's concern and Swara's hurt and that moment in the ambulance and in the hospital where Sanskaar continues to talk and Laksh continues to listen - The bond between the brothers - So beautiful! 👏👏👏 Also loved how Laksh gave Swara Sanskaar the privacy in the room and a chance to heal from the trauma of a possible separation. Needless to say absolutely loved the Swara Sanskaar scene. 😳

Ragini Ragini Ragini, I cannot even begin to tell you the hatred I feel for her! In the show and in your OS too! I just dont have enough words to tell you how strongly I despise her. Is there going to be a second part of this OS? Because I would like to read your version of how Laksh would deal with Ragini.

Lovely OS Viji! Thank you so much for such a nice read and giving us an insight into Laksh's character and the reason behind his change in behaviour.

Love
Anna

Hey Anna my dear...🤗 🤗

Dozens of jhappis to you for this lovely comment. 🤗 I remember you had given me such lovely feedback for my Elements OS quartet, so I am overjoyed that you loved this one, too. Means a lot!

Yup, I really wanted to show how Sanskaar would feel such raw terror at the thought of potentially losing Swara. His heart beats, his very breath would probably stop for several moments. And Swara too, would be anchored back to the world, would fight to return to consciousness because of the intense adoration she feels for her Sanskaar, the Prince of her dreams! 😳

You know how I normally view Lakshya 😆. He's been the antagonist in most of my earlier works. But like you, I've been appreciating the growth and maturity he's shown in his character of late. He's really making sincere efforts to see things from Swara and Sanskaar's point of view, isn't it? He's grown to realize, gradually, what they mean to each other; and that Swara and himself were never really meant for each other. I would like to think that he will always have Swara as a friend, as a pleasant memory in his heart; just as he would always have Sanskaar, his Bhai, as a close, concerned and protective brother.

And its time he stepped up to the plate and really stood by them, I thought. Am so very happy that you liked the San-Lak interaction at the hospital, with Lakshya being a solid wall of support for Sanskaar; just as Sanskaar had been there for him so many times in the past. And he has completely accepted the SwaSan equation, which is why he gives them those precious, much needed minutes together, before informing the families of Swara's return to consciousness.

Ragini---I am really aghast at her character trajectory as well. Frankly, I would have liked to see a realistic redemption track for her some time back. Possibly a real memory loss track, or a change of heart after the kidnapping episode. But they've degraded her character into such petty spite, such a sadistic vindictiveness, I really can't see how they bring her back to the light now. Well, let's see what they do in the serial. 😊 I will certainly think of a sequel Anna, don't have a concrete idea for that right now though.

I had started work on an AU portrayal for SwaSan--a 3 part OS series. That might come next, and then I hope to do an OS series on their tilak, haldi, mehndi, shadi etc. Still in the conceptualization stage though, haven't fleshed out the plots.

Thanks again, Anna. Today has been a wonderful day so far, with the 100th SwaSan AT celebrations (I loved your OS drabble/ Ficlet there, BTW, had commented on the thread and PMed you about that), and with amazingly warm comments like yours, on my OS. 🤗

Loads n Loads of Love,

----Viji

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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Shobha

@ssroomani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Great Viji! Thank you so much for this one...a fitting finale to the 5 elements! 🤗 "Air" suits Lakshya well...

I loved it...and am glad you used the Makar Sankranti incident in it! The context suits the present Lakshya and it filled the gap I felt on the show when they didn't show much concern for Swara's accident.

Have yet to read your other stories...time is a problem right now. I have kept all the PMs...hope to get to them soon!

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Anusha

@Anusha62

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

one more superb os..likd laksh here..aftr watchng monday episode so much disappointment frm sanskar's side bt da way you showd sanskar scare for swara's life loved it amazing..brilliant writting skillz do write more stories..

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: manasie23
Viji🤗
You know what sometimes you make more of my dreams come true on SwaSan than the cv's... I soo wanted to see a worried and scared Sanskaar... Scared for Swara's life but we got a major bjkt..
First time I loved reading Lakshya's pov too and thats something new😆
Thanks for the pm .. I absolutepy loved the whole OS and your brilliant way of presenting it... Keep writing.. Love yaa😳

Hey Manu..🤗 🤗

Today is really shaping up to be a wonderful day for me...what with the SwaSan 100th AT Celebrations, and lovely comments like yours on my OS. 🤗 Thanks a ton, sweetheart.

I completely agree with you, when that manjha incident happened, and Swara was badly hurt, Sanskaar would definitely have been distraught and terrified at the thought of losing her. I wanted to show that side of Sanskaar, going into an almost instinctive, atavistic reaction of protecting Swara. Nothing else mattered to him at that time.

Yeah, you know how I normally view Lakshya. 😆 😉 I have made him the antagonist in almost all my writing so far; but with the more mature and balanced way he's been behaving recently, I felt he has potential to redeem himself after all. To rediscover the goodness within himself, and to whole heartedly move on to find happiness with someone else. I really would like to see him supporting SwaSan in any challenges they may face from that whacko quartet of Maasi, Ragini, Dadi and Kavi. 😆

Thanks so much again for your lovely and warm words.

Loads of Love,

---Viji

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: sujoyricky
Viji 🤗
Finally a new os from you 🥳

Amazing amazing amazing 👏

Beautifully written 👏

I think in your every story speechless is a common word

Loved it.

Thanks for pm

Hey Sujay...🤗 🤗

Thanks so much for those warm words about this OS as well as for my previous writing. I am so happy you loved this so much.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: simsen23
Viji.
Superb one dear 😊
well it completes the Panchabhuta,the five elements.
Air signs characteristics are well described as lakshay's characterstic
I love the way you have described the relation between swasan and lucky.
The way sanskar was worried for his swara and swara's reply to sanskar's pain..
So beautiful..my lovely swasan.
Feeling bad for lucky who has to tolerate such a vile woman ragini.
Well he will overcome this
afterall he is the air.
😉
As a famous quote by Laura wilder
"Some old-fashion things like fresh air and sunshine are hard to beat."
😊
Keep writting.
Lots of love,
Simi

Hey Simi...🤗 🤗

First of all, I wanted to tell you that your DP is so cute. 😊 Elsa from "Frozen", na? My daughter is such a huge fan of that movie, I must have seen the DVD with her at least 6 or 7 times! 😆

Thanks so much for those lovely words of appreciation. Lakshya's nature does seem very suited to an Air Element dominated zodiac sign, na?

I really wanted to show that bond between SwaSan--how Sanskaar's heartbeats and breath would literally stop at the sight or thought of his Swara in pain, or at the thought of losing her. And Swara too, was anchored back to life, to consciousness, by her intense adoration for Sanskaar.

I wanted to show Lakshya as more mature in this OS, gradually realizing and accepting what SwaSan mean to each other; and making efforts to mend his relationship with both of them. I would love to see him supporting Sanskaar, the same way Sanskaar was supported him so many times in the past.

I loved that quote by Laura Wilder you mentioned. So very profound and true.

Thanks a ton Simi. 🤗 You made my day with this comment.

Love ya,

---Viji

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RUQAIYA10

@RUQAIYA10

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Vijiii!!!!🤗🤗

How are you? Thank you so much for the pm . I have really been missing you and your wonderful stories. So when I saw your Pm my heart just skipped a beat. Will comment as soon as I am free.😃

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